https://padlet.com/23sberkman/65cvyi9ib6q3 Welcome to my padlet! Please leave positive feedback. -Sofia Berkman :)) en-us 2018-02-01 13:36:41 UTC 2018-03-28 12:39:19 UTC hello@padlet.com 23achouinard https://padlet.com/23sberkman/65cvyi9ib6q3/wish/237372171 You used grate vocab in your writing]]> 2018-03-02 13:14:05 UTC https://padlet.com/23sberkman/65cvyi9ib6q3/wish/237372171 23achouinard https://padlet.com/23sberkman/65cvyi9ib6q3/wish/237372711 Could put spaces between your paragraf´s it help difine wishes them and make easy to read.]]> 2018-03-02 13:15:50 UTC https://padlet.com/23sberkman/65cvyi9ib6q3/wish/237372711 23achouinard https://padlet.com/23sberkman/65cvyi9ib6q3/wish/237374022 You did a grate job comparing the two sources and how there alike and different.]]> 2018-03-02 13:20:10 UTC https://padlet.com/23sberkman/65cvyi9ib6q3/wish/237374022 23jabate https://padlet.com/23sberkman/65cvyi9ib6q3/wish/237408471 I loved how you gave different points of view for each character, it really gave sense of what was going on. I also liked how you used setting description it really made the story great. One thing I would change is to watch out for nun-on sentences. Overall, great job!]]> 2018-03-02 14:35:56 UTC https://padlet.com/23sberkman/65cvyi9ib6q3/wish/237408471 23rdamania https://padlet.com/23sberkman/65cvyi9ib6q3/wish/237456046 Star: I loved how you gave different points of view. It made it a lot more engaging. And I knew what was going on everywhere.
Star: I thought you built up to the conflict really well and I knew all the information that I needed to know.
Wish: In the future I think you should add more voice to the character.
-Rushil D.]]> 2018-03-02 15:49:05 UTC https://padlet.com/23sberkman/65cvyi9ib6q3/wish/237456046 23mmcardle https://padlet.com/23sberkman/65cvyi9ib6q3/wish/246858902 Star: Something that I thought you did really good on was making it very satire and funny. An example of this was when you said that the girls in the article, Morgan Scott was last seen getting into a uber. Usually children that are eight don't use uber. As you could tell it was not very realistic and that's what the main point was. 
Wish: My one wish for you is to maybe to add more description of when she ran away and if she was throwing a tantum or not. overall, I think you did a really good job! -Morgan Mcardle
!!]]> 2018-03-28 12:30:45 UTC https://padlet.com/23sberkman/65cvyi9ib6q3/wish/246858902 23aniemczyk https://padlet.com/23sberkman/65cvyi9ib6q3/wish/246860963 One thing you did well was that you had a really strong unique onpening. Your intro got the reader interested from the start. One thing you could improve on is making sure your sentences flow well because some parts were hard to read. Overall great job.
-Ava N]]> 2018-03-28 12:35:39 UTC https://padlet.com/23sberkman/65cvyi9ib6q3/wish/246860963