https://padlet.com/24salnasseri/650s0hxp1ozl Thanks for visiting and leaving feedback on my pieces! Keep your comments chill and constructive please! en-us 2018-12-05 17:13:18 UTC 2024-08-02 14:25:04 UTC hello@padlet.com 24tcino https://padlet.com/24salnasseri/650s0hxp1ozl/wish/312313709 I read your vignette, "Spill the Beans," and  I think you did great on it! To start, I love the adjectives and adverbs that you used throughout the piece. They enhanced the over-quality and made it more interesting to read. Furthermore, I love how well your vignette creates the story in my mind! Due to your detail, I could imagine everything that happened very clearly. One thing that I wish for you to continue doing in the future is incorpating the great adjectives/adverbs to your writing, because it makes pieces so much better! All in all, I think that you did wonderful on your vignette!
-Tara C

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