English faculty feedback by Kara https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej Made with the strength to succeed en-us 2019-01-22 06:00:18 UTC 2020-01-21 04:01:07 UTC hello@padlet.com Consistency! https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323310652 2019-01-23 05:14:08 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323310652 https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323310657 From today’s discussion it looked like we need to work on ELABORATION. Which I personally want to work on as well!]]> 2019-01-23 05:14:11 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323310657 https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323310684 Clarity of communication for those outside of Banzai]]> 2019-01-23 05:14:29 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323310684 Communication and collaboration is high https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323310695 2019-01-23 05:14:35 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323310695 Collaboration and teamwork lelli48 https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323310749 2019-01-23 05:15:05 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323310749 Consistency and clear guidelines/ processes https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323310764 2019-01-23 05:15:14 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323310764 https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323310791 Start with Example
Paraphrase P sentence to create Link

]]> 2019-01-23 05:15:31 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323310791 https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323310799 Add this to the writing on demand powerpoint for ease of reference]]> 2019-01-23 05:15:36 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323310799 Up-to-date and agreed upon semester planners https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323310853 2019-01-23 05:15:51 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323310853 Developing critical and analytical thinking so students can elaborate/evaluate https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323310887 2019-01-23 05:16:11 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323310887 sharing resources https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323310900 2019-01-23 05:16:17 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323310900 1. clear and common understanding between all staff members esp. around assessment https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323310914 2. providing more time for assessment for students ]]> 2019-01-23 05:16:23 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323310914 Clear processes and routines https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323310918 2019-01-23 05:16:26 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323310918 CC meeting with HoD on task sheets to ensure accuracy https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323310946 2019-01-23 05:16:44 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323310946 Clear out extra resources from G Drive to improve clarity https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323310955 2019-01-23 05:16:50 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323310955 Improve elaborations using critical thinking strategies, peer feedback... https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323310958 2019-01-23 05:16:52 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323310958 Writing on Demand = practising students in planning and developing ideas and communicating arguments effectively under different conditions --> exam preparation https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323310963 2019-01-23 05:16:53 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323310963 Great resources https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323310973 2019-01-23 05:16:59 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323310973 https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311011 we are trying to do a lot, which are all important, but sometimes need to be prioritised - outlining the pivotal times to do WoD, AT, AR, homework on the TLAP/unit plans would be good.]]> 2019-01-23 05:17:28 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311011 The three level guide process allows students to evaluate and communicate their knowledge effectively. gxkaz0 https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311023 2019-01-23 05:17:35 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311023 More focus on how to revise and edit work effectively https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311033 2019-01-23 05:17:42 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311033 Follow the planners lelli48 https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311042 2019-01-23 05:17:49 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311042 keeping these elements of the lesson short and interesting https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311069 2019-01-23 05:18:06 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311069 Collaboration https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311075 Schedule routine unit meetings 

]]> 2019-01-23 05:18:13 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311075 Note take on the board some of their shared brainstormed answers. https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311077 2019-01-23 05:18:15 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311077 Sharing of resources https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311089 2019-01-23 05:18:22 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311089 Deep thinking and analysis paired with continual development of spontaneous writing skills https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311093 2019-01-23 05:18:24 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311093 Evaluative level - critical thinking (developing the ability in students) lelli48 https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311095 2019-01-23 05:18:25 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311095 Increase flexibility of PEEL, especially in senior years. Vary the order, improve use of connectives - many students continue writing in a basic, pro-forma pattern. https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311115 2019-01-23 05:18:43 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311115 planning and editing https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311124 2019-01-23 05:18:50 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311124 Show more excellent examples (good modelling) lelli48 https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311158 2019-01-23 05:19:08 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311158 the essential element is keeping to the process across all KLAs https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311208 2019-01-23 05:19:37 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311208 Sharing responses and positive feedback. https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311252 2019-01-23 05:19:58 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311252 Editing - have I checked section - could this look at cohesion and making sense. https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311341 2019-01-23 05:20:47 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311341 The writing process requires that students spend a significant amount of time on their writing. One challenge is how do we convince unmotivated students that completing every step of the process will be worth their time https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311342 2019-01-23 05:20:48 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311342 teaching editing: https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311399 maybe a checklist or enhancement of skill sets to 'step back' from their work and view it critically ]]> 2019-01-23 05:21:00 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311399 Ensure all students complete drafts (just about impossible perhaps!) lelli48 https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311415 2019-01-23 05:21:11 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311415 https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311465 It should be relevant to the topic and create a text-to-text or text-to-world connection/extension

]]> 2019-01-23 05:21:40 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311465 Keeping the question/task/argument in mind at all times - how does this evidence answer/show/prove? https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311481 This might help with elaboration sentences - this is the meat of the paragraph]]> 2019-01-23 05:21:50 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311481 https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311548 explicit teaching of the process]]> 2019-01-23 05:22:33 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311548 https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311549 explicit teaching of the process, especially in the revising stage.  students struggle being able to identify these elements

]]> 2019-01-23 05:22:33 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311549 Keeping in mind the checklist for the writing process especially the revising section gxkaz0 https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311573 2019-01-23 05:22:50 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311573 https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311594 We need to ensure that we have supporting resources to help explicitly teach the cognitive verbs within these stages]]> 2019-01-23 05:23:09 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311594 Consistency of behaviour management - eg entering classroom, greeting, maintaining due dates ... https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311600 2019-01-23 05:23:15 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311600 Need to explicitly teach the revision key terms/values of inquiry. https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311639 2019-01-23 05:23:44 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311639 A modified version of the writing process as a checklist on the tasksheet https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311658 2019-01-23 05:23:54 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311658 Establish a context/situation for the set text to help students understand the how and why of what they are doing https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311679 2019-01-23 05:24:10 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311679 Consistency on assessment - eg enforcing word limits, mediated marking. https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311735 2019-01-23 05:24:52 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311735 Remember that text connectives are not always essential, for every sentence. Some students don't know what the words mean/why they are used and so use them randomly. https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311945 2019-01-23 05:26:42 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311945 Updating text studies in junior (E.g. Lockie Leonard) https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311961 2019-01-23 05:26:49 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323311961 https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323312010 Have an accompanying resource for students to use as a checkbox]]> 2019-01-23 05:27:18 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323312010 The satire unit needs new resources https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323312108 2019-01-23 05:28:08 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323312108 increase the expectation of the amount of writing students will undertake. https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323312171 2019-01-23 05:28:42 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323312171 Backwards mapping from the assessment task in week 1 with the students. https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323312192 2019-01-23 05:28:55 UTC https://padlet.com/kgrum1/6de0eb0z2iej/wish/323312192