Per 6 Anonymous Peer Review by elizabeth minarich https://padlet.com/Minarich/6fwb66d3ynaq You will post ONE paragraph that you feel the least confident on or want the most help with. Then, when you are told to begin, you comment on others' posts. You will go t the post directly to the right of yours and use language from the rubric to leave them feedback on how to improve. en-us 2019-09-16 17:05:02 UTC 2019-09-28 22:42:30 UTC hello@padlet.com 2077112 https://padlet.com/Minarich/6fwb66d3ynaq/wish/384851804 i am not confident with my introduction. Ishmael Beah was exposed to the horrors of war at the age of only 14 years old. His life was changed forever and survived through it to right a book showing the terrible things of war, a long way gone. He was very poor, him and all of his siblings lived in a small town which was eventually attacked, He was taken and they turned him into a child soldier and his life will change forever.]]> 2019-09-16 17:54:12 UTC https://padlet.com/Minarich/6fwb66d3ynaq/wish/384851804 2087211 https://padlet.com/Minarich/6fwb66d3ynaq/wish/384851928 The last reason Ishmael's action are justified is that he saw killing as the right thing, Ishmael said, ¨ I was not afraid of these lifeless bodies. I despised them and kicked them to 7flip them.¨ This shows the point is correct because he saw the killing so much as a young kid so that was all he knew so he eventually saw it as ok which makes him kill people with no questions asked.

]]> 2019-09-16 17:54:22 UTC https://padlet.com/Minarich/6fwb66d3ynaq/wish/384851928 Malalaś father is a good parent because he wants what's best for her, he's very supportive and he believes in Malala. Malalaś's father was an important person to Malalaś life, because of her father. My topic is important because it shows he showed Malala that you shouldn't be afraid to speak your mind and that it isn't your fault for having your own opinion about something. 226739 https://padlet.com/Minarich/6fwb66d3ynaq/wish/384852106 2019-09-16 17:54:35 UTC https://padlet.com/Minarich/6fwb66d3ynaq/wish/384852106 In conclusion Ishmael does change during the course of his journey because his goal in life changed. His goal in the beginning was to be a rapper and due to what happened in his journey his goal changed to trying to survive each passing day. He became a monster because even though he was forced to kill people he still killed them and hurt them. His feelings change throughout his journey he starts to think that his gun is his protector and normally people do not feel that way. Would you change if what happened to Ishmael happened to you? 2084551 https://padlet.com/Minarich/6fwb66d3ynaq/wish/384852503 2019-09-16 17:55:07 UTC https://padlet.com/Minarich/6fwb66d3ynaq/wish/384852503 2081223 https://padlet.com/Minarich/6fwb66d3ynaq/wish/384852527 Mr Edward Hyde is alone in the world for being the only truly evil man in the ranks of mankind. Hyde himself is the culmination of all the evil a man can be, he hurts many and even murders a man. What creature does these things, a man or a monster? Someone capable of good or evil? Hyde can do no good so we know what the answer must be. Evil acts are like a dark ink that stain the white of a human soul, and Hyde’s is a dark abyss from which he can never leave.

]]> 2019-09-16 17:55:08 UTC https://padlet.com/Minarich/6fwb66d3ynaq/wish/384852527 The final reason why Ishmael's actions are justified because he was traumatized. ''I had begun to fall into some sort of nightmare. A splash of blood hit my face. In my reverie I had opened my mouth a bit, so I tasted some of the blood. As I pat it out and wiped it off my face, I saw the soldier it had come form. Blood poured out of the bullet holes in him like water rushing through newly opened tributaries. His eyes wide open; he still held his gun.'' (Beah 118). Ishmael was reflecting on when he first got traumatized by seeing people die. This proves the opinion that Ishmael's actions as a child soldier are justified because he was traumatized. Ishmael says he fell into a nightmare because he was scared, everyone around him was getting shot, he did not want to believe what was happing. Ishmael watched people get shot and killed. Ishmael's actions are justified because he was traumatized. 208000_ https://padlet.com/Minarich/6fwb66d3ynaq/wish/384852552 2019-09-16 17:55:11 UTC https://padlet.com/Minarich/6fwb66d3ynaq/wish/384852552 224920 https://padlet.com/Minarich/6fwb66d3ynaq/wish/384852561 In the book A Long Way Gone by Ishmael Beah, Ishmael did change over his journey being a child soldier. Some ways how Ishmael changed over the course of his journey he was less scared after killing, did not have fear.

]]> 2019-09-16 17:55:12 UTC https://padlet.com/Minarich/6fwb66d3ynaq/wish/384852561 2075891 https://padlet.com/Minarich/6fwb66d3ynaq/wish/384852564 To re-emphasize, in the book I Am Malala Written by Malala yousafzai and Christina Lamb, To clarify Malala's father is a good parent because he is supportive, he treats his daughter equally and encourages her to do what she wants to do. Now how would you feel if you have to go through everything Malala  went through? 

]]> 2019-09-16 17:55:12 UTC https://padlet.com/Minarich/6fwb66d3ynaq/wish/384852564 2083391 https://padlet.com/Minarich/6fwb66d3ynaq/wish/384852614  not confident with my 
 introduction ]]> 2019-09-16 17:55:17 UTC https://padlet.com/Minarich/6fwb66d3ynaq/wish/384852614 2075891 https://padlet.com/Minarich/6fwb66d3ynaq/wish/384852802 2019-09-16 17:55:33 UTC https://padlet.com/Minarich/6fwb66d3ynaq/wish/384852802 Secondly Education helps people pursue their goals and stand up for them. In malala’s book she had wrote an inspiring quote which was “Let us pick up our books and pens; I said they are our most powerful weapons. One child, one teacher, one book and one pen can change the world.” which can be found on page 310, She had said that as a symbol of strength and inspiration for young women to stand up for their education. As well as pursue their goals in the future and not let anyone stop them from reaching them no matter how hard it gets. This was the second reason as to why education should be a human right. 2137191 https://padlet.com/Minarich/6fwb66d3ynaq/wish/384852856 2019-09-16 17:55:37 UTC https://padlet.com/Minarich/6fwb66d3ynaq/wish/384852856 To begin with, one reason why i believe that Malala's father is a good parent is because he encouraged her. Malala says “At school my father organized a peace march and encouraged us to speak out against what was happening.” (yousafzai chapter 11). To explain, malala's father encouraged Malala and others to speak out and not be afraid to speak out and inspire others. This proves my thesis because if you encourage someone to do the right thing or help them speak out, that means you are being a good person which in this case malala's father was a good parent. 2076751 https://padlet.com/Minarich/6fwb66d3ynaq/wish/384852880 2019-09-16 17:55:39 UTC https://padlet.com/Minarich/6fwb66d3ynaq/wish/384852880 2075891 https://padlet.com/Minarich/6fwb66d3ynaq/wish/384852936 2019-09-16 17:55:44 UTC https://padlet.com/Minarich/6fwb66d3ynaq/wish/384852936 219663 https://padlet.com/Minarich/6fwb66d3ynaq/wish/384853055 Can killing people really be justified or should justice be served no matter what age. Ishmael is a child soldier who lost everything he had his village was raided and his family went missing. He was taken by soldiers to a village where he was trained to fight and survive in the wild.Ishmaels actions are justified he just wants to survive he doesn't have his family becuase they went missing and he didn't want to become a child soldier but he had no choice.

]]> 2019-09-16 17:55:57 UTC https://padlet.com/Minarich/6fwb66d3ynaq/wish/384853055 Malalaś father is a good parent because he wants what's best for her, he's very supportive and he believes in Malala. Malalaś's father was an important person to Malalaś life, because of her father. My topic is important because it shows he showed Malala that you shouldn't be afraid to speak your mind and that it isn't your fault for having your own opinion about something. 3314563 https://padlet.com/Minarich/6fwb66d3ynaq/wish/384853270 2019-09-16 17:56:15 UTC https://padlet.com/Minarich/6fwb66d3ynaq/wish/384853270 207967 https://padlet.com/Minarich/6fwb66d3ynaq/wish/384853361 shamel  first day the rebels took him to help fight he was already exposed to marijuana which can still be as bad as doing it.Exposure to drugs can lead to people to do drugs.”I took turns at the guarding posts around the village smoking marijuana and sniffing brown brown,cocaine mixed with gunpowder”(Beah .Ishmael was drugged so he wouldn’t be scared to shoot his gun.”I was sweating and they threw water on my face and gave me a few more of the white capsules.I stayed up all night and couldn’t sleep for a week.We went out two more times that week and I had no problem shooting my gun”.They drug people or let people use drugs because it relaxes them not to be scared to fight and not be afraid of death.Now since the drugs killing people is a job for Ishmael.Which is not his fault people get addicted to drugs and can lead people to not make good decisions.]]> 2019-09-16 17:56:21 UTC https://padlet.com/Minarich/6fwb66d3ynaq/wish/384853361 3314563 https://padlet.com/Minarich/6fwb66d3ynaq/wish/384853533 Malalaś father is a good parent because he wants what's best for her, he's very supportive and he believes in Malala. Malalaś's father was an important person to Malalaś life, because of her father. My topic is important because it shows he showed Malala that you shouldn't be afraid to speak your mind and that it isn't your fault for having your own opinion about something. 

]]> 2019-09-16 17:56:37 UTC https://padlet.com/Minarich/6fwb66d3ynaq/wish/384853533 2091561 https://padlet.com/Minarich/6fwb66d3ynaq/wish/384853970

]]> 2019-09-16 17:57:15 UTC https://padlet.com/Minarich/6fwb66d3ynaq/wish/384853970 2076711 https://padlet.com/Minarich/6fwb66d3ynaq/wish/384854700 Additionally, another reason that supports that Malala has a good father is because he tries his best to help others. In fact, after there was violence around where Malala and her family live, Malala says this, “At school my father organised a peace march and encouraged us to speak out against what was happening.”(Yousafzai) Therefore, this shows that Malala’s father is all about positivety and he cares for others, that’s why he organized the march to speak out against the violence happening.]]> 2019-09-16 17:58:16 UTC https://padlet.com/Minarich/6fwb66d3ynaq/wish/384854700 global cause of change brady c.  226739 https://padlet.com/Minarich/6fwb66d3ynaq/wish/390928587 population of crabs would go down.
*Increase in human population

*Pollution

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*Increase in human population

*Pollution

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