https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp You must log in using your student account to receive credit for this assignment. Create a post for each artwork critiqued. Title each post using the seat number for the artwork. Each post should contain one STRENGTH about the artwork and one SUGGESTION for the artist. Use criteria from the rubric and be SPECIFIC. en-us 2017-03-02 13:12:33 UTC 2025-12-03 03:59:04 UTC hello@padlet.com almitchell022 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157321293 Good proportion. Needs more details.

]]> 2017-03-02 14:10:02 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157321293 00028575 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157321365 The background is very detailed. I suggest you to work on proportions and keeping a continuous line.]]> 2017-03-02 14:10:13 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157321365 00016710 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157321368 I thought that your proportions were one of your strengths. One suggestion would be to make sure all your lines are smooth. ]]> 2017-03-02 14:10:14 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157321368 00036874 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157321434 the lines were continuous but proportions can be better and more detailed.

]]> 2017-03-02 14:10:26 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157321434 00018993 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157321439 Good job on the continuous line and the details. Make sure that you have a background]]> 2017-03-02 14:10:26 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157321439 10013086 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157321441 Your proportions are good, the only thing is one eye is bigger than the other. The only thing that connects is your eyes and nose, so there is no continuous line. ]]> 2017-03-02 14:10:26 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157321441 10019419 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157321508 The details in your face are really good but you should try bring in your jawline because it too far out ]]> 2017-03-02 14:10:39 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157321508 00035902 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157321523 I like the details of the drawing but yo]]> 2017-03-02 14:10:42 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157321523 00055357 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157321559 The work is not finished, but as I critique what you do have I see a lot of detail and continues drawling. As far as working on all the details that you see on yourself maybe you can work more on that.]]> 2017-03-02 14:10:47 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157321559 00054834 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157321562 Just need to finish and it will be cool. Also add the designs in the back]]> 2017-03-02 14:10:47 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157321562 00034559 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157321578 Good details . Lines need to be continuous
 ]]> 2017-03-02 14:10:49 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157321578 10020713 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157321628 Looks proportionate. Line has a few breaks.]]> 2017-03-02 14:10:56 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157321628 10023181 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157321839 Lines are continuous, could have done better with features on face. Background is well spreaded.]]> 2017-03-02 14:11:31 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157321839 almitchell022 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157322177 Proportion was good. Continuous line was good. More details no background ]]> 2017-03-02 14:12:24 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157322177 10022525 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157322348 need to fix the face and you also need to work on your contour lines when drawing

]]> 2017-03-02 14:12:56 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157322348 10038120 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157322611 Everything looks good but you need to improve on your continuous line. But your strength was using up space and you filled the whole background ]]> 2017-03-02 14:13:26 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157322611 almitchell022 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157322759 Good proportions. Somewhat accurate representation. Needs more details and background. Finish the drawing maybe?]]> 2017-03-02 14:13:46 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157322759 00030013 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157322764 There are many detail in your drawing . Really good Proportions ]]> 2017-03-02 14:13:47 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157322764 00054834 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157323255 looks cool just need to finish.]]> 2017-03-02 14:14:48 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157323255 00055357 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157323349 I LOVE your picture. Continues lines is maybe the only thing you have to work on just a little. Everything else looks AMAZING. You have so much great detail and bold drawing. ]]> 2017-03-02 14:14:58 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157323349 10019419 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157323425 The proportion is good but the lines are too harsh ]]> 2017-03-02 14:15:07 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157323425 00034559 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157323580 Details are good. But you need to work on continuous line 

]]> 2017-03-02 14:15:28 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157323580 00054834 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157323674 Nice job with the continuous lines and show the background designs.]]> 2017-03-02 14:15:37 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157323674 almitchell022 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157323834 Proportion needs improvement. The symbolic background fills the page nicely and in an interesting way. Good details on the hair not so much in the rest. No continuous line was used]]> 2017-03-02 14:16:02 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157323834 10032705 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157323870 His continuous line was really good . Also he just needed to add a little more to his background . Other than that it looks good ]]> 2017-03-02 14:16:05 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157323870 00018993 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157323922 Good proportions. Make sure that you add more to the background.]]> 2017-03-02 14:16:11 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157323922 00028575 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157323976 Background is very pretty and hair is nicely detailed. I suggest you to work on the proportions of your face. ]]> 2017-03-02 14:16:18 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157323976 10025502 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157324194 needs more detail but good craftsmanship]]> 2017-03-02 14:16:47 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157324194 10032705 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157324387 Hers looks good she just need to finish . She didn't do proportional really good because her head is up too high . Secondly she doesn't have a symbolic background ]]> 2017-03-02 14:17:15 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157324387 00034559 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157324392 Great details and continuous line. Need to erase stray lines]]> 2017-03-02 14:17:15 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157324392 00018993 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157324517 Good job on the continuous line. Make sure that you finish it and add a background]]> 2017-03-02 14:17:35 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157324517 10019419 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157324582 The portrait is good but it lacks detail and the background is empty ]]> 2017-03-02 14:17:42 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157324582 00054834 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157324620 It looks cool because how you did your face in a different angle and added the background design. Also lines are continuously ]]> 2017-03-02 14:17:48 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157324620 00055357 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157324701 Nice drawing. Improvement is needed in continuous drawing and detail is nice]]> 2017-03-02 14:17:59 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157324701 shongnba https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157324737 Lines are continuous, could have done better with features on face. Background is well spreaded.]]> 2017-03-02 14:18:04 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157324737 10013086 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157325008 Your proportions, details, and craftsmanship is good. Your drawing fills up the page nicely. The only thing is you should fix the part by your chin because there is a gap. ]]> 2017-03-02 14:18:37 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157325008 shongnba https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157325154 Love the features in the artwork. Everything seems to be very even in face. Background is not complete, try working on that.]]> 2017-03-02 14:18:54 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157325154 10019419 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157325278 the details in the hair is great but you moved your eyes up too high on the head ]]> 2017-03-02 14:19:11 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157325278 00016710 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157325416 I think your proportions were good. I would suggest you add continuous lines and your symbols. I'm assuming your not finished. ]]> 2017-03-02 14:19:31 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157325416 00028575 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157325461 I love how the hair and clothing is detailed but I suggest you work on having a continuous line.]]> 2017-03-02 14:19:35 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157325461 10038120 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157325590 The artwork was great your continuous lines, details, etc but there is nothing to improve on.

]]> 2017-03-02 14:19:52 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157325590 00055357 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157325717 Picture is nice. I see continuous drawling but it could be worked on just a little more. Overall the picture is nice]]> 2017-03-02 14:20:07 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157325717 shongnba https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157326092 Artwork is continuous,  try to spread the items in the background better. ]]> 2017-03-02 14:20:51 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157326092 10022525 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157326149 did good on the drawing,nice contour lines but need more in your background]]> 2017-03-02 14:20:59 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157326149 00030013 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157326243 Great continuous lines. Nice drawing .
One eye is bigger is the other ]]> 2017-03-02 14:21:13 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157326243 00034559 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157326379 Very detailed . Need to work on continuous line ]]> 2017-03-02 14:21:30 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157326379 10038120 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157326420 Your strength is your details but you can improve on your continuous lines and background.]]> 2017-03-02 14:21:36 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157326420 shongnba https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157326772 Artwork is continuous , artwork's head is floating needs it needs have a body. No items in the background.

]]> 2017-03-02 14:22:23 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157326772 00035902 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157326851 Liked the way you layered your drawing looks amazing, just make sure you add a back]]> 2017-03-02 14:22:34 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157326851 10038120 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157327009 Your continuous line and craftsmanship is good but to improve you need to work on adding more details and finishing.

]]> 2017-03-02 14:22:53 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157327009 00035902 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157327553 Your details are amazing but you need to put some more continuous contour lines]]> 2017-03-02 14:23:56 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157327553 10038120 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157327606 Your details, continuous lines, etc is great nothing to improve on.

]]> 2017-03-02 14:24:02 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157327606 00035902 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157328112 Good painting and great details but you need to add a background 

]]> 2017-03-02 14:25:07 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157328112 10013086 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157328158 The details in your drawing are really good and your background fills up the paper nicely. The only thing i would suggest is leaving more space between your eyebrows and the top of your head and working on your continuous line.]]> 2017-03-02 14:25:13 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157328158 00035902 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157328712 The drawing in really nice and great background, need more continuous contour eyes]]> 2017-03-02 14:26:22 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157328712 00016710 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157328748 I like you drawing a lot. You had many deatails and proportions were great. I don't have any suggestions. 

]]> 2017-03-02 14:26:26 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157328748 00030013 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157329194 Awesome drawing , great continuous lines .]]> 2017-03-02 14:27:25 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157329194 00030013 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157329406 2017-03-02 14:27:52 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157329406 10013086 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157329588 The details, proportions, and craftsmanship in your drawing are really good. Your background is filled and balanced. The only thing i would suggest is making your continuous a little more bold so it is noticeable.  ]]> 2017-03-02 14:28:13 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157329588 00035902 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157329715 Had great details but need to add more continuous lines and need a background ]]> 2017-03-02 14:28:28 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157329715 00035902 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157330201 Good details but you need more continuous lines and also needs a background ]]> 2017-03-02 14:29:31 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157330201 00016710 https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157330389 Your drawing looks great! You mainly need to work on continuous lines and fulling more space, but other than that it looks great!

]]> 2017-03-02 14:29:53 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/66p3ft49z9sp/wish/157330389