https://padlet.com/emmafoote1/6g8y9d4m81auepbd Made with a dash of wit en-us 2021-06-20 08:14:10 UTC 2021-06-29 06:20:38 UTC hello@padlet.com emmafoote1 https://padlet.com/emmafoote1/6g8y9d4m81auepbd/wish/1615990919 Example:

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]]> 2021-06-20 08:16:17 UTC https://padlet.com/emmafoote1/6g8y9d4m81auepbd/wish/1615990919 https://padlet.com/emmafoote1/6g8y9d4m81auepbd/wish/1615998402 Malak Mohamed, Maha Hamed, Ameera Ali

Maha Hamed
* The story was pretty fun.
* The parents are brave.
Wish: The story be more scary

Malak Mohamed
* The man trying to kill the girls,, they run.
* The girls met her friends in school.
Wish: The story be more scary, because it is not very scary

Ameera Ali: Nothing

]]> 2021-06-20 08:30:45 UTC https://padlet.com/emmafoote1/6g8y9d4m81auepbd/wish/1615998402 https://padlet.com/emmafoote1/6g8y9d4m81auepbd/wish/1615998988 Shaikha Abdulhakim-Taiba-Aldana
Shaikha
Liked
* I liked the dialogue between the characters
* The Idea of the story
wish
* She can Improve by adding more to the story.
Taiba
Liked
* Its a very mysteries story.
* has an exciting plot.
Wish
* she can improve by adding more to the story.
Aldana
Liked
*very exciting to read.
*had me wanting to know what will happen next.
Wish
*Fix a bit of Grammar error ]]> 2021-06-20 08:31:56 UTC https://padlet.com/emmafoote1/6g8y9d4m81auepbd/wish/1615998988 https://padlet.com/emmafoote1/6g8y9d4m81auepbd/wish/1616000120 Shaikha Abdulla, Hoor Hassan

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*The story was nice and scary
* I best part when the boy smiled and said are you still hungry
wish: she can add some action and scary things

]]> 2021-06-20 08:33:31 UTC https://padlet.com/emmafoote1/6g8y9d4m81auepbd/wish/1616000120 https://padlet.com/emmafoote1/6g8y9d4m81auepbd/wish/1616000954 Aisha Yousef - Hajar Saeed - Maryam Mohamed.
Hajar:
* Her story was scary and fun to listen and read.
* She added terrifying details in her story.
Wish:
She can make her story better by adding more details and scenes so it can be more mysterious and scary.
Aisha:
* The story is good to read.
* It had enough details for someone to like it.
Wish:
Adding more horrific scenes and actions in the story.
Maryam:
Her story got deleted and she's writing it again.]]> 2021-06-20 08:34:53 UTC https://padlet.com/emmafoote1/6g8y9d4m81auepbd/wish/1616000954 https://padlet.com/emmafoote1/6g8y9d4m81auepbd/wish/1616005488 2021-06-20 08:42:18 UTC https://padlet.com/emmafoote1/6g8y9d4m81auepbd/wish/1616005488 https://padlet.com/emmafoote1/6g8y9d4m81auepbd/wish/1616006293 Alya-Rawan

Alya:
*  That there's death in the story
* plot
Wish: adding more characters

Rawan:
* characters 
* plot 
Wish: More explanation ]]> 2021-06-20 08:43:27 UTC https://padlet.com/emmafoote1/6g8y9d4m81auepbd/wish/1616006293