https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv en-us 2017-10-10 15:57:08 UTC 2017-10-10 16:30:54 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195681220 Some of my riting goals are...]]> 2017-10-10 16:00:59 UTC https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195681220 https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195681655 2017-10-10 16:01:41 UTC https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195681655 https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195681742 I have to make my ending better and make the main character learn a lesson.

]]> 2017-10-10 16:01:54 UTC https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195681742 https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195681880 Some of my writing goals are to read over your work and see if you have any spelling mistakes. Also,you can make your ending better. you can make your writing better is to  fix your writing and you can see if you not have any diauge. you can check if you have any mistakes on puncation. ]]> 2017-10-10 16:02:08 UTC https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195681880 https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195682305 2017-10-10 16:02:54 UTC https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195682305 https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195682311 2017-10-10 16:02:54 UTC https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195682311 boycem2 https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195682554 Some thing I have to work on is my leads.]]> 2017-10-10 16:03:19 UTC https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195682554 https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195682943 Some of my writing goals are to work on my punctuation ]]> 2017-10-10 16:04:06 UTC https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195682943 https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195683001 2017-10-10 16:04:12 UTC https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195683001 https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195683628 My writing goal is to vari my sentences more often to create the pace and tone of my narrative.

]]> 2017-10-10 16:05:18 UTC https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195683628 https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195684634 Some of my writing goals are ]]> 2017-10-10 16:07:13 UTC https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195684634 https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195685899 I would use more transition in my writing.]]> 2017-10-10 16:09:32 UTC https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195685899 https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195686115 some of my reading goals are...Try not to have that much run on sentences and to edit my writing better.I also need to add more detail to my writing ]]> 2017-10-10 16:09:56 UTC https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195686115 https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195686727 I had to work on a better ending
And commas.

]]> 2017-10-10 16:10:55 UTC https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195686727 https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195687041 I need to write better. I can do that by , useing better words, ending with styel]]> 2017-10-10 16:11:30 UTC https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195687041 https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195687616 2017-10-10 16:12:35 UTC https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195687616 beste1 https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195687710 Some of my writing goals are]]> 2017-10-10 16:12:47 UTC https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195687710 https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195687912 2017-10-10 16:13:11 UTC https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195687912 https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195688508 I can work on my endings and make them more detailed.]]> 2017-10-10 16:14:24 UTC https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195688508 https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195688573 I need to work on my middle piece by adding more detail. I also need to work on making a better ending.]]> 2017-10-10 16:14:29 UTC https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195688573 boycem2 https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195690342 2017-10-10 16:17:33 UTC https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195690342 https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195693000 I need to work on on adding detail and dialogue.]]> 2017-10-10 16:22:19 UTC https://padlet.com/carnemollag/6ajzv2mqlumv/wish/195693000