https://padlet.com/26kwright1/6fjwcqje2fbr Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2019-12-05 15:13:04 UTC 2019-12-12 15:04:31 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-uploads.storage.googleapis.com/438880976/08d3f96691836273b0439edd2553a9c8/source.gif 26pleone https://padlet.com/26kwright1/6fjwcqje2fbr/wish/420786060 Something I liked about your story is how filled in the gaps in the timeline, like when Derek was on his way to school. I also like how you gave took my feedback, by renaming the jump ramp to The Gap. If Ryan Trivasono reads this, he will really enjoy that little detail. Something you could change, is saying if he lives in a house or apartment. Because in Bayonne, I’m still a little puzzled on what his home looks like.]]> 2019-12-06 15:16:28 UTC https://padlet.com/26kwright1/6fjwcqje2fbr/wish/420786060 26eorellano https://padlet.com/26kwright1/6fjwcqje2fbr/wish/422194668 Star#1: The First star about your story was that when you decided to change the setting you transitioned so smoothly with great transition words.
Star#2: The Second star about your story was that you said “12 Yars Later” which is very unique seeing that I’ve personally never seen anyone do that before.
Wish #1: The one wish about your story was that I wish the problem and main idea were clearer. 


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