⋆ ˚｡⋆୨୧˚🥀 Jax A.Google Sites Peer Feedback 2021 - 2022 🥀˚୨୧⋆｡˚ ⋆ by Eion Ayotunde https://padlet.com/28eayotunde/67vpsfj8cnq9cfk1 ❝Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome!❞ en-us 2021-10-04 15:26:57 UTC 2025-10-02 15:42:59 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-uploads.storage.googleapis.com/726440779/a228b9ffc27c191b112168e60fe3be80/E8E7A131_405E_4CD0_90BF_692D05C8B348.png Saya 28szamor https://padlet.com/28eayotunde/67vpsfj8cnq9cfk1/wish/1796839128
Jax I loved how you added important information like what discord is “Discord is an app that you can use to talk with your friends or you can create servers or join one and meet new people!”. I also loved how enthusiastic you were about talking about your likes. Another thing I loved about your “Cozy Cafe of Wonders” was how every sentence was properly punctuated and how your sentences were to the point. One thing I think you could do better is add more things than your likes.(for example add dislikes your favorite type of writing)]]> 2021-10-06 15:04:15 UTC https://padlet.com/28eayotunde/67vpsfj8cnq9cfk1/wish/1796839128 Emilie Thomas 28ethomas1 https://padlet.com/28eayotunde/67vpsfj8cnq9cfk1/wish/1796954738 One thing I really loved about your site was the theme. I love how you wrote like you were treating someone at the door of your cafe. I think that that was a really cool fetcher. It really feels like I am in a cafe. Another thing I loved about your about me piece is all the extra stuff you added. You added photos and thing that you liked to the end of your piece. I know it is not part of the precise but I just love it so much. However, I do think that you could have added just a little more detail. I really did think and wounded a little more about some of you topics. Other than that I really liked.


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