Writing Practice August 14 by trung nguyen

Writing Practice August 14 by trung nguyen https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb Min 70, max 100 words en-us 2021-08-14 10:46:33 UTC 2026-02-18 18:20:07 UTC hello@padlet.com sparkenglishmaterials https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1678960699 Emphasis lead-in for argument:

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We need to acknowledge that (emphasis lead-in) living away from parents while in university can help students become more independent. This is because when they are all alone, students will have to deal with life’s problems all by themselves, and thus gaining more experience in how to lead a life on their own. As a matter of fact, many Vietnamese students studying in the US have to work part time in order to pay for their living expenses, which allows them learn how to manage their own financial situations years before graduating from school.

We need to acknowledge that (emphasis lead-in) living away from parents while in university can help students become more independent. The point I want to emphasize is the fact that when entering college, most students are at the turning point of teenage ad adulthood, therefore being able to live by themselves can later turn them into more productive members of society. If I recall correctly, there has been many researches proving that when students go through colleges by themselves, they end up earning higher salary on average than those who stay with their parents.

]]> 2021-08-14 10:48:00 UTC https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1678960699 Minh nhatminhnguyenxuan https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1678964907 We need to acknowledge the fact that studying novels can give students a deeper insight into the history and culture of a particular phase or location. In fact, although the storyline in many novels may be fictional, the reader can still gain a good sense of the culture and customs of certain places and periods of time, and this is usually a much more entertaining way of understanding history compared to reading regular history books. For instance, if we want to research about the Medieval, instead of having to read a boring scientific report on the subject, we can learn a lot about the culture, the lifestyles of people during this period of time through novels and works of literature of Medieval’s authors.

]]> 2021-08-14 11:01:53 UTC https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1678964907 Minh nhatminhnguyenxuan https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1678966751 We need to acknowledge the fact that the studying of novels and poems among the education system these days is relatively boring. In many institutions, students are being limited through textbook analysis to make it easier for the teachers to mark exams. Therefore, students can not fully express themselves and their creativity- the principle of appreciating literature, which immediately turn it into a boring, phony subject.

]]> 2021-08-14 11:11:18 UTC https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1678966751 minh nhatminhnguyenxuan https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1678968584 We need to acknowledge the fact that the decision to have children at an older age is beneficial to the child themselves. This is because of the fact that those who are born into more prosperous and experienced parents can receive a better and more comprehensive education, and thus contribute more to society when they grow up. If I recall correctly, women that have had their children in their late twenties are more likely to possess the abilities to provide their children with entrance to top notch, exclusive and private education institutions, which arguably is better than the public schools system.

]]> 2021-08-14 11:20:24 UTC https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1678968584 Thai Duong thaiduong1645 https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1678968815 We need to admit that women who have children late can focus on their career. The basis of this is the fact that when they don't have children, women don’t need to take care of them, so women can spend all their energy on their job, to advance in their career. If I recall correctly, according to research, women who have children late often have stable job and they can be financially independent.]]> 2021-08-14 11:21:23 UTC https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1678968815 minh nhatminhnguyenxuan https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1678969792 We need to admit that going through labour at an older age is considerably more dangerous to the mother. I have read a report that concluded that having children after thirty can be extremely detrimental, even fatal to a woman’s health as it risks her to uterus cancer, diabetes, hypertension,etc.

If any complicated maternal health problem arises, the life of the whole family would be turned upside down.

]]> 2021-08-14 11:26:17 UTC https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1678969792 Phương Linh https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1678970791 We need to acknowledge that giving birth early will bring a lot of financial trouble for life after marriage. The point I want to emphasize is that when deciding to have a child, the couple will have to save money to take care of their child's future, so for families with financial difficulties, giving birth early will be more difficult . For example, most couples who do not have a stable job, are living in a rented house, have not paid off their debt... will decide to have a baby late and devote all their energy to work, save money,....]]> 2021-08-14 11:31:25 UTC https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1678970791 sua bai em Duong nhatminhnguyenxuan https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1678971534 We need to admit that having children late can help women to focus more on their career. The basis of this is the fact that without the inconvenience of nurturing a child, women can spend all their energy and valuable time on their job and advancing in their career. If I recall correctly, there is research that shows that the majority of women who have children after the age of 30 actually have a more stable employment situation and are financially independent.

]]> 2021-08-14 11:34:44 UTC https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1678971534 Quỳnh Nhi https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1678971758 We need to admit that literature is a significant subject because novels and poems have many education values in their plot . The point i want to emphasize is that when reading these novels,poems , students will get some valuable knowledge and interesting facts about their lives . For example , when i was in grade 3 i read a book which showed me that money can't buy everything , especially happiness .]]> 2021-08-14 11:35:39 UTC https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1678971758 Thai Duong thaiduong1645 https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1678972166 We need to acknowledge that literature can help students have knowledge about culture, history and society in the past. The basis of this is the fact that literature works always contain cultural values, reflect society at that time, and some works have excellent use of language, all of this is necessary for life. For example, people who read a lot of literature works usually have better use of language than people who have never read literature works.

]]> 2021-08-14 11:37:15 UTC https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1678972166 Phương mymail1677 https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1678972318 We need to acknowledge that literature works like novels and poems are hard for students to understand. This is because poems or novels are written by Chinese characters with so many genres of poetry even very long that students can't remember them all. For example, ancient Chinese poetries especially Tang poetry have many categories with a lot of poetries that students can not accessible and get bored when studying those works.]]> 2021-08-14 11:37:53 UTC https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1678972318 Quỳnh Nhi https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1678975206 There is no denying that having a baby late will help women focus more on their career . The basis of this is the fact that nowadays many women don’t want to nurture children and work at the same time because it will make them lose a lot of energy to do that . For example , my teacher who is almost 40 still doesn't want to marry and have children because she wants to focus on her class so her students can go to the right high school . ]]> 2021-08-14 11:50:23 UTC https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1678975206 sua bai em Nhi nhatminhnguyenxuan https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1678975659 We need to admit that studying literature brings a myriad of positive impacts on the education of children as reading novels and poems is an interesting way to obtain knowledge. The point i want to emphasize is that when reading these literature works , students will gain valuable information and facts about life and also relax at the same time . As a matter of fact, when I was in grade 3, i was really enjoying reading books about animals to learn about them and also wind up after schools. ]]> 2021-08-14 11:52:36 UTC https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1678975659 Phương https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1683641800 We need to admit that study literature works can make students feel excited about poems and novels. This is because students can know more about the history of their own country or other countries or about famous writers, poets, novelists with the works they have left and survived until now. For example, studying literature will make us feel more relaxed and comfortable after studying subjects that require a lot of calculation and thinking.]]> 2021-08-18 06:38:09 UTC https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1683641800 Phương https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1683890376 We need to acknowledge that the decision to have children later can affect the mother's health. Women who give birth late may be miscarriage, premature delivery, difficult labor, preeclampsia or suffer from diseases such as ovarian, cervical cancer or even depression. I have heard that at the age of 35, the quality of women's eggs has decreased, the conception rate is low so they often have a harder time giving birth than when they were young.]]> 2021-08-18 10:29:14 UTC https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1683890376 Quỳnh Nhi https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1688814399 It is worth mention that many students are getting tired and bored when they learn literature because they are not allowed to critically analyze the pieces in their own way . The explanation for this could be the fact that in many schools and universities , students are required to conform themselves to book analysis and their teacher’s ideas. For instance , some students who do the test by their own ideas, not like the book analysis or their teacher’s ideas and their ideas are still right but they receive a bad mark and be labeled as misundering the piece .

Furthermore , many students who focus on fields irrelevant to literature are wasting too much time on literature . The basis of this is the fact that other subjects like maths , chemistry , languages could be applied to almost all occupations and it has a high salary but literature couldn’t be that so many students focus on these subjects to be successful in future . For example , many students who are not interested in learning literature and in future , they are still successful because they applied for the correct jobs with the subjects that they focused on before like coding or accounting if they are good at maths and these jobs have a really high salary too .

]]> 2021-08-21 06:42:11 UTC https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1688814399 Phương Linh https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1688874990 We need to acknowledge that early birth avoids unwanted health troubles for couples. The point I want to emphasize is that most couples who choose to have a baby late need medical intervention, at the age of over 35, pregnancy for women will be very dangerous with many risks such as miscarriage, premature birth,....so giving birth early is a safe choice of couples. For example, according to science, the most appropriate time to get pregnant for most women is 20-34 years old, to avoid risks that are not good for mother and baby.]]> 2021-08-21 09:20:35 UTC https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1688874990 Phương Linh https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1688880929 We need to acknowledge that the inclusion of any work, novel, poetry, ....... into the curriculum brings positive aspects to the students. The point I want to emphasize is that the works put into teaching are all long-standing works, bearing elements of politeness, national cultural identity, ......... so students will have the opportunity to learn more deeply about the country's literature, inspiring students to study. In fact, learning and understanding these poems will help students improve their language ability and understanding of literary history.]]> 2021-08-21 09:36:20 UTC https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1688880929 Nhi +1 https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1688883775 It is worth mention that if students can analyze literature in their own way , they will need to use their analytical mind and their writing ability . The basis of this is the fact that when learning literature , they have to pick up the author’s subtle cues so they will improve their analytical skills and writing ability through reading and understanding many novels . For example , Truyen Kieu showed us that at that time the society was unfair and brutal for everyone, especially Vietnamese women and after that we also know how Nguyen Du analyzed that condition in his way so from that we can write and analyze a novel in our own way .

]]> 2021-08-21 09:44:45 UTC https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1688883775 Nhi+1 https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1688884016 We need to admit that older parents are generally more experienced in life, have a more adequate income, and are more willing to take responsibility for a child. It is undeniable that children born into a financially stable household and experienced parents are more advantaged in becoming decent human beings as they often receive better care and education. On the contrary, children whose parents are not financially and mentally prepared enough to take care of a child may stand a higher risk of having mental problems or aggressive behaviors due to the financial or emotional plights in their childhood.]]> 2021-08-21 09:45:39 UTC https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1688884016 Quỳnh Nhi https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1688884209 We need to admit that having children late will affect women's health . The point I want to emphasize is the fact that when women after 35 years old and having children at that time , they can have many problems about their health like high blood pressure , gestational diabetes . If I recall recently , there was a woman who was 61 years old and she just had a baby at that time so after that her health is not good enough to take care of her child and she had high blood pressure .]]> 2021-08-21 09:46:17 UTC https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1688884209 Phương Linh https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1688885614 We need to acknowledge that it is good to include works, novels, poems, ....... in the curriculum but most of the works are composed a long time ago and are not really relevant to students. The point I want to emphasize is that these literary works are all long-formed works using Han and Nom characters, so it will cause confusion and boredom for students when studying these works. In fact, most of the students when asked shared that they feel bored and have no interest in literature when they have to study and check the works included in the teaching process.]]> 2021-08-21 09:51:08 UTC https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/6gub8tza9uhouoeb/wish/1688885614