https://padlet.com/nucklbri000/6d2ur55b59d8 Made with ♥ en-us 2018-04-27 20:00:01 UTC 2023-05-29 16:06:21 UTC hello@padlet.com nucklbri000 https://padlet.com/nucklbri000/6d2ur55b59d8/wish/256157215 2018-04-27 20:01:10 UTC https://padlet.com/nucklbri000/6d2ur55b59d8/wish/256157215 nucklbri000 https://padlet.com/nucklbri000/6d2ur55b59d8/wish/256157267 2018-04-27 20:01:24 UTC https://padlet.com/nucklbri000/6d2ur55b59d8/wish/256157267 nucklbri000 https://padlet.com/nucklbri000/6d2ur55b59d8/wish/256157293 2018-04-27 20:01:31 UTC https://padlet.com/nucklbri000/6d2ur55b59d8/wish/256157293 nucklbri000 https://padlet.com/nucklbri000/6d2ur55b59d8/wish/256157442 2018-04-27 20:02:05 UTC https://padlet.com/nucklbri000/6d2ur55b59d8/wish/256157442 nucklbri000 https://padlet.com/nucklbri000/6d2ur55b59d8/wish/256162489 2018-04-27 20:29:58 UTC https://padlet.com/nucklbri000/6d2ur55b59d8/wish/256162489 https://padlet.com/nucklbri000/6d2ur55b59d8/wish/257830270 Backpack basics 
Anders, M. "Backpack basics" Boy's Life 

Anders, M. Introduces backpacks. Backpacks don't need to be too big and for backpacking trips you need to have comfortable shoes. It's important to bring a backpack that is not too big or too small. You should only pack essentials.

It should not be too big and it needs to be very comfortable for wearing. The straps should have comfort. It needs to fit correctly and should have everything you need. ]]> 2018-05-03 19:53:44 UTC https://padlet.com/nucklbri000/6d2ur55b59d8/wish/257830270 nucklbri000 https://padlet.com/nucklbri000/6d2ur55b59d8/wish/258682455 The ABP pro was made for cultural anthropologist so it can keep them dry. This is a very durable backpack and is super sturdy so that you can fit what you need to and it will last a long time. This backpack will help keep the humidity down. It will solve a lot of problems. When they're feet get wet they can use the thing and it will make them dry so they don't blister because If they're feet were to blister up they won't be able to walk and it will hurt. This ABP pro backpack is also comfortable and protected from most everything. It was specifically designed for that problem. The ABP pro backpack will make everything better and more helpful when you are doing what you need to do. It is very tight spaced and it can fit a lot of stuff into a tiny space. It is a brand new light weight backpack that is very good for hiking and long camping trips. This backpack will keep your stuff safe as you are carrying it around. When you get wet your clothes won't stick to you with this new invention, it will be a whole new experience once you get this trustworthy, secure backpack. ]]> 2018-05-07 19:09:08 UTC https://padlet.com/nucklbri000/6d2ur55b59d8/wish/258682455 mstrock https://padlet.com/nucklbri000/6d2ur55b59d8/wish/262261791 Revise your paragraph in the following ways:
 
Word choice selection needs improvement (wider variety of general vocab--not so repetative)
 
More transitions, overall flow, and clarity--your paragraph is really choppy.]]> 2018-05-21 04:12:00 UTC https://padlet.com/nucklbri000/6d2ur55b59d8/wish/262261791