https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001 WRITE one technique you saw that would be USEFUL as you share your Narrative with your Writing Partners. en-us 2017-09-25 03:11:12 UTC 2025-10-24 21:37:33 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Lightdecrease.png ldoerr https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/190660125 I believe all 8th graders could practice giving SPECIFIC and CLEAR writing advice to their classmates]]> 2017-09-25 03:12:30 UTC https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/190660125 https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/193922795 One technique would be to be specific and go over your draft and make sure it is good and if not ask your friends about it at take th  ]]> 2017-10-04 15:32:34 UTC https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/193922795 https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/193923588 2017-10-04 15:34:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/193923588 https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/193923616 Be specific about what they should fix or what they shoud add to make their writing better. You have to be kind about how you critique the person's work.]]> 2017-10-04 15:34:03 UTC https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/193923616 https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/193924420 I think that they were trying to say to be more clear and specific when your trying to explain something to them and don't be mean about it. And make sure they realize their mistakes so they can make their draft better. ]]> 2017-10-04 15:35:33 UTC https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/193924420 https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/193924543 Don´t just say that´s horrible critique it and say what he/she could do better]]> 2017-10-04 15:35:50 UTC https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/193924543 https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/193925641 You need to be kind and give specific feedback on what you believe will make it better and the person receving the feedback needs to be flexible and be able to do the new drafts

]]> 2017-10-04 15:37:49 UTC https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/193925641 https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/193926188 Don't say their drawing sucks and they should not do it anymore. Give them reasons to change, help them on what part needs help. Be nice about it and give your honest opinion]]> 2017-10-04 15:38:40 UTC https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/193926188 https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/193926375 Be specific about the mistakes and what they could do better without being rude.

]]> 2017-10-04 15:38:55 UTC https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/193926375 https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/193926863 One good technique would be to tell the your class mistakes the things they need to fix in a kind way not a rude way. That way they will feel more confident next time.]]> 2017-10-04 15:39:36 UTC https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/193926863 https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/193927288 one good technique would be to get feedback from your peers.

]]> 2017-10-04 15:40:13 UTC https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/193927288 https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/193927861 A good technique is to do multiple drafts until you get it right ]]> 2017-10-04 15:41:02 UTC https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/193927861 https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/193928228 one technique is to have not one of your friends review but someone you kind of know. they will give you harsher criticism but to be successful. 

]]> 2017-10-04 15:41:38 UTC https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/193928228 https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/193981338 2017-10-04 17:03:16 UTC https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/193981338 https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/193981680 do multiple drafts ]]> 2017-10-04 17:03:52 UTC https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/193981680 https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/193986870 A technique I saw was to have your partner look at your work find the mistakes and critique you

]]> 2017-10-04 17:12:11 UTC https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/193986870 https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/193987422 Ask your friends or peers to help you fix what you need to ]]> 2017-10-04 17:13:02 UTC https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/193987422 https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/193987986 Be specific about what they need to fix. Be kind saying your critiques. If your'e the writer, don't take their critiques the wrong way. They are helping you, not being rude.]]> 2017-10-04 17:13:57 UTC https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/193987986 https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/193988561 Ask your fellow peers and never give up and keep working. And do a lot of drafts. ]]> 2017-10-04 17:14:55 UTC https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/193988561 https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/194002762 Reading our narratives out loud was helpful when giving feedback. ]]> 2017-10-04 17:40:27 UTC https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/194002762 https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/194396516 You have to be specific on what your partner needs to fix and to do that go little by little and know its okay to do more than 3 drafts
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]]> 2017-10-05 20:29:34 UTC https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/194499406 https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/194501769 2017-10-05 20:39:22 UTC https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/194501769 https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/194501773 Listening to what there saying and actually use it.

]]> 2017-10-05 20:39:24 UTC https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/194501773 https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/195687734 Be honest with your partner.]]> 2017-10-10 16:12:50 UTC https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/195687734 https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/195688092 Be completely honest and on task]]> 2017-10-10 16:13:33 UTC https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/195688092 https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/195688152 Be honest focus on the task 

]]> 2017-10-10 16:13:40 UTC https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/195688152 https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/195688970 Be on task and dont be mean when giving feed back

]]> 2017-10-10 16:15:00 UTC https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/195688970 https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/195689031 Be honest and don't lie to your partner]]> 2017-10-10 16:15:08 UTC https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/195689031 https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/195689327 Be honest]]> 2017-10-10 16:15:47 UTC https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/195689327 brandon_moshi https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/195696808 You should get good feed back and also, stay on task and don't get distracted.]]> 2017-10-10 16:29:04 UTC https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/195696808 israel_sosa https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/195816712 be honest to your partner and give feedback to help them ,and stay on task]]> 2017-10-10 20:52:14 UTC https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/195816712 nicole_nielsen1 https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/195816733 Be on task and don't be insensitive when giving feedback]]> 2017-10-10 20:52:21 UTC https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/195816733 https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/195816770 be honest and tell them the truth about what need or what there missing]]> 2017-10-10 20:52:37 UTC https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/195816770 https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/195823128 2017-10-10 21:29:43 UTC https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/195823128 https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/196135419 i think that astins butterfly is showing that you need to tell your peer whats good and what needs work to get to the butiful buterfly

]]> 2017-10-11 17:24:02 UTC https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/196135419 https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/196136053 be truthful in what you think about it and tell them that]]> 2017-10-11 17:25:07 UTC https://padlet.com/ldoerr/narrative001/wish/196136053