https://padlet.com/27mhastrup/6g7s8kf8tgx576gw Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2021-01-05 16:43:31 UTC 2021-06-21 15:08:06 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f98a.png 27koloko https://padlet.com/27mhastrup/6g7s8kf8tgx576gw/wish/1517990856 I think your essay is amazing, I loved chills I got when I red “Where did she go!? The boy thought to himself. She has to be real.. I saw her! The mother then told the boy there was no girl, and it must have been his imagination” I love how you described it. Also I liked how you put “Why can't people realize these tests are hurting everyone? Hurting me! Why can't everyone understand sleepless nights just to finish one test, or one homework assignment does so much damage?!” I love how it impacted me and the questions about it. My only wish is that you put a title for your essay but that’s all, overall it’s amazing ]]> 2021-05-12 15:40:43 UTC https://padlet.com/27mhastrup/6g7s8kf8tgx576gw/wish/1517990856 https://padlet.com/27mhastrup/6g7s8kf8tgx576gw/wish/1518049314 Hi Mily! I loved reading your essay, I thought you did a great job telling the data in a simple and easy to read way! I also thought that You did a great job with the warranty situations with the different kids! Like the part where the one kid sees a girl but he is just day dreaming, amazing! I don’t really have any wishes, but I do think that some of the warrant stories were a bit repetitive. But all in all, Your essay was great!]]> 2021-05-12 15:53:26 UTC https://padlet.com/27mhastrup/6g7s8kf8tgx576gw/wish/1518049314 27mbickford https://padlet.com/27mhastrup/6g7s8kf8tgx576gw/wish/1612322412 Heya Mily I loved your Creative writing piece so here are my 2 stars and a wish. My first star is I thought like your idea for the lies was really clever and thought out great job. My second star is I really liked your log that you used I thought that the story playing out throughout the whole story was great. My wish is that I wish you talked about how to stop the lies from trailing behind you but over all great book. Your friend Max.]]> 2021-06-17 14:06:02 UTC https://padlet.com/27mhastrup/6g7s8kf8tgx576gw/wish/1612322412 27dlassman https://padlet.com/27mhastrup/6g7s8kf8tgx576gw/wish/1614459276 I really liked your creative writing peice I thought it was very creative and funny because I think you may be the only one who did not lies and I thought it was very creative.1 star i have have for you peice was you mission because it was good and elebrete like when you said a blonde haired girl and that you were lucky that he locker was by a bush it really gave me a picture in. Y head on what is going on. Another star i have is how you gave example like how she told everyone she studies hard and gets great grades but then she studies last minute and gets a c on her test.one wish i have for you peice is that you add another story or somthing like that.but overall great ]]> 2021-06-18 14:48:52 UTC https://padlet.com/27mhastrup/6g7s8kf8tgx576gw/wish/1614459276 27kvelizacuna https://padlet.com/27mhastrup/6g7s8kf8tgx576gw/wish/1617797635 Hi Milly I really enjoyed reading your creative writing piece it had so much detail. You did a great job describing the blonde girl , I also liked how you started saying how we all lie and gave examples of when we did. My wish for is to maybe make the story longer, but overall it is amazing and super funny.]]> 2021-06-21 14:47:05 UTC https://padlet.com/27mhastrup/6g7s8kf8tgx576gw/wish/1617797635 27koloko https://padlet.com/27mhastrup/6g7s8kf8tgx576gw/wish/1617837176 Hi milly!A strength of your Secret Knowledge of Grown-ups story, Bubble of lies is the way it’s impacting the reader. I also love the feeling I get in the sentence “I’ll be waiting. Here watching your  balloon of lies trial behind you some say. You can’t say I didn’t warn you.” It gave me a chilling feeling. However my only offer is that you put more detail on how the bubble looks or what happens if you admit the truth after you lie.

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