Analyzing Poetry by Mr. Omran

mo_omraan — 2022-03-23 03:46:53 UTC

Nature is a symphony,
A song that fills the air,
Its melody, a soothing balm,
To calm the world's despair.

The mountains rise so high,
A symbol of our dreams,
Their peaks, a testament,
To the beauty that it seems.

The rivers flow so free,
A dance that never ends,
Their currents, a reminder,
Of the love that nature sends.

The trees sway in the breeze,
A gentle lullaby,
Their leaves, a vibrant hue,
To paint the world nearby.

Nature is a masterpiece,
A work of art divine,
Its beauty, a reflection,
Of the love that we can find.

mo_omraan — 2022-03-23 03:50:50 UTC

The moon rises in the sky,
A silver crescent bright,
Its glow, a gentle beacon,
To guide us through the night.

The waves crash on the shore,
A symphony of sound,
Their rhythm, a soothing balm,
To calm the world around.

The stars twinkle in the dark,
A diamond-studded veil,
Their light, a cosmic dance,
To tell a timeless tale.

mo_omraan — 2022-03-23 03:51:40 UTC

Friendship is a garden,
Where love and trust can grow,
Its roots, a strong foundation,
To weather any blow.

The leaves, a gentle shelter,
From life's harsh, bitter rain,
Its branches, a warm embrace,
To ease away the pain.

The flowers, a bright symbol,
Of joy and happiness,
Their fragrance, a sweet perfume,
To fill the heart with bliss.

The garden of friendship blooms,
With every passing day,
Its beauty, a testament,
To the love that finds its way.

mo_omraan — 2022-03-23 03:52:03 UTC

Honesty is a mirror,
That reflects the truth within,
Its glass, a clear reflection,
Of the person deep within.

The cracks, a sign of weakness,
That we try to hide away,
But honesty shines a light,
To help us face the day.

The frame, a sturdy structure,
That holds the glass in place,
Its strength, a testament,
To the courage we embrace.

The mirror of honesty shows,
The person we can be,
Its beauty, a reflection,
Of the truth that sets us free.

Your Goal

mo_omraan — 2022-03-23 03:57:31 UTC

1- Analyze the sound devices in the poem.
2- Analyze the Figure of Speech in the poem.
3- Explain the theme in the poem.
4- Paraphrase the poem and write your opinion.

Your Goal

mo_omraan — 2022-03-23 09:41:30 UTC

1- Analyze the sound devices in the poem.
2- Analyze the Figure of Speech in the poem.
3- Explain the theme in the poem.
4- Paraphrase the poem and write your opinion.

mo_omraan — 2023-03-21 04:18:21 UTC

My country is a beacon,
A light that shines so bright,
Its people, a tapestry,
Of colors, love, and might.

The mountains stand so tall,
A symbol of our pride,
Their peaks, a testament,
To the strength we have inside.

The rivers flow so free,
A song that fills the air,
Their currents, a reminder,
Of the freedom that we share.

The deserts stretch so wide,
A canvas for our dreams,
Their sands, a reminder,
Of the hope that always gleams.

My country is a treasure,
A gift that we must keep,
Its beauty, a reminder,
Of the promises we keep.

We stand together strong,
A nation of the free,
Our love for country true,
For all the world to see.

Your Goal

mo_omraan — 2023-03-21 04:19:03 UTC

1- Analyze the sound devices in the poem.
2- Analyze the Figure of Speech in the poem.
3- Explain the theme in the poem.
4- Paraphrase the poem and write your opinion.

mo_omraan — 2023-10-12 03:02:00 UTC

War is a beast that roars,
A monster born of hate,
Its claws, a deadly weapon,
To seal the world's fate.

The bombs fall from the sky,
A rain of fire and death,
Their blast, a deafening sound,
To steal away our breath.

The guns blaze in the night,
A symphony of pain,
Their bullets, a piercing scream,
To drive us all insane.

The war machine grinds on,
A juggernaut of steel,
Its gears, a grinding force,
To crush the human will.

War is a beast that roars,
A monster born of hate,
Its end, a solemn vow,
To never let it dictate.

Exit Ticket

mo_omraan — 2023-10-12 03:42:30 UTC

What did you learn today?
How do you feel about the lesson today?
Do you need more practice?
Do you get it all?
Can you explain it to others?

Your Goal

mo_omraan — 2023-10-12 03:52:03 UTC

1- Analyze the sound devices in the poem.
2- Analyze the Figure of Speech in the poem.
3- Explain the theme in the poem.
4- Paraphrase the poem and write your opinion.

Your Goal

mo_omraan — 2023-10-12 03:52:17 UTC

1- Analyze the sound devices in the poem.
2- Analyze the Figure of Speech in the poem.
3- Explain the theme in the poem.
4- Paraphrase the poem and write your opinion.

Your Goals

mo_omraan — 2023-10-18 09:35:36 UTC

Your Goal

1- Analyze the sound devices in the poem.
2- Analyze the Figure of Speech in the poem.
3- Explain the theme in the poem.
4- Paraphrase the poem and write your opinion.

3-theme

2023-10-24 04:15:24 UTC

turki
that war is a bad things and it has many Horrible results
and effects , it makes people suffer mentally and phisically , it makes countries poor and dark , it kills inoccent people
evidence : war is a beast that roars , a monster born of hate

Khalid Al-Damegh

2023-10-24 04:17:54 UTC

the massage of poetry: Honesty is a person's truth, and it is a reflection of his upbringing. Honesty hides flaws and strengthens the spirit, Honesty is a structure that strengthens a person.
evidance : "The mirror of honesty shows,
The person we can be"

Figures of Speech ( Abdulmalik Alkhrashi )

2023-10-24 04:21:31 UTC

1- Metaphor: Friendship is a garden
He compares a friendship to a garden, both are beautiful and make you happy.
It creates imagery, convey emotions, and to create a sense of rhythm.

2- Personification: Where love and trust can grow
It is showed that the garden is the place where love and trust can get stronger and the relationship is better.
This helps readers connect with the parts of a story or poem that aren't the characters.

1- Analyze the sound device

2023-10-24 04:23:11 UTC

He repeats I in 3 words consecutive
“A rain of fire and death their blast”

2023-10-24 04:24:04 UTC

Abdullaziz
He uses metaphor:To compare between two unlike things without using the words "like" or "as".
War is a beast
He uses ; Personification | To give human qualities to non-living things or ideas.
that roars

For make the poem more clear

The theme / Abdullah Alsaqer 11-2

2023-10-24 04:26:30 UTC

The message of the poem is that the poet means that nature affects a person’s psyche and affects his life, so describing it as night means that it brings calm and tranquility to a person.

Abdulaziz Almehbash

2023-10-24 04:27:03 UTC

there is personification when he said :

To tell a timeless tale
he said that the tell of star is timeless

there is metaphor:

Their light, a cosmic dance

he compares between light and dance

3- Explain the theme in the poem ( Turki Alhathloul )

2023-10-24 04:27:59 UTC

The theme: talking about the importance of friendship in life and that they give beauty and lasting happiness, and no one can live without a friend or relationships

Sound Devices ( Hamza )

2023-10-24 04:28:07 UTC

- Rhyme: Rhyme is the repetition of identical sounds at the end of lines.
He repeats /w/ at the end of two words in different lines. ( Grow - Blow )
It makes the poem more musical and exciting.

- Repetition: To repeat the same words or phrases a few times to make the idea clearer and more memorable.
He repeats ( Friendship - Garden ) more than once.

-Assonance: To repeat the same vowel sounds of close words in the same line.
It makes the poem more exciting.
(Leaves - Gentle - Shelter )
He repeats /e/in the middle of three in the same line.

- Rhyme scheme: The rhyme scheme in the first stanza is ( A -B -C - B ) It makes the poem more interesting and musical.

Task 1 Ahmed alshakhsheer

2023-10-24 04:28:40 UTC

Consonance : he repeats the /t/ in the end of two words in the same sentence ( light - bright) and he use it to make the poem musical Ryhme : he repeats the /t/ in the end of two words in different lines ( bright - might ) and he use it to make the poem musical
Assonance : he repeats the /i/ in the middle of two words ( fills - air ) to make the poem musical

Paraphrase the poem and write your opinion. (Abdullah Alghathbar)

2023-10-24 04:28:58 UTC

Friendship is like a garden,

Where love can flourish,

Its deep roots provide stability,

Through life's challenges.

Its leaves provide protection,

From the harsh storms of life,

Its supporting branches extend,

To soothe and heal.

Flowers are symbols of joy,

Bring joy and happiness,

Their scent fills the air

Bringing bliss, nothing less.

The garden of friendship flourishes,

And with every passing moment and hour

Her beauty is proof of that

Of the everlasting power of love.

This paraphrased poem beautifully captures the essence of friendship and its importance in our lives. Friendship is indeed like a garden, requiring love, trust and a strong foundation to grow and stand the tests of time. Images of roots, leaves, branches, and flowers paint a vivid picture of the different elements that contribute to a thriving friendship.

task 4 - meshary alabbad

conevonemishari — 2023-10-24 04:29:48 UTC

War, a creature with a thunderous cry,

A monstrous entity spawned from hatred's sigh,

Its razor-sharp claws, instruments of doom,

Determining the world's destiny in gloom.

From above, bombs descend like a fiery rain,

A deluge of destruction, leaving only pain,

Their explosive blast, a deafening roar,

Silencing our breath, as hope is no more.

In the dark of night, guns fiercely blaze,

A symphony of suffering in haunting ways,

Their bullets pierce, screaming through the air,

Driving humanity to madness and despair.

The war machine marches on, relentless and vast,

A colossal force of steel, a future overcast,

Its grinding gears, an unyielding might,

Crushing human spirit, extinguishing light.

War, a beast that roars with relentless spite,

Born from the depths of malice's blight,

But its demise is our unwavering vow,

To break free, never allowing its dominance now.

Marwan

2023-10-24 04:29:55 UTC

He talks about the atmosphere of the night under the moonlight next to the calm sea and hearing the crash of its waves and their sound that resembles a symphony while watching the sparkling stars in the sky.

task 2 salman almuhaisen

2023-10-24 04:31:06 UTC

1 metaphor - he compare petwen the country and the treasure poth are valuble

2 personifcation - he give the song one of humen traits wich is filling

the impact it mack the pome deeb and emotional

Analyze The sound device in the pome. Rayan Alsaleh

2023-10-24 04:32:18 UTC

Assonance: the pote repeat /O/ saund in the words ( flow / so ) And this make the pome musiclly

Repetition : the pote repet the word ( love )
And this make the pome musiclly

Saeed Alghamdi

2023-10-24 04:32:27 UTC

Sound devices
1- Allrtaion : "glow a gental" he repated 'g' to make the poem museqal .

2- Consonance : "crescent bright " he reapted the make it museqal

Task-4 Osamah Aljuaid

2023-10-24 04:32:57 UTC

We can see that the poet is describing a country as a valuable thing that everyone should thank having a blessing gift, he talks about the country's sides and comparing it to a country's traits, also in some lines he talks about some rights citizens should offer to their country, for example, when he says" my country is a treasure, A gift we must keep", it indicates the importance of a country or having a home, furthermore, it explain one of the people rights towards a country, which is to maintain it.

Overall, the poem is about patriotism, it talks about the importance of a country and the rights people should offer, which is beautiful subject for a poem, it uses a common scenes that is inside a country to talks about it, it helps a person when he read them poem to make it more easily to imagine, I like it.

Task 3- feras alshahrany

2023-10-24 04:34:05 UTC

In the poem the writer is trying to explain how much we love our country and he was comparing them with beautiful things such as light and shines, for example he said "my country is a beacon, a light that......... and might" he also talked about its mountains and how pretty and tall they are, he said "the mountains stand so tall.......inside" he also explained many things which are: desert, rivers.ect

Abdullah Almotawa

2023-10-24 04:35:21 UTC

task 4:
Honesty is like a mirror,
It shows who we truly are.
It reflects our strengths and flaws,
Guiding us both near and far.

the poem presents honesty as a mirror that uncovers the truth about our identity, starting from a young age. It assert that the mirror of honesty reflects both our strengths and weaknesses.

abdullah albawardi

2023-10-24 04:35:43 UTC

The point is that the poet begins the poetry by praising nature and likening it to a symphony

He said that ambition is like high mountains

Nature and rivers are a symbol of love and happiness

The theme in the last paragraph is that you should appreciate and respect nature

evaluation theme

2023-10-24 04:35:44 UTC

you have to be more specific in your theme , and add more information's in the paragraphs theme . 2/5 bad analyze

thank you

2023-10-24 04:37:43 UTC

Feedback about Abdullah task

2023-10-24 04:37:45 UTC

He showed true understanding, paraphrased the poem and explained it, also he showed skills of his academic understanding in finishing his task, however, he forgot to mention his opinion about the poem, but overall it was an excellent paraphrasing.

Rating task three

2023-10-24 04:37:50 UTC

The work was done pretty and I think there is nothing more you should add, well done!!!!

Task 1 - Mohammed AL barkindi

conevonemishari — 2023-10-24 04:38:08 UTC

1-Alliteration: The repetition of consonant sounds at the beginning of words . Examples include "War is a beast that roars,"

2- Assonance: The repetition of vowel sounds within words adds a rhythmic quality to the poem. For instance, the repeated "o" sound in "born of hate" and "roars" creates a resonant tone.

3- Onomatopoeia: The use of words that imitate the sounds they describe intensifies the sensory experience. The phrase "Their blast, a deafening sound" mimics the explosive noise of bombs, while "guns blaze" and "bullets pierce" evoke the sharp sounds of gunfire.

4- Repetition: The repetition of key phrases, such as "War is a beast that roars" and "To never let it dictate," emphasizes their significance and reinforces the poem's central theme.

Figure of Speech

2023-10-24 04:38:57 UTC

Figure of Speech

Hyperbole
"My backpack weighs a ton!"

Give the poem some feeling

Personification
"The wind whispered secrets through the trees."

Give the poem some feeling

omar alzoman

Task 1

2023-10-24 04:39:31 UTC

He use correct grammerly words and he also writes the definition like we learn it

Rating ( Task 2 )

2023-10-24 04:39:35 UTC

All the figures of speech’s were great. It has perfect info on the task.
Well done

Notes on saund device

2023-10-24 04:39:48 UTC

The student make correct saund device and he do his jop very well

Osama

2023-10-24 04:40:05 UTC

theme evaluation

2023-10-24 04:40:58 UTC

you should add more information
and you should extract the theme in each paragraph and explane it

task 2

2023-10-24 04:40:59 UTC

he used the correct example in evry sentences and he explain he figure speech
and it impact

jehad alsultan. goal 1

2023-10-24 04:41:08 UTC

1-rhyme

within and reflection 
he repeat /n/at the end of two words in different lines. (within reflection)o

2-onomatopoeia

cracks/ He used this word to explain the situation/

3-Alliteration
He repeats /t/ in the beginning of three words in the same line

Rating To task 1

2023-10-24 04:41:10 UTC

Ahmed did well. He showed skills of his academic understanding in finishing his task. He used correct Grammarly words. Well done.

task 2

2023-10-24 04:45:28 UTC

All the figures of speech’s were great. It has perfect info on the task.
Well done

Saeed alaghamdi

2023-10-24 04:45:38 UTC

the sound dvaises is compleated , good jop

Note for Figure of Speech

2023-10-24 04:47:08 UTC

It needs some explanation for your choice of line, but it's nice

KhalidAl-Damegh

2023-10-24 04:47:37 UTC

I learn how we work as a group
Wonderful
No
Yes
Of course

Task 2 fahad alluhiby

2023-10-24 04:48:25 UTC

Metaphore: To Compare between two unlike things
(i(onesty is a mirror
He compares between honesty and mirror

Personification
To give human qualities to non-living
things or ideas
Shines and honesty

2023-10-24 04:49:18 UTC

Excellent
100/100

Note for Figure of Speech

2023-10-24 04:50:04 UTC

It needs some explanation for your choice of line, but it's nice