Add explanatory comments / annotation to your mood board to explain the rich history you are referencing and why.

Add the authors / titles to your secondary research sources

Add small comments to your visuals –for example your Moroccan colour moldboard. Include brief annotation to explain this and why it is included

Consider how you present the final outcome – possibly present images separate to the presentation document, as complete final outcomes.

Add small comments to your visuals –for example your collections of objects these should explain why the images are included and how they inform teh project

Include more documentation of the making process – how you made things, why you selected materials and problems solved.

Clarify the project message – clearly identify your 'place'

Simplify the graphics of the presentation – the PowerPoint animation does not add to the message and can distract from the content.

Give your work work space – avoid cramming several images onto the same page, spread them about to allow space for them to be seen and also for annotation.

Add annotation to your slides, including you material testing. Use annotation to explain what was successful or otherwise, what you have learned and what decision you made.

Presentation of final outcome. Take a series of well-lit photos that show the details.

Fill in all the blank pages that are currently acting as holding pages for content.

Some fascinating secondary research is included to support your ideas. However this outweighs your own development and practical work. Make sure the project shows your own practice.

How can you ensure that the outcome is individual to you? Remember the project should not focus on copying the art styles of others. Ensure the final outcome is representative of your own visual style.

You have set yourself a lot of work to complete – ensure you plan your time and schedule so that you can achieve this work.

Allow time to photograph each sketchbook page and create a digital PDF for assignment submission on 04/11

Add the authors / titles to your secondary research sources

The presentation relies heavily on text explanations. With the time left try to shift the focus to include more images, particularly of your own work.

Your development should include more practical experiments, such as the development of colour palette, materials

Include everything you have done – colour workshop with Annette, Photography workshop and so on

Download the supplied PowerPoint and use this to format your ideas and work in chronological order, including:

Research including images

Development including mood boards, storyboards, lighting test, location photography, colour pallette

A final film

Some fascinating research but this is almost exclusively recorded through notes, bring these ideas to life and tell your story through images.

How can you consider resolving and presenting the rugs?

Pay attention to the image quality when showing your final outcome – i.e take photos of the objects that are well-lit, on a neutral background, and with nothing else in the frame.

You may want to consider how you would present these if they were displayed in a gallery setting. Or within the museum being investigated.