[2024] 3IN Deforestation Mural Design by

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aesamkp — 2024-05-01 10:30:12 UTC

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(1) Draft

(2) Final Design

Reflection

(1) Describe your mural design.

(2) What is the message that you want to convey to your viewers?

(3) Share your artmaking experiences.

For example, did you face any challenges? How did you overcome them? What were you most proud of? Did you make any changes from the draft to final design? If so, why?

(4) Did you enjoy the Artist-In-School Scheme experience with local Artist Tan Zi Xi? Share your thoughts!

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CHARU (1)

2024-05-07 04:45:33 UTC

I had fun making my art post but it was a bit difficult for me to draw some things but i did not give up i tried to draw it

2024-05-07 04:46:43 UTC

So i draw me and a plant and a tree and a sun and i put a seed.

2024-05-07 04:47:11 UTC

1) So on the left the treehouse is getting ruined and the place is getting broken while on the right the is a nice treehouse with a pond and the place is not ruined and the trees and everything has no fire and no ashes and black spots to ruined nature

2)It took me a lot of time to colour the grass and colour the sky and halfway of doing it my hand was a little pain and i have to
shake my hand to make it feel better.

3)Good luck on your artwork.

Maverick 24 3in

2024-05-07 04:47:24 UTC

First one just deforst 2 is manmade defirest

2024-05-07 04:49:12 UTC

And i put a flowers on it and i like it so much becausei did it.

Half the water is gray and other is blue

2024-05-07 04:52:51 UTC

Very hard. (33)Aaron Nyein Chan Zay

2024-05-07 04:53:14 UTC

I feel bad because we chop down to many tree and super dirty water so plant some tree so i drew this drawing so pls plant it so pls may or may not vote for me and i use my fravot color

2024-05-07 04:53:58 UTC

This is a picture is alot of trees cut down sadly to make peoples loveings things,papers,tiolet roll,book.

When i draw it it is easy but when i colour it it is hard because i colour the whole thing

2024-05-07 04:54:00 UTC

2024-05-07 04:55:46 UTC

When I started working on my work, I thought it was challenging, but after a while, I realised that it was not as hard as I thought. I learned that only if you try to do it, you can do it. I think we should take more care of our envoirment. I also think that this drawing can encourage others to stop harming the envoirment. Yes, I like the experience, although she did not meet us face to face, she helped us improved on our second draph.

2024-05-07 04:57:17 UTC

I like my drawing an its a little hard but i still tried my best so
if its possible please please try to vote for my work
if you vote for my work than thank you so much
if you like for my work i will also vote for your work
so please like my work

2024-05-07 04:58:56 UTC

I put a lot of offort and thought into these drawings. But I like drawing a lot and I like this project and I felt good.

Aiden Gao (20)

2024-05-07 04:59:50 UTC

I draw some trees then I drew many othe things

2024-05-07 05:00:10 UTC

(1) I feel like my drawing was nice beacouse I blended the colours.(2)?[3]I did not face any challenges.(4)I like his work beacause he blended more colours than me.

2024-05-07 05:01:44 UTC

The draft I didn't colour is because I have no time and I did not face any challenges and also I enjoy scheme experience with the local artist tan zi xi

Aiden Gao (20)

2024-05-07 05:02:12 UTC

I enjoyed the Artist-In-School Scheme experience It was an intresting lesson

2024-05-07 05:03:31 UTC

I had fun colouring and drawing,but it was difficult to colour all of the blank spaces.My drawing reminds me to always plant and not cut down trees.

There is a tree that is cut down but excent the one tree and the other side is a city

2024-05-07 05:04:36 UTC

2024-05-07 05:05:13 UTC

My drawing is a tree that is cutted down by the hunters to distroy homes on the tree . Please choose me ! I am not falsing you to do that but you can give me a like as a friend!

I faced some challenges !
Like trying to catch up for the colouring and to make no white spaces. But I tried to go through my challenges and I over came it !

I enjoyed the ARTIST-IN-SCHOOL Scheme experience with local Artist Tan Zi Xi because it was fun and exiting !

As you can see there is man cutting down a tree and there are roses clouds everywere

2024-05-07 05:05:13 UTC

2024-05-07 05:06:12 UTC

So the tree that the girl plant was getting chop by the chopper,when the girl die before she play with the tree.After that in the night,a bad boy with a matches,and he fire before another plant was growing.I would send a message that says "how do you feel when the tree was chop and got on fire" to the viewers.So I do enjoy seeing the artist tan zi xi in zoom meeting,it was fun to see her in school or zoom meeting.

2024-05-07 05:07:43 UTC

1 So for the first draft i did a tree house about to fall beacuse people are attacking it and causing fire 2 the message is for people to stop choping down trees and to protect the earth for an healty life and for the earth 3 i faced a difficulty to come up with an idea that is good but easy to draw it out once i saw the moon board i straight away knew what i was going to draw and it turned out preety good i will say 4 yes i enjoyed messy mixi coming to our school and talking to us about her life and about how she did her famous art work the plasic ocean

Even though it do not look realistic, I still admire it

2024-05-07 05:08:04 UTC

The earth is worried because animals will lose their homes. Yes,I liked the experince

And vote for me

2024-05-07 05:08:08 UTC

The final design I draw more thing but that gave me less time to colour

2024-05-07 05:09:05 UTC

Maverick (3 In) [24]

2024-05-07 05:09:51 UTC

I enjoyed the art thing i liked everything i have i wanna say its nice its just nice it just nice

2024-05-07 05:10:03 UTC

My design is an cycle about an forsest being cut down by people who has chainsaws, and the animals who lives there had lost their home, while the trees gets transported to another forest and build an tree house, soon the tree house get dirty and bugs came and it becomes their home. So the humans plant trees to make an tree house. It is all just an cycle. All living things have an cycle. I have face many problems and started to feel like giving up but never give up and went though all the problems. I was happy when my work was showed onto the screen.

Maverick (3 IN) [24]

2024-05-07 05:10:21 UTC

I just like all of this

Rania (10)

2024-05-07 05:10:23 UTC

I tried to make my artwork opaque but I did not finish in time.

The message I want to say is Quit Deforestation to save more trees.

Some challenges I faced was when I could not finish in time or when my pencil kept breaking.

When Artist Tan Zi Xi came into my school,I learened that she published a book. I felt happy when she came.

2024-05-07 05:10:50 UTC

I did this design because it remind me that we should protect the environent if not this will happen

Maverick (3 In) [24]

2024-05-07 05:10:56 UTC

I enjoy everything

2024-05-07 05:11:20 UTC

I feel bad

Maverick (3IN) [24]

2024-05-07 05:12:14 UTC

I like my drawing

I liked the artist coming to our school and i think that our school should invite more and more artists to come and talk about their artworks

2024-05-07 05:12:23 UTC

Youhan

2024-05-07 05:13:07 UTC

I like it clarice 100%shure

Zara

2024-05-07 05:13:11 UTC

I like your work because i like your drawing

Thara (3 in) [13]

2024-05-07 05:13:18 UTC

I like it beacuse i love the swirly trees and the cold and hot side

Freedia

2024-05-07 05:13:26 UTC

I like your work

varshan (38)

2024-05-07 05:13:38 UTC

I enjoy talking ms zi xi tan and I hope everyone will like my art work

2024-05-07 05:13:42 UTC

There are trucks that are carrying wood to the factory to make furniture and destroying tree land .Bob(the tree in the car)was running away becuase of deforestation.What i am trying to tell you is not to cut down too many trees if not they will leave the place forever. The part i am most proud of is the plane.I enjoyed ms tan talking to us.

Freedia

2024-05-07 05:13:43 UTC

I like your work

rachel 3IN (9)

2024-05-07 05:13:44 UTC

My art work is about deforestation with the trees cut down burned down with the smoke covering the sky from the factory by the girl. By the butterflys and flower flowing down it looks depression.

When tan zi xi came to our school i was excited and i also enjoy her artworks .

I was proud of my art work when i was drawing i never drew so much before and nicer

2024-05-07 05:13:47 UTC

At first I drew some trees being cutting down and then add some animals running away.

2024-05-07 05:13:59 UTC

There are trees being cut down and birds flying away

Freedia

2024-05-07 05:14:06 UTC

I love your work

Youhan

2024-05-07 05:14:22 UTC

Soo cute I like it !

2024-05-07 05:14:42 UTC

A man was cutting a tree whan it rained and he will put in the log factory and the leafs he will put in the leaf factory there was a pig and a fox they were just chilling and walking the pig was staying at the same spot and that guy is holding the umbrella so he dont get wet

I am zara i like your work so much because i love it

2024-05-07 05:14:44 UTC

Nicole(6)

2024-05-07 05:14:52 UTC

I did this art work because we need to help the enviroment.

Sophia

2024-05-07 05:14:56 UTC

I like your work

Oscar (3IN)

2024-05-07 05:15:00 UTC

I like your work

Clarice

2024-05-07 05:15:01 UTC

I like your work because the houses are intresting and beautiful

2024-05-07 05:15:07 UTC

I love this

Bozhao

2024-05-07 05:15:08 UTC

I LOVE IT <3

Youhan

2024-05-07 05:15:21 UTC

Soo cute I like it ❤️

Seng kun(22)

2024-05-07 05:15:33 UTC

I like yours

Lishanth 3-IN

2024-05-07 05:15:35 UTC

I like your drawing

Ye Hong

2024-05-07 05:15:51 UTC

IT LOOK SO COOL

Zara

2024-05-07 05:16:13 UTC

I like your work because i love it so much

Aufa : nice work,!

2024-05-07 05:16:26 UTC

Foo shi lok(23) is this ww2?

2024-05-07 05:16:27 UTC

Oscar (3IN)

2024-05-07 05:16:31 UTC

I like your work

Zhi qi

2024-05-07 05:16:32 UTC

I love yours

2024-05-07 05:16:38 UTC

My final design is a tree factory with a lot of people cutting down trees it has a tree factory,a truck and alot of people cutting down trees it was very hard to draw as i cant think of anything to draw.

I like your art work

2024-05-07 05:16:49 UTC

Heidi

2024-05-07 05:16:50 UTC

Nicole I love your drawing

Nathan 39

2024-05-07 05:16:53 UTC

I like your work because its perfect

Samuel(3in)

2024-05-07 05:17:03 UTC

I like your earth

Sophia

2024-05-07 05:17:03 UTC

Great work

absent 7/5

aesamkp — 2024-05-07 05:17:05 UTC

Clarice

2024-05-07 05:17:08 UTC

I like your work because it is meaningful and it also looks nice

varshan (38)

2024-05-07 05:17:13 UTC

I love your artwork I see you put in your affort
It is really nice

absent 7/5

aesamkp — 2024-05-07 05:17:25 UTC

Bozhao

2024-05-07 05:17:31 UTC

I LOVE IT💕
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Lishanth 3-IN

2024-05-07 05:17:37 UTC

Amazing work!!!!!

Zhiqi

2024-05-07 05:17:41 UTC

I love yours❤️

Thara (3 in) [13]

2024-05-07 05:17:48 UTC

I like it

Akifa

2024-05-07 05:17:49 UTC

I like your design because is pretty,sad and the girl is cute<3

Oscar (3IN)

2024-05-07 05:17:54 UTC

I like your drawing

Maverick

2024-05-07 05:18:15 UTC

nice! Love u.

2024-05-07 05:18:29 UTC

This is a pictuer of peolpe that they live in a tree house and to plan tree and flower to make them glow up for peolpe to pick up apple and my art is a tree house and a tree of flower and I like meeting tan zi xi.

Charu

aesamkp — 2024-05-07 05:18:32 UTC

I love your drawing it is sooooo cute

Aiden Gao (20)

2024-05-07 05:18:49 UTC

I like your work

Nicole

2024-05-07 05:18:51 UTC

I like your work

Nathan 39

2024-05-07 05:19:00 UTC

I like your work

Samuel(3in)

2024-05-07 05:19:10 UTC

Your artwork is amazing!

Sophia

2024-05-07 05:19:24 UTC

I love the tree house❤️

Heidi

2024-05-07 05:19:29 UTC

I love your drawing

Clarice

2024-05-07 05:19:33 UTC

I like your artwork because the colouring is very neat and it always reminds me to not destroy or cut down trees

BOYI

2024-05-07 05:19:35 UTC

this is the best post ever u will deffinly i also want
to learn from u

Aufa nice job heidi

2024-05-07 05:19:53 UTC

Haoteng 3in I like your art work

2024-05-07 05:19:55 UTC

Kayden

2024-05-07 05:19:56 UTC

Your work is amazing!

Foo shi lok (23) nice treehouse

2024-05-07 05:20:03 UTC

Yahya

2024-05-07 05:20:26 UTC

I like your tree factory drawing

Charu

aesamkp — 2024-05-07 05:20:30 UTC

Your drawing is soo cool

Xin ya

2024-05-07 05:20:38 UTC

I like your drawing because is very nice

Samuel(3in)

2024-05-07 05:20:40 UTC

Outstanding peice of work.

Lucius

2024-05-07 05:20:50 UTC

I like your work because it is interesting.

Aufa niceeeee rania

2024-05-07 05:20:56 UTC

varshan (38)

2024-05-07 05:21:04 UTC

I love your artwork and i see you put in a hardwork nice

Foo shi lok (23) kaa boooommmmm

2024-05-07 05:21:09 UTC

Bozhao

2024-05-07 05:21:16 UTC

I LIKE IT SOOOOO MUCH IWILL VOTE FOR U :)

Xin ya

2024-05-07 05:22:36 UTC

I like it because is so cute

I love it

2024-05-07 05:22:36 UTC

Thara (13) 3 in

Maevrcik

2024-05-07 05:22:39 UTC

oh yo! Its 3D

Foo shi lok (23) so realistic

2024-05-07 05:22:39 UTC

I like your drawing

2024-05-07 05:22:40 UTC

Seng kun(22)

2024-05-07 05:22:49 UTC

I like yours

Rania

2024-05-07 05:22:52 UTC

Love your work!

Maverick

2024-05-07 05:23:06 UTC

YOOOO COOL

Nathan 39

2024-05-07 05:23:11 UTC

I like your work

Maveruck

2024-05-07 05:23:29 UTC

YOOOO COOOL

BOYI

2024-05-07 05:23:35 UTC

You got such a good work

Nicole

2024-05-07 05:23:39 UTC

Nice work

Rania

2024-05-07 05:23:39 UTC

Your work is awesome!

varshan (38)

2024-05-07 05:23:40 UTC

I like your artwork you do very good I love it

Xin ya

2024-05-07 05:23:45 UTC

Is very nice❤️🤍

Keshika:I did alot for my final art work. Hope you like it.

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2024-05-07 05:24:01 UTC

I feel bad TREE

Lucius

2024-05-07 05:24:32 UTC

I like your work

Firdaus

2024-05-07 05:24:35 UTC

Well done!!!!!!'!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aaron

2024-05-07 05:25:01 UTC

So cooooooool!!!😇😮

Rachel 3in (9)

2024-05-07 05:25:04 UTC

My artwork is about trees getting cut down by the girl worker and the factory smoke is covering the whole sky dark but able to see the blue sky butterflys and flower blowing through the air was like a nature.

I tried my best drawing

When tan zi xi came to our school i was very excited and enjoying her art work

I felt proud for my art because i never drew that good before

Keshika

2024-05-07 05:25:06 UTC

I like how u drew it!

Lishanth 3IN

2024-05-07 05:25:07 UTC

Tremendous work

Mvearick

2024-05-07 05:25:11 UTC

No one l~like me..?~
😭😭
😭😭
W~why...

Charu

aesamkp — 2024-05-07 05:25:18 UTC

It is super cuteyyyy

Nicole

2024-05-07 05:25:24 UTC

Nice job

Seng kun(22)

2024-05-07 05:25:27 UTC

I like yours

Xin ya

2024-05-07 05:25:29 UTC

Is so cute

Akifa

2024-05-07 05:25:30 UTC

I like your work so much

Ye hong

2024-05-07 05:25:42 UTC

Looking good and nice

Rania

2024-05-07 05:25:47 UTC

Not bad. Like it!

Keshika

2024-05-07 05:25:59 UTC

I like it!

Yahya

2024-05-07 05:26:19 UTC

I like you art work

BOYI

2024-05-07 05:26:23 UTC

Your work is so nice

Look cool

2024-05-07 05:26:29 UTC

Matin

2024-05-07 05:26:38 UTC

I nice

Haoteng 3in i like your artwork

2024-05-07 05:26:43 UTC

Thanks yehong 🙂‍↔️

2024-05-07 05:27:00 UTC

Thanks :)

2024-05-07 05:27:15 UTC

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Ms Liao

aesamkp — 2024-05-09 07:14:40 UTC

Charu, I think your ideas about a world without trees and its effect on the climate are really interesting! However, I noticed that your final work isn't as clear as your first draft. You could make it better by improving your colouring techniques to express your ideas more clearly.

Ms Liao

aesamkp — 2024-05-09 07:20:13 UTC

Clarice, you haven't finished the reflection task. I appreciate your effort in telling a story through a life cycle diagram. You might want to think about making the cycle continuous. For example, stage 6 could lead back to stage 1, so the cycle never stops. Also, adding more details to each cycle could make your narrative even better.

Ms Liao

aesamkp — 2024-05-09 07:23:35 UTC

Aufa, the idea of rose clouds is interesting. I wish you could elaborate more on that.

Ms Liao

aesamkp — 2024-05-09 07:29:48 UTC

Freedia, I think you've done a fantastic job coloring your image! Maybe you were putting too much pressure on your hand or had poor posture, which could strain it. Next time, you can try layering the colors so they're still vibrant but won't hurt your hand.

I also like your idea of contrasting the utopia (on the right) and dystopia (on the left) states. I thought it would have been nice if you had more time to complete the coloring on the right. However, you might want to consider reducing the intensity of colors so that they gradually fade towards the right.

Ms Liao

aesamkp — 2024-05-09 07:35:45 UTC

Heidi, I'm not entirely sure what you mean by "Longan Planet." Your work is very imaginative, but it would be helpful if you could explain it more clearly.

Ms Liao

aesamkp — 2024-05-09 07:39:09 UTC

Nicole, I really like the initial idea in your draft - the little men with yellow protective hats look really interesting in contrast to the gigantic plants. I wish you could explore this idea further or make the draft more complete. Your final design looks very imaginative too! However, you need to work on presenting and explaining your ideas better.

Ms Liao

aesamkp — 2024-05-09 07:45:54 UTC

Akifa, I like how you attempted to use a comic strip to tell a story. You might want to consider better use of the paper so it looks more complete. For example, you could think about the design of the "title" section.

Ms Liao

aesamkp — 2024-05-09 07:50:12 UTC

Rachel, I agree that you've made a good drawing - I can see the foreground, middle ground, and background. You could work on your coloring techniques (remember Ms. Liao's demo?) to make your picture more complete and detailed.

Ms Liao

aesamkp — 2024-05-09 07:53:41 UTC

Rania, you've put in great effort in colouring! The colours are vibrant, and I can see some gradient in the clouds. Good job. To improve your work, you can consider overlapping some of the elements in your picture - that way, the viewer can distinguish what is closer or further away. Right now, the tree stumps and chimneys seem to be floating in mid-air!

Ms Liao

aesamkp — 2024-05-09 07:57:10 UTC

Zhi Qi, your illustration is indeed very cute! I like it very much. However, it may be better if you can include elements in your picture to show the products that the trees are used for, as stated in your reflections.

AB 2/5

aesamkp — 2024-05-09 08:02:32 UTC

Ms Liao

aesamkp — 2024-05-09 08:10:09 UTC

Tharanika, I think your ideas have really evolved since the 1st draft. Good job! It's not uncommon for artists to struggle with generating ideas, and they often make multiple drafts before deciding on a final design.

Ms Liao

aesamkp — 2024-05-09 08:14:59 UTC

Xin Ya, I like your story about people co-existing with trees. However, the storyline is not very clear, and you could consider working on improving the flow. For example, I'm not sure which frame comes first - is it the bottom left or bottom right? Maybe a linear composition (from left to right) may work better with your idea.

Ms Liao

aesamkp — 2024-05-09 08:20:16 UTC

Sophia, I like the cute trees you have drawn. I am curious about the rectangles that are framing each image in your artwork - what are they? It made me think of a wall of family photos framed up! It could have been interesting if you had made these "portrait" of trees in different wooden photo frames.

Finally, I think you can improve on your colouring techniques (remember Ms. Liao's demo?) to enhance and make your artwork look more complete.

Ms Liao

aesamkp — 2024-05-09 09:29:39 UTC

Keshika, I like your illustration style - however, I am curious how this is related to the assigned theme & sub-theme: Deforestation | Home?

Ms Liao

aesamkp — 2024-05-09 09:32:48 UTC

Zara, I like how you have coloured your image - I wished you had more time to complete your artwork. Next time, you can consider using a smaller area and working on the most important part of the design first.

Ms Liao

aesamkp — 2024-05-09 09:38:05 UTC

Thank you, Youhan, for putting in so much effort to finish the artwork. I like the gradients of blues in the sky and your idea of showing how loggers removed trees for homes. However, I think you can expand on the idea further - after all, the forests are also homes for other animals and smaller plants. Finally, you can also explain your artwork better by elaborating on the reasons for your choices. (By the way, hunters don't cut down trees!)

Ms Liao

aesamkp — 2024-05-09 09:42:06 UTC

Aiden, I like how you contrast a block of HDB flats with a treehouse - it reminds me of the importance of balancing the relationship between progress and conservation of our nature. I think you can expand on those ideas and improve your drawing by considering what's in the foreground and what is in the background (things can be overlapped!). That way, your picture will have depth.

Ms Liao

aesamkp — 2024-05-09 09:45:18 UTC

Lishanth, thank you for your good effort in creating your artwork. You can consider overlapping some of the tree stumps and changing their sizes to make some appear to be in the foreground, while others are in the background. This technique will add depth to your artwork.

Ms Liao

aesamkp — 2024-05-09 09:48:34 UTC

Shi Lok, I'm impressed by how you've improved from the draft to the final version. In your final design, I can see that you've added more depth to your work by incorporating a horizon line to distinguish what is in front and what's further away. Your work is also neat, and I appreciate the monochromatic design with emphasis only on the sun and a small area with flowers. I'm curious why you chose to emphasize these areas, and whether it was intentional that they look like mirror images.

Ms Liao

aesamkp — 2024-05-09 09:52:51 UTC

Ye Hong, I appreciate the detailed drawing of the aircraft you've created. However, I want to remind you that the assignment brief calls for a "POSITIVE & BEAUTIFUL" mood. You might want to consider incorporating elements that evoke positivity and beauty into your artwork to align more closely with the assignment brief.

Ms Liao

aesamkp — 2024-05-09 09:55:43 UTC

Hao Teng, I appreciate the potential pun in your work - the trees being removed for a manufacturing plant is quite clever. Ms. Liao is also very proud of you for putting in so much effort to complete the work and for improving your colouring techniques with watercolour pencils. Keep up the great work!