Procedural Text Features by Lauren https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu Use this Padlet wall to share what features you found helpful with procedural text. Click inside the space and a sticky note will pop up. Write your name and what features you found helpful and unhelpful. Write down as many features you found helpful and not helpful. There is an example already done for you. en-us 2020-02-06 03:00:45 UTC 2026-02-26 06:31:34 UTC hello@padlet.com Lauren lauren_guy https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/441344462 Helpful:
1. Titles

Unhelpful:
1.no color]]> 2020-02-06 03:09:50 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/441344462 Bella carolinejfreeman https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/442669244 Helpful:
Headings
Bullet points
Ingredients
Unhelpful:
Sometimes the colours were to distracting

]]> 2020-02-09 10:44:37 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/442669244 Dylan https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/442829621 Helpful:
Enough detail
Way to do
Have conneted pictures
Unhelpful:
Some words are too small
No info about where to get it]]> 2020-02-10 02:42:14 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/442829621 Bo https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/442834554 Helpful:
- Pictures
- Lots of details
- The information was organized
Unhelpful:
- So of the pictures were unnecessary and distracting.]]> 2020-02-10 03:03:18 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/442834554 Maggie 🤖 https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/442848707 How to make a robot cake
Helpful:
Clear instructions
Precise quantities 
Organized 
Unhelpful:
To many graphics]]> 2020-02-10 04:14:38 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/442848707 Patrick Make a robot cake 🍰 💩 https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/442849531 Helpful:
What Finish product looks like 
Good instructions 
Very detailed 
Unhelpful:
One picture very big takes up most of the page]]> 2020-02-10 04:19:27 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/442849531 Kira https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/442859225 Helpful:
instructions are in a list form 
and short sentences 
pictures
unhelpful
 not so much space between the words]]> 2020-02-10 05:16:36 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/442859225 Louis https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/442881906 Helpful:
 - shows numbered steps
 - the warning was funny
 - a real picture helped see what it should look like
 Unhelpful:
 - no real picture
 - no specific amount ingredients
 - putting paragraphs
 - putting doodles was distracting
 - tiny words make it hard to read]]> 2020-02-10 07:31:29 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/442881906 Timothy 💣 https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/442938975    I like:
~Lists 
~Color 
~Bullet points 
~Numbers 
~Short Descriptions
~Little pictures 

   I don’t like:
~Too long writing 
~No color ]]> 2020-02-10 11:05:37 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/442938975 Ian https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/443413663 Helpful: 
colors
pictures
list
steps

Unhelpful:
alot of writting 
very fant colors

]]> 2020-02-11 00:34:46 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/443413663 Yujean https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/443418683 Helpful: 
Detailed and clear instructions 
Connected pictures
The instructions were organized 
How the finished product looked like 
Unhelpful:
Some unnecessary pictures or text
To many pictures taking up the space

]]> 2020-02-11 00:52:36 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/443418683 Alana https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/443420461 Helpful: 
- Titles
-  Sketches of Final product
-  Short facts/words
- pictures to go with the text
Unhelpful:
-  Crowded Pictures/ writing 
-  No colour
-  Long sentences
-  No website names (Plagiarism)]]> 2020-02-11 00:58:37 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/443420461 Charlie https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/443441765 Helpful
- fun
- colourful
- list format

unhelpful

- not enough pictures to each step
- complicated instructions



]]> 2020-02-11 01:59:57 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/443441765 Sam https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/443469032 Helpful:
-Exact and clear instructions
-End pictures
-Pictures showing what to do
-Tips
Unhelpful:
-grey pictures
-no indication where to get things in the instructions

]]> 2020-02-11 03:31:54 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/443469032 Maria https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/443470832 Helpful
____________________
>Vibrant colours 
>Clear instructions 
>Pictures

>Unhelpful 
____________________
>Too much writing 
>In one of them there is too much graphics/Little pictures]]> 2020-02-11 03:37:49 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/443470832 Jessica https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/443473188 ★Helpful:☆
•Lists
•Clear writing (Neat handwriting)
•Not to big or to small writing 
•Pictures 
•Daft (s)
•Credits or sources
•paragraphs

×Not HELPFUL×
•writing everywhere 
•too small/big hand writing
•Hard-to-read-font
•too many pictures or icons
•no paragraphs]]> 2020-02-11 03:46:55 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/443473188 Patrick https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/443481086 helpful:the quantities 
unhelpful: to much writing. ]]> 2020-02-11 04:19:30 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/443481086 patrick https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/443482942 not that much detail
helpful: picture of the finished product. ]]> 2020-02-11 04:28:11 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/443482942 patrick https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/443483548 helpful: saying the equipment i needed to make the thing
unhelpful: to many pictures.


]]> 2020-02-11 04:31:17 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/443483548 patrick https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/443484549 helpful: very detailed and just the right amount of pictures.

]]> 2020-02-11 04:35:44 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/443484549 Oscar https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/443567670 Helpful but the feeder was the best one ]]> 2020-02-11 10:15:41 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/443567670 Ebba😎😃 https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/443567877 Helpful:
-Fun pictures
-Bullet points

Unhelpful:
-Lots of text
-Only one big picture]]> 2020-02-11 10:16:05 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/443567877 Oscar https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/443568994 Nothing was bad ]]> 2020-02-11 10:19:30 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/443568994 Jacob 👍robot cake https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444051553 Things that helped:
Bullet points 
Pictures 
Lots of words 
Detailed ingredient list

Things that could be better:
Helping pictures 
What to do with the ingredients 
Less confusing words]]> 2020-02-11 22:47:16 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444051553 James https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444087244 Helpful : the numbers and the instructions.
non-helpful: pictures and no colour.]]> 2020-02-12 00:39:46 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444087244 Emi https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444108403 Helpful:
- Bullet Points
- Pictures
- Titles
- Sources
Unhelpful:
- Long sentences
- To much writing
- Some words are too 
small]]> 2020-02-12 01:43:04 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444108403 Suri😋robot cake🤖 https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444133803 helpful:
organised
bullet points
tells you what you need/ingredients
 
not helpful:
The text is cramped up
more pictures 

effective:
what was effective was the bullet points.]]> 2020-02-12 03:03:07 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444133803 Suri 🍫☕️chocolate mug cake https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444141101 helpful: 
warning sign 
pictures

not helpful:
better drawings
bigger text

effective:
what was effective was the warning sign

 ]]> 2020-02-12 03:33:04 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444141101 Suri 🤠pumkin feeder https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444146872
helpful:
What to do sign

not helpful
to much text
effective:
what was effective was the what to do sign.]]> 2020-02-12 03:55:37 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444146872 Suri coffee https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444157791 helpful:
Pictures 

nothing bad

what was effective was the pictures.]]> 2020-02-12 04:44:27 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444157791 Josephine https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444171811 helpful:
-short text
-pictures/drawing
-Names and Date
-warning sign

Not helpful
-too much text
-hard questions
-rumbled words
-ugly drawing
-big words





]]> 2020-02-12 06:15:51 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444171811 Lila - Magic 5-minute chocolate mug cake https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444183373 helpful:  Numbered steps to help understand the instructions 

unhelpful:  The pictures do not help understand the instructions

Best: My favourite is the mug cake because it has a little warning at the end which was fun]]> 2020-02-12 07:21:51 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444183373 Calleigh - Pumpkin Feeder :3 https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444183631 Helpful :
Tips
What to do/what you need

Un-helpful :
Pictures
Showing us links

Best:
My favourite one was the Pumpkin Feeder :3

]]> 2020-02-12 07:23:05 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444183631 Anagha🐾✨💖🍫🍫🍫chocolate mug cake! https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444190714 -helpful
1. pictures 
2. instructions
3. illustrater
-Not helpful
1.small words
2. too less images and too much text
3.too many instructions]]> 2020-02-12 07:49:47 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444190714 Leah https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444580147 Robot cake
Helpful
1 tells how to cut the cake
2 says exactly how much you need
Unhelpful 
1 doesn’t say how long to bake it for
2 doesn’t say how to decorate it ]]> 2020-02-12 19:05:43 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444580147 Ruby https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444738502 Robot cake
-Helpful
1. Pictures
2. Instructions
3. What you need 
Nothing was bad
 


]]> 2020-02-13 00:23:57 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444738502 Ritwik https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444750429 Make A Robot Cake
helpful
1.Numberings
2.exact mesurment
unhelpful
1.too much illustration  
 ]]> 2020-02-13 01:04:45 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444750429 Ritwik https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444758296 Chocolate Mug Cake
helpful
1.numberings
2. illustrations have labels
unhelpful 
nothing]]> 2020-02-13 01:27:29 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444758296 Ritwik https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444760771 Pumkin Feeder
helpfull
1.numberings
2.tips
3.real pictures
unhelpful
nothing]]> 2020-02-13 01:35:32 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444760771 Kimmi-Robot Cake https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444761400 -Helpful
1.Pictures
2.Colours
3. Titles(to see what you are making)
4.Instructions
5.Ingredients 
Nothing was unhelpful!!!]]> 2020-02-13 01:37:19 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444761400 Ritwik https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444762868 milk coffe
helpful
1.real life pictures
2.ingredients
unhelpful
1.not so specific]]> 2020-02-13 01:41:41 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444762868 Kimmi-Pumpkin Feeder https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444763022 -Helpful
1. Picture of final product
2.Tips

-Unhelpful 
1.Maybe a bit more colour
2. More pictures or drawings]]> 2020-02-13 01:42:11 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444763022 Ruby https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444764476 Magic 5 minute chocolate mug cake
helpful
1) very colorful
2) instructions 
3) what to do 
unhelpful
1) It made me so hungry]]> 2020-02-13 01:46:14 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444764476 Kimmi-Coffee(With Milk) https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444764507 -Helpful
1. Real pictures

-Unhelpful
1. Needs more colour
2. More fun pictures]]> 2020-02-13 01:46:19 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444764507 Kimmi-Magic 5 minute chocolate mug cake https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444765621 -Helpful
1). Drawings are really nice
2). A lot of colour
3). Very detailed instructions

NOTHING WAS BAD

]]> 2020-02-13 01:49:30 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444765621 Ritwik https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444765815 marionette
helpful
1.numberings
unhelpful
1.too much text]]> 2020-02-13 01:50:04 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444765815 Ruby https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444766343 Pumpkin Feeder
helpful
1) instructions
2) finished picture
unhelpful
nothing was unhelpful]]> 2020-02-13 01:51:52 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444766343 Ruby https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444768592 Marionette
1) fun pictures
2) instructions
unhelpful
1) the words were to small
2) No COLOUR!!!!!!!!!!]]> 2020-02-13 01:59:30 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444768592 Kimmi-Marionette https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444768808 -Helpful
1). Instructions
-Unhelpful
1). Text was super small
2). No COLOUR
3). Non coloured pictures!]]> 2020-02-13 02:00:14 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444768808 Ruby https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444769608 Coffee ( with milk)
helpful
1)  very precise
2)  what i need
3)  nice picture
nothing was bad ]]> 2020-02-13 02:03:04 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444769608 Matias 👍 https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444819784   I liked 


Bullet points 
Short Descriptions
Numbers
Lists
Color

   I didn’t like
The long writing 
No color
Little pictures 

]]> 2020-02-13 05:32:15 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444819784 William https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444819986 Make a robot cake 🤖 
Helpful:
1. Clear instructions 
2. Nice pictures 
Unhelpful:
1. Needs more color
2. Too much text]]> 2020-02-13 05:33:36 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444819986 William https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444821992 Magic 5-minute chocolate mug cake
Helpful:
1. Drawing
2. Nice amount of text 
3. Funny warning 
Nothing was unhelpful]]> 2020-02-13 05:48:51 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444821992 Josephine- 5 minute chocolate Mug cake https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444822118 Helpful:
  1. drawing
  2. warning sign
  3. less text 
  4. Name and  Date
Not Helpful:

  1.  Warning sign to tell if it is Dangerous or not






]]> 2020-02-13 05:49:42 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444822118 William https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444823682 Pumpkin Feeder
Helpful:
1. Tips
2. Nice picture 
3. Clear instructions
4. "What to do" and "What you need"
Nothing was unhelpful]]> 2020-02-13 06:01:56 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444823682 William https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444824814 Coffee (with milk)
Helpful:
1. Very exact instructions         
2. Clear pictures
Unhelpful:
1. Needs more color
2.]]> 2020-02-13 06:11:41 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444824814 Oliver ⛷ https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444853735 Helpful:
 
Pictures, tips, step numbers, large words, clearly states what you need, template diagram clear, tips at the end, pictures not obstructing the words

Unhelpful:

Illustrations getting in the way, comments at the end of the text (Emails, contact information), tiny words that are hard to read, imperial system, no clear title

]]> 2020-02-13 08:28:41 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444853735 Georgie https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444855025 Make a robot cake
Helpful
1.Clear instructions
2.Pictures
3.Titles to know where you are in the process
Unhelpful
Nothing was unhelpful]]> 2020-02-13 08:33:12 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444855025 Georgie-Magic 5 minute chocolate cake https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444858427 Helpful
1.detailed instructions
2.A lot of colour
3.Drawings are nice

Nothings unhelpful! ]]> 2020-02-13 08:44:46 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444858427 Georgie https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444859585 Pumpkin Feeder
Helpful
1.Tips 
2.Finished picture
3.Things to help you just incase
Unhelpful 
1.Needs more colour
2.More drawings or pictures]]> 2020-02-13 08:49:11 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444859585 Georgie https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444861703 Making A cup of coffee (with milk)
Helpful
1. Instructions were clear
2. Nice pictures, go with instructions
Unhelpful
1.Needs . more colour]]> 2020-02-13 08:56:27 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444861703 Georgie https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444862977 Marionette 
Helpful
1.Instructions
Unhelpful
1.Test was SUPER small
2.No colour]]> 2020-02-13 09:01:00 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444862977 Josephine:) - Making a cup of coffee(with milk) https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444939748 Most Helpful:
1.Real life pictures (for me and my mom to understand)
2.Easy steps

3.Name and  Date


Not Helpful:
1.Tiny text 
2.Warning sign to tell if the coffee can be dangerous or not
]]> 2020-02-13 12:55:04 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/444939748 Tatum https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/445099939 Robot cake

Helpful:
Pictures of ingredients, the amounts and the titles

Unhelpful: having big pictures that are distracting and pictures that aren’t really the real cake.]]> 2020-02-13 16:23:15 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/445099939 Tatum https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/445105184 Five minute chocolate mug cake

Helpful:
The pictures of ingredients, the different paragraphs and amounts

Unhelpful:font  too small.]]> 2020-02-13 16:29:31 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/445105184 Tatum https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/445113287 Feeder

Helpful:
It shows a picture of what it really would look like, different steps in different paragraphs and they have tips on how to make it better.

Unhelpful: 
?]]> 2020-02-13 16:39:15 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/445113287 Tatum https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/445117655 Coffee

Helpful: 
Photos of what needed to do, different paragraphs and different steps

Unhelpful:
The instructions being too confusing.]]> 2020-02-13 16:44:01 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/445117655 Tatum https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/445119902 Marionette

Helpful:
Material pictures.

Unhelpful:
Needs more color, too small, too many pictures.]]> 2020-02-13 16:46:29 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/445119902 Hana https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/445396343 Robot Cake

Helpful:
It has a title
ingredients
Steps to make the cake
The pictures looks nice

Unhelpful:
The words are too small
I want to see a real photo of the cake

]]> 2020-02-14 01:51:39 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/445396343 https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/445455491 2020-02-14 06:46:49 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/445455491 Minjae https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/445476941 Helpful
The instructions is very organized and neat
Unhelpful
The picture should be more practical]]> 2020-02-14 08:28:39 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/445476941 Asia https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/445511368 Magic 5-min chocolate mug cake
Helpful
-The pictures show the ingredients
-The instructions give a lot of details and explain how to make it step by step
Unhelpful
-Yellow background behind the words make it hard to read]]> 2020-02-14 10:27:33 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/445511368 Carter https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/446240609 Helpful shows ingredients , pictures, bullet points, and shows what it should look like. Unhelpful no colour ]]> 2020-02-17 05:00:53 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/446240609 Ariana https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/446261891 Make a Robot cake:
Make a Robot cake: 1. It has what I'll need first so I can organise myself. 2. The drawing tells me where to put the icing. 3. THe picture is not very helpful demonstration.

Magic 5 minute chocolate mug cake. It has a purpose, ingredients and step by step, but it does not explain it clearly.

Pumpkin Feeder: The drawing shows what it should look like, but it does not say anything about what you need.

How to make a coffee: SImple Instructions, it has ingredients, what to do. Helpful to make for mum and dad.

Marionette: The instructions are not clear and very small as well. Not easy to read.

My favourite instructions are make a Robot cake, because it has most of what you need for a procedural text.]]> 2020-02-17 06:51:39 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/446261891 Gabriele - make-a-robot cake https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/446326283 helpful:I liked how the author made the instructions simple for everybody.
It helps you to be organised and prepared to start the cake.



not helpful:The pictures are not very clear and helpful to make the robot shape.]]> 2020-02-17 10:44:02 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/446326283 Josephine - pumpkin Feeder https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/447203652
Helpful :
  1.  Big pictures
  2. Tips
  3. Name and date
  4. What I need
  5. Idea about project
Not Helpful :
  1. Lot of text
  2. less pictures
  3. Tiny text
  4.  Warning sign to tell if it is Dangerous or not
]]> 2020-02-19 02:25:38 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/447203652 Josephine - Make A Robot Cake https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/447206875 Helpful:
  1. Date and Name at the bottom
  2. Funny Drawings
Not Helpful :
  1. Too much text 
  2. Tiny Text
  3. No Warning sign to tell if it is Dangerous or not

]]> 2020-02-19 02:35:07 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/447206875 Josephine - Marionette https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/447209222 Helpful :
  1. Many Drawings
Not helpful :
  1. Too much Text
  2. Tiny words
  3. No Date or name
  4. No warning sign to tell if it is Dangerous or not

]]> 2020-02-19 02:42:06 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/447209222 Daniel https://padlet.com/lauren_guy/67lx88a92npu/wish/447229616 Make a Robot Cake               helpful: I liked how the author separated everything into parts.
unhelpful: picture is cool but it takes up too much space

Pumpkin Feeder
helpful: I like how the writer added tips and also, very clear instructions
unhelpful: the "what you need" is next to the title

How To Make Coffee
helpful: Very understandable instructions and materials
unhelpful:needs more colour

Magic 5 Minute Chocolate Mug Cake 
Helpful: drawings and warning is funny
unhelpful: when it says mix dry ingredients into mug it should say mix 4 tbsp of flour another 4 tbsp of sugar and 2 tbsp of cocoa

Marionette 
instructions are not clear and also they are very small and very hard to read 

My Favorite provocation was make a robot cake

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