Feedback, comments, and compliments! (class 6-4) by Erin Stelmach https://padlet.com/erin_stelmach/6ff1mgbjhzrwpe5c Please give your child some feedback on their narrative. Please include their first name and last initial, as your name is anonymous. en-us 2021-05-07 15:48:27 UTC 2021-05-26 14:27:57 UTC hello@padlet.com Ryan, I love the creativity and imagery in your story, and the foreshadowing in your lead is fantastic! The weapons are hilarious, and based on the weaponry, this line cracked me up: "Now to find out if they are some tough cookies." Great job! ~Mrs. Kelley, grade 7 https://padlet.com/erin_stelmach/6ff1mgbjhzrwpe5c/wish/1561328612 2021-05-26 13:30:06 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_stelmach/6ff1mgbjhzrwpe5c/wish/1561328612 Dominik, Although I hate lima beans, I really like your poem in 2 voices ABOUT lima beans! ~Mrs. Kelley, grade 7 https://padlet.com/erin_stelmach/6ff1mgbjhzrwpe5c/wish/1561575788 2021-05-26 14:27:22 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_stelmach/6ff1mgbjhzrwpe5c/wish/1561575788