Period 1 Turning Point Peer Feedback by Jacquelyn Jarrell https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io Post a video with a targeted request for feedback. Share your draft so the link is "Anyone with the link can comment." Respond to 3 other peers in your class period. en-us 2025-08-29 16:46:07 UTC 2025-10-06 09:20:10 UTC hello@padlet.com "Learning to Swim" - Ms. Jarrell jjarrell10 https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3576653428 https://docs.google.com/document/d/13zvj76T9idrNKsEs0z11_NJCgIt9tAnpIqJIkjJp1YQ/edit?tab=t.0 Please give me feedback on my snapshots in the middle of the essay. Thanks!

]]> 2025-09-09 19:08:47 UTC https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3576653428 Turning point bfoyle3766 https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3576685893 Hello can you see if my thought shots are good?

]]> 2025-09-09 19:36:56 UTC https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3576685893 "My Life in Cleats"-Jonah Lamay jlamay9982 https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3576694366 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1h58lJhKDAaBXimaWRmhrjLqg2ep-kB6Dumvb2robEQs/edit?tab=t.tk3f7dwpej5y


Hi guys, can I please get feedback to see if I have enough snapshots, and tell me if I have more, please.

]]> 2025-09-09 19:45:33 UTC https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3576694366 "Role Model" - Brock Amorozo https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3576695947 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RosJuwD9z7CRhOOG3xz3_TG-UR1qkrCYYoGgrbsqxMU/edit?usp=sharing


I request feedback for my turning point narrative. I need help on utilizing the snapshots better and more thoroughly.

]]> 2025-09-09 19:47:16 UTC https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3576695947 "My Passion" -Eliana Jones ejones1549 https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3576706899 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Eu1UYDtXxF3uoy1Ms3tkyb3eXq3fju9T5uuyfL7PeUU/edit?usp=sharing


Hi, I think I could use more feedback on my snapshots and thoughtshots because I think I could have added more detail. Thank you!

]]> 2025-09-09 19:58:29 UTC https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3576706899 Stephen Heinrichs sheinrichs5101 https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3576711925 I cant find anywhere to put thoughtshots and snapshots in it to make it longer. pls help!https://docs.google.com/document/d/1yZPr0oKUkQyrvDUXWdC6FHuvW9yxUhy4U8rZ3S9_gxg/edit?tab=t.poglnpd56ad3

]]> 2025-09-09 20:04:12 UTC https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3576711925 FIRST DRAFT: "Coming to Hawaii and Becoming a Priest" - Jacob Rivera jrivera4736 https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3576779987 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1yE5LiIHVC1lDcHGhERLKcF8hY2x5xwcJujSB4t9sEd0/edit?tab=t.tk3f7dwpej5y Can you please give feedback and see if I should have more snapshots and thoughtshots? Thanks.

]]> 2025-09-09 21:23:36 UTC https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3576779987 "Pressure and Passion"-Aria Cogswell acogswell1687 https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3576786764 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DW4kN9tTqvblxMnmwbHOyVxAcf4KWOz7dxvw1tPfKYg/edit?usp=sharing

I just need feedback on whether my draft is good! But any questions, feel free to ask!

]]> 2025-09-09 21:32:57 UTC https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3576786764 FEEDBACK REQUEST mscialabba1563 https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3576796042 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1swqKNmCMs1BTzN449Z4lJpLWwkf8vfNvNVIEireWqes/edit?usp=sharing I really need everyone's thoughts and some suggestions one how to make it longer

]]> 2025-09-09 21:47:51 UTC https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3576796042 "How/why I changed clubs" -Kililani Akina kakina1618 https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3576826148 Hi, could I please get some feedback on my personal narrative? I want some advice on where and what snapshots and thoughtshots I should include. Thankyou! Let me know if you have any questions or any other feedback you would like to add.

Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IAYJIL6KoPE6dc_3SNIC0pV9IhbOEBUWU1afyDB12_4/edit?tab=t.tk3f7dwpej5y

]]> 2025-09-09 22:38:34 UTC https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3576826148 ''My Mental Life"- Grace Heppner gheppner4407 https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3576832375

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Q2XKm6l960kc8Uy3KfPdmdytZ4GdzWMz/edit#heading=h.7cyz0iyh08st

Could I get some feedback on where I can add more snapshots, thought shots, or details?

]]> 2025-09-09 22:49:02 UTC https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3576832375 "Dilemma"- Kira C. kcardona2248 https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3576849067 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1H9T7PhfcOwXBH30D09OdjODxPFuR5jt08FKHEu8cJp8/edit?tab=t.tk3f7dwpej5y


In case you were wondering what the essay's plot is or what my essay is about, I tried to make it about how I was choosing between schools for middle school! I'm requesting feedback on my beginning and towards the middle of my essay, before the highlighted part. Hope this makes sense, thanks!

]]> 2025-09-09 23:13:56 UTC https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3576849067 My trip to Iceland - Azi Moses-Khoii amoseskhoii6134 https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3576873945 I need someone to give me ideas for the snap-shots and thought-shots. Comment on any ideas you have for me.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DMKOS89RoIwk2hLb7PBvl5UXfN_IavW2nOlGK8SVZ2I/edit?usp=sharing


]]> 2025-09-09 23:40:01 UTC https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3576873945 " Letting go of people, you can't hold onto" - Kiahni c kcorpuz7191 https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3576914258 Just a quick summary- I want some feedback on how it sounds, if it makes sense, and if I should move some of the writing around, and also if I should go more into depth or not? Let me know! https://docs.google.com/document/d/1HavtrKpUJ51vzO7q-lKJlEiMsJ9t1a6skXyCiGWI8Ag/edit?usp=sharing

]]> 2025-09-10 00:10:51 UTC https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3576914258 1 Man Island- Thalia Rogers https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3578699153 My names Thalia, and my Personal Narrative is about how I felt lonely last year in 6th Grade. I would like feedback on figurative language I could use and if it is clear.

]]> 2025-09-10 18:45:53 UTC https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3578699153 "Why I Wanna Be A Nurse" -Kaimanahiwalani Kaleimamahu kkaleimamahu5869 https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3578760335 I need feedback on how to fix my narrative.

]]> 2025-09-10 19:41:21 UTC https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3578760335 Nate: The Humbling Expirience ndonnell2302 https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3578771694 I need help putting another paragraph between my last and second-to-last paragraph.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/14yabG0wXp3dd2fKa5yBEIGAE4ZiUtVO3-FLlmDanaHc/edit?tab=t.tk3f7dwpej5y

]]> 2025-09-10 19:53:00 UTC https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3578771694 "Type 1 Diabetes" Nehe nmccallum1520 https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3579174725 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1U2PaJegDSEoPq9zh299BE1HuZwYa-10kQUsESwWQRHo/edit?usp=sharing

Hello Can you please tell me where I can put more snap-shots and thought-shots.

]]> 2025-09-11 01:55:09 UTC https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3579174725 Jyceten Alo https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3579648274 Can I get some feedback, please? I don't think I have really good snapshots in the begining and at the end.

]]> 2025-09-11 06:06:39 UTC https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3579648274 Dance -Sasha Fedorov sfedorov3988 https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3580738235 Hi guys pls tell me if I have enough snapshots and details https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MT0CWYU3vPOK1obwA71FD2-KBVnP8i3QeEONX5pqn8o/edit?usp=sharing

]]> 2025-09-11 18:52:23 UTC https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3580738235 "my perfect barrel" - Tatum Fermahin tfermahin4413 https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3581011269 Hi, please give me feedback and let me know if I need more snapshots or thoughtshots. Thank you https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XQ5b-bMkIuE0D3xC5OiXu04OSBlnjJ0Lwjm3os6IFOs/edit?tab=t.tk3f7dwpej5y

]]> 2025-09-12 00:28:45 UTC https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3581011269 the realization - eames neilson eneilson9615 https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3619635110 I would like some feedback on my snapshots and thoughtshots thank you

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GHrCzJkax5OgqAgVmWQsi5oBxercuu9Bl94gpltOAqU/edit?tab=t.lz4g34hhi06

]]> 2025-10-06 09:20:09 UTC https://padlet.com/englishhta/68u9zxdmos27c0io/wish/3619635110