https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha 8-322 en-us 2021-09-27 11:52:54 UTC 2021-09-30 16:20:16 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781131832 My writing goals are to work on my word choice because some words i implement don't click into the topic i am describing. I also struggle with adding some extra sentences that most likely end up not being part of my final draft which makes it extra work that is unneeded and unnecessary. ]]> 2021-09-30 12:21:23 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781131832 https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781133581 My 3 Writing Goals:
     - I would love to get better hand writing as I personally don't like it.
     - I would also love to create more descriptive ideas.
     - I also would love to be more descriptive in my writing.]]> 2021-09-30 12:22:06 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781133581 kelkhauly https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781136452 My writing goals are to stay on topic more in my essays as well as giving more details in my writing. I also want to work on using bigger and more descriptive words. My handwriting could use some work🧍‍♀️.]]> 2021-09-30 12:23:08 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781136452 https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781137057   A writing goal I have for myself is to give the reader a better understanding about my idea and the message I'm trying to convey. Additionally, some other writing goals I have for myself includes fixing my grammar and use better word choices in my writing. 😅]]> 2021-09-30 12:23:23 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781137057 https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781138703 My writing goal is to work on getting more ideas and taking my time because when I work too fast what’s in my head isn’t on the paper so I should take my time and work hard on my essays.]]> 2021-09-30 12:24:00 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781138703 https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781140241 My writing goals are to work on using more punctuation I would also like to use more advanced vocabulary and finally I would like to put more detail in my writing. 

]]> 2021-09-30 12:24:34 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781140241 https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781140511 I would like to get better at making the reader interesting and intrigued. Another goal would be to develop better grammar so that my writing is more clear and understanding. I would also like to have a better understanding of what I need to write about and how to structure my writing piece. ]]> 2021-09-30 12:24:41 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781140511 https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781142094 My writing goal is to organize my details and ideas properly. This is because I realized that  my details and factors of my essay are not fully concrete. I want to make sure that the reader clearly understands my writing. Additionally, I want to make sure that my introduction is on point. When my introductions is clear, the reader will get a good understanding of what the essay is going to look like. I definitely don't want my introduction to not be clear and have the necessary elements.]]> 2021-09-30 12:25:17 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781142094 https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781144214 My writing goals are to get better hand writing and also more creative with my word choices because I always think so much about my word choice and then I don't even use the words in the final draft and all the words are just useless in the final draft. Hard work being wasted. 😔]]> 2021-09-30 12:26:01 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781144214 https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781145344 My first writing goal is to get better at devolving my ideas, when ever I think of a topic I have a lot of ideas in my head my i have a hard time writing them down. My second writhing goal is to expand my vocabulary. My last writhing goal is to make my writing more interesting so the reader doesn't get bored.]]> 2021-09-30 12:26:28 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781145344 https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781147928 My first writing goal is to have a better grammer, it's been something I've always struggled with but I did definitely get better. Another one of my goals is spelling, since for the past couple of years we've been on our phones and the auto-correct did all of the spelling. Finally my last goal is to give specific evidence, I like to generalize everything that I sometimes forget to add descriptive evidence.]]> 2021-09-30 12:27:29 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781147928 https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781148194 3 writing goals :

-I would like to be more fluent and not go off topic in my writing .
 
- I would like  to have better choice of word .

- I would like to be more fluent in my revising .

]]> 2021-09-30 12:27:36 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781148194 https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781148239 3 goals I have is adding more useful paragraphs to my essay. I want to be more clear when I’m writing. Also I want to be more specific when I write ]]> 2021-09-30 12:27:37 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781148239 https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781148748 1. I want to write more neatly  

2. I also want to be able to express myself with words more naturally.

3. i want to be able to analyze texts and articles more easily as well so I can provide more in depth essays with more details, so it isn't just "skin & bones".]]> 2021-09-30 12:27:49 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781148748 https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781150225 - A goal that I have in writing is to fix my grammar. Also i need to use better vocabulary in sentences.

- Another goal that I have in writing is to fix deleting some sentences, because sometime I get too into the topic and overwrite.

- I would like to fix my hand writing because I think it is sloppy, what if the people reading my hand-written essay cant read it or figure out what a word is if my hand-writing is sloppy.

]]> 2021-09-30 12:28:25 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781150225 https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781150852 My writing goals are to stop being repetitive when I’m writing. When I was rereading my essay I  realized I used the same sentences over and over again and words. I would like to use/ have more vocabulary when I’m writing. Also use more punctuation and know when I have to use them. 

Janema Vilus ]]> 2021-09-30 12:28:39 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781150852 https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781154077 My 3 writing goals are to add more detail to my paragraphs and to add more organization to get the reader to stay in track. I would also like to add better vocabulary to make it interesting for the reader.]]> 2021-09-30 12:29:55 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781154077 shanep39 https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781167116  - I need to use more complex vocabulary in my writing.
  - I also would like to structure my sentences better. Sometimes I accidentally miss out details. I need my writing to be more descriptive.
- I finally would like to make essays less straightforward. I feel that essays aren’t long enough.]]> 2021-09-30 12:34:28 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781167116 https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781173849 One writing goal that I have is to start using advanced words in my writing. I would also like to start adding more details to my writing so I could make my writing interesting. Finally, I would like to start fixing some grammar mistakes that I may have.]]> 2021-09-30 12:36:47 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781173849 https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781183567 My three goals are to add more important details, use more transitional words and add more writing. ]]> 2021-09-30 12:39:46 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781183567 https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781952095 The writing goals i have is to be more descriptive with my writing so its easier for readers. I also hope to be more clear with what im writing about and more organized, too. I also hope to learn how to use more vocabulary words. ]]> 2021-09-30 16:20:16 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/69l0nwc0iicvi2ha/wish/1781952095