•Organising_and_Prioritising_final.pdf - Google Drive

•Cornell_Template.pdf (sheffield.ac.uk)

1.There are too many headings (six). Which two could be removed?

2.In the remaining four sections, which subheadings could be removed?

To help you answer these questions, consider the following:

•Avoid a long, general information section (background information should be included in the main Research Proposal Introduction instead).

•Don’t include sections that are too descriptive and / or that only cite one source.

•Make sure headings / subheadings are relevant to the two selected variables / selected ideas from the research focus.

Group 1: Costs & Perceptions

Group 2: Effectiveness of CCTV & Factors affecting effectiveness of CCTV

1.Are there up-to-date sources under each heading/ subheading?

2.Is there a variety of sources under each heading/subheading?

3.Does any heading/subheading rely too much on one source?

4.Is there enough information to write a section based on each heading and at least one paragraph based on each subheading?

5.Is there a mix of statistics, examples, quotes and paraphrases included under each heading and subheading?