https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k Pick four of the sentences provided on Google Classroom and make them more interesting by supplying sensory description, similes, metaphors, etc. en-us 2018-02-28 16:21:38 UTC 2025-09-28 11:16:00 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236667950 the bright cake was so good and fluffy

it was  such a excited day I felt so free I felt like i was flying ]]> 2018-02-28 20:40:39 UTC https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236667950 https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236667979 Every Bite of the cake tasted like Heaven. 

As the puppy had to be put down the girl with tears in her eyes she cried forever]]> 2018-02-28 20:40:43 UTC https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236667979 https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668014 The scared, worried woman´s head felt like a thousand needles crashing onto her brain as her head ached tremendously. ]]> 2018-02-28 20:40:47 UTC https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668014 https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668026 As the sun went down, the warm water settled down as if it were to be glass.]]> 2018-02-28 20:40:50 UTC https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668026 https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668061 2018-02-28 20:40:55 UTC https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668061 https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668075 Subscribe to me]]> 2018-02-28 20:40:56 UTC https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668075 https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668086 The boy, a young fisher, pulled the obese fish out of the cool light blue water, it was a pretty catfish.]]> 2018-02-28 20:40:57 UTC https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668086 https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668127 The example, The woman had a terrible headache. 

Grrr, Groaned the woman, her head was burning like the sun. Her cheeks were a light pink as she laid in her soft comfy bed. A now grey colored towel was over her fore head but the pain from her burning head didn't seem to fade away. 

The example, She was so sad when she lost her puppy.

She stood on the porch of her newly bought house. The sun was setting and tears rolled down her cheeks as she mumbled to herself.]]> 2018-02-28 20:41:03 UTC https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668127 https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668130 As the girl stood in rainy weather waiting for the school bus, listening to her slow steady music she had suddenly heard a crash coming from the crazy intersection, the bus she was supposed to get on was rolling like a ball into other cars around it.   


]]> 2018-02-28 20:41:04 UTC https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668130 https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668153 The warm, fluffy cake was like a party in your mouth. The cake exploded in your mouth like a bomb. She slowly eat it so she could savory eat last bite.]]> 2018-02-28 20:41:07 UTC https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668153 https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668186 the yellow sun was shining bright over the ocean having its last stand with the dark of night.]]> 2018-02-28 20:41:10 UTC https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668186 https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668210 The 10 year old little boy yanked a 12 pound salmon out of the big dark blue Atlantic ocean. 

 The six layered rainbow cake was as colorful as a unicorn and it tasted like a warm piece of banana nut bread. ]]> 2018-02-28 20:41:13 UTC https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668210 https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668255 A tall looking boy pulled a large scaly bass from the wavy and cold water 

[ i think outside of this box ]

]]> 2018-02-28 20:41:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668255 https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668261 Rian Gibson]]> 2018-02-28 20:41:21 UTC https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668261 https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668272 2018-02-28 20:41:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668272 https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668327 The dog was a huge, furry, curly, haired poodle.]]> 2018-02-28 20:41:29 UTC https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668327 https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668382 As the young boy was fishing in the dark deep river, he pulled out a large slimy, grey fish.]]> 2018-02-28 20:41:38 UTC https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668382 https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668420 The pitch black meadow gradually came to life as the bright yellow ball rose from the darkness. 

The vanilla frosted cake with pink sprinkles, tasted like heaven.  ]]> 2018-02-28 20:41:44 UTC https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668420 https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668532 the 4 layer, red velvet cake was the most delicious thing in the world]]> 2018-02-28 20:41:58 UTC https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668532 https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668587 The middle-aged woman felt a ping of pain race through her head, as she had a headache engulf her body. 
 
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When the girl lost track of her beloved dog , she felt a ]]> 2018-02-28 20:42:07 UTC https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668587 https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668599 The cake as bug as a mountai]]> 2018-02-28 20:42:09 UTC https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668599 https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668733 On a chilly afternoon, there was a small boy who was fishing for the first time;and, he caught his first fish which was as heavy as a dictionary and caused the boy to fall into the freezing water. ]]> 2018-02-28 20:42:26 UTC https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668733 https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668849 The ugly boy yanked the oddly large fish out of the murky water.]]> 2018-02-28 20:42:39 UTC https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236668849 https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236669295 Every bite I took out of the three layer chocolate cake it filled joy to my taste buds.]]> 2018-02-28 20:43:34 UTC https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236669295 https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236669478 The quiet, colorful meadow slowly came to life as the blinding sun peaked over the hill.]]> 2018-02-28 20:44:01 UTC https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236669478 https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236669833 The smell of batter filled the air as the oven opened and a gleam of light had seemed to come upon the Birthday Cake. Madison had been so excited to finally finish the cake that had taken 10 hours of baking.]]> 2018-02-28 20:44:45 UTC https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236669833 https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236670142 2018-02-28 20:45:21 UTC https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236670142 https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236670162 The moment she fell to the ground she went into tears. She has lost her warm, soft, loving German Shepherd. As it left her so realized it was gone for every.]]> 2018-02-28 20:45:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236670162 https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236671138 the annoying women had a pounding headache on the side of her head that felt like pins and needles.]]> 2018-02-28 20:47:32 UTC https://padlet.com/jjvarnell/69tkrpwn2o7k/wish/236671138