https://padlet.com/mocolisan/646bogak7hvhrxlz Complete tasks 1 and 2. You will get 4 marks for task 1 for 4 criteria and 5 marks for task 2 for 5 criteria. You will be marked out of 9 for both tasks. en-us 2021-02-26 16:59:22 UTC 2023-02-14 23:03:37 UTC hello@padlet.com mocolisan https://padlet.com/mocolisan/646bogak7hvhrxlz/wish/1246075171 2021-02-26 17:01:00 UTC https://padlet.com/mocolisan/646bogak7hvhrxlz/wish/1246075171 mocolisan https://padlet.com/mocolisan/646bogak7hvhrxlz/wish/1246079188 2021-02-26 17:01:50 UTC https://padlet.com/mocolisan/646bogak7hvhrxlz/wish/1246079188 https://padlet.com/mocolisan/646bogak7hvhrxlz/wish/1266176591 Task 1
Zafreen

I would like to write about why I chose this course and how I improve it.
I chose this course because I need to learn reading, writing and speaking. I want to be Independent because sometimes I have Appointment, speak to my children teacher and I want to help my children to do homework which is very important. I like to go to college and learn because teacher can explain everything and class mates are helpful also my teacher’s are helpful. The only two things I did not like about the course was that room was too small some time no space to sit.Also in the college is no canteen.           


I improve my English to regularly I Attend my classes I did my homework. 

Suggestions, we want to move the class to big room which is comfortable for us to leaning. For the canteen which is important for students who Live far.



]]> 2021-03-03 21:33:21 UTC https://padlet.com/mocolisan/646bogak7hvhrxlz/wish/1266176591 https://padlet.com/mocolisan/646bogak7hvhrxlz/wish/1266197141 Task 1 

I would like to inform you for what reason why I chose ESOL course. The reason I chose to do the ESOL Entry 3 course last year was improve my English communication skills. Also I want to Improve my spelling and my reading with writing and I always  help my children with homework 

Going to College was very important for me because  I want to learn the new words. Also is good idea to listen to the teachers ,so teachers can help me to pass my exams . I dislike my class room because it is quite not big .

 In the future, I believe it it would be a good idea to change the classrooms to the bigger classrooms ,so that we would not have any problem with the room .


]]> 2021-03-03 21:40:40 UTC https://padlet.com/mocolisan/646bogak7hvhrxlz/wish/1266197141 https://padlet.com/mocolisan/646bogak7hvhrxlz/wish/1266281855 Task 2
Zafreen
To Saima786786@gmail.come
Subject, day out with family

Hello dear Saima,
Hope you and your family are ok. You asked me about a day out, so let me tell you about my day out with my family.

Last Saturday, I went with my sister and children for a picnic in the Cannon Hill park, which...... We were very excited to go there and my children want to go on the rides. There is a fair in this park and they have carting, Meryy-go-rounds and other rides. All the children enjoyed the rides.

The weather was sunny as the sun was shining brightly and there were no clouds in the sky.There were beautiful flowers, trees and ducks in the water. My children were playing and I was sitting on the bench with my sisters. The view was charming and picturesque.

then we ate food which we bring from home . We shared samosas and....... After that my children want to eat ice cream from the ice cream van, which we bought for them. We all had lots off fun, especially the children.
It was one of the memorable days of my life. I wish we could also share a day like this soon.
See you soon.
Best wishes,
Zafreen  


]]> 2021-03-03 22:13:11 UTC https://padlet.com/mocolisan/646bogak7hvhrxlz/wish/1266281855 https://padlet.com/mocolisan/646bogak7hvhrxlz/wish/1266313629 To: Susan
Subject: day out with my best friend 

Hello my lovely friend Susan how are you? 

hope you you and your family are very well .I like to tell you about the day I had it last year with some student in college ,so I can't wait to see my friend  again. It was a fantastic  day for I and us . We had a lovely teacher she was very helpful with us even my friend were very kind with me and they were very friendly I was very happy  .  
We also went to the canteen during the lunch time we sat down for one hour and sometime we did the homework together . We helped each other for the homework . 
When the classes was finish it we went to shops together .Also we spent  a good day with my friends and sometimes at home  I contact my friends by Whatsapp  also share the homework between each other . 
 In the end of the year we made a lovely parties in college .I and my friends  made  a delicious foods  we ate it together.

I look forward for your reply 

All the best, 

Hana Mohammed 
Thank you  


 

    
    ]]> 2021-03-03 22:27:03 UTC https://padlet.com/mocolisan/646bogak7hvhrxlz/wish/1266313629 https://padlet.com/mocolisan/646bogak7hvhrxlz/wish/1266380645 Manal 
Task 1
I chose level one course because I want to improve my English language. I am looking forward to go to the higher education in the university. 

There are several things why I liked this course. Firstly the way how the teachers taught us in easy ways to help us understand the subject. Secondly the way to develop our speaking, listening, reading, and writing skills as well as knowledge of english grammar and vocabulary. 

 There are several reasons why I dislike this course. firstly the time of lesson  clashed with the time with my son's lesson ,so I couldn't pick him from the school. Secondly the class room was to small and the interne was weak most of the time there  no connections. 
In the future I would use bigger room with good Internet connections.
 .]]> 2021-03-03 22:58:10 UTC https://padlet.com/mocolisan/646bogak7hvhrxlz/wish/1266380645 https://padlet.com/mocolisan/646bogak7hvhrxlz/wish/1266628290 task 2
To : Sara
subjict, Day out with my family

Hello Sara,
 I am so excited to write to you. I hope you and all your family are in good health.
Let me tell you about last week where I went and what  happening there.
I went with my family to __amazing place in my city, Taiz. The place is called Soak Al Tahrear and it is bazaar . People were sitting outside in the cafe drinking and laughing loudly and some people were shopping in the stores.Children were playing, running and laughing in a small picturesque park next to the stores.It was night time, after 10.00 pm, during the Ramadan period, when we usually go out at night . The moon was bright as a diamond in the sky and stars were shining brightly. I set  down on the grass in the  park next to the market, viewing the beautiful picturesque scenes .8My sister was sitting next to me waiting for her son  to come out from the cafe. 

After that we went to the Alqaherah Castle which is a wonderful place at the top of the mountain. We were walking around and in the castle the viewing from there down to the city was  so nice. We can see the whole  city from there .We stayed there for 2 hours. I can  still remember the view until this date. I want to revisit the extraordinary place with you. 

This is the  story I wanted to tell you about. I hope ro
you enjoy  reading it.
See you soon x
Best wishes 
manal 




]]> 2021-03-04 00:45:24 UTC https://padlet.com/mocolisan/646bogak7hvhrxlz/wish/1266628290 https://padlet.com/mocolisan/646bogak7hvhrxlz/wish/1267785097 Task 1
I chose this course because I want to improve my speaking, listening, reading and writing.I also want to get careers options such as doctor and teacher. I also want to learn something new because I lived in another country and I am not from this country so that is why I   chose this course.

I like this course because it helps me improve my communication skills  In college, I really like English, it is a very interesting subject.Also, the teachers are very helpful and kind and helps us improve our knowledge. One thing  I dislike about this course is that the room is small and does not have a canteen.

My suggestion is to continue my studies on this course and work everyday so I can pass all my exams so I can got to a higher level.


]]> 2021-03-04 08:01:56 UTC https://padlet.com/mocolisan/646bogak7hvhrxlz/wish/1267785097 https://padlet.com/mocolisan/646bogak7hvhrxlz/wish/1267875246 Task 2
To: Leah
Subject: Day out

Hello Leah,
How are you? I hope you are fine.I would like to tell you about my wonderful day with my family.

My family and I went to Small Heath Park .....which had lots of rides for children to play with.

When we arrived at Small Heath Park, I saw my cousin there with her children and we said "hello".After a few minutes, we found a bench for all of the grown-ups to sit on and our children went to play.While the children were playing, my cousin and I were chatting together about our lives.

Then at 5:00pm, we left the park and went to the restaurant to eat.We had dolmas with some curry and rice because some of the children didn't like dolmas. It was _ great time to spend with my family. After we finished our meal,  we went home.This was an enjoyable day we have ever had.

See you soon,
Shukriyah Hamakareem

]]> 2021-03-04 08:30:24 UTC https://padlet.com/mocolisan/646bogak7hvhrxlz/wish/1267875246 https://padlet.com/mocolisan/646bogak7hvhrxlz/wish/1271994785 Zahira
Task 2.

To:zakia191@gmail.com.
Subject:Day out with family.


Hello zakia,
How are you? Hope you and your family doing well.I am so excited because I visit the Sozo water park yesterday and I can't wait to tell you about the day which I spend with my family there. This park is located in Lahore. It has beautiful flowers, trees and a lots of water pools. It was a charming and picturesque place.
 
We inside the arena in the park, and I saw many rides there, which I had never seen before. My sister wanted to go on the rides, so I took her and she looked very happy. After that, my sister decided to go in to the pool for swimming but I didn't go because I was scared of the water, so I set on the bench and took some pictures.
 
Then we felt hungry and ate street food, such as fries, chaat and gol gappy, which are traditional foods in Pakistan. My parents ate some fruits because they did not want to eat the junk food. After that,we felt tired because it was a long day, so we went back home.It was a great day with my family and I wish you will come with us next time as well. Remember me in your good wishes and prayers.
I look forward for your reply,
See you soon.
Zahira farid.


]]> 2021-03-05 01:27:38 UTC https://padlet.com/mocolisan/646bogak7hvhrxlz/wish/1271994785 https://padlet.com/mocolisan/646bogak7hvhrxlz/wish/1273095512 Zahira
Task 1

Basically I would want to choose a course that will lead me to fulfill of my ambition and build my future career so, I choosed ESOL level 1 because I want to improve my english speaking, reading and writing  learning skills.Also I want to learn about the rules of grammer and want to increased my vocabulary.

I liked the course material and most of the tasks. Also course itself was awesome and with that teachers teaching because they were really cared about us and wanted to share as much information as possiable.However, I disliked about this course was that there were many students in the class and the room was smaller for all of them. 

I really enjoyed the course and I suggested more improvements in the future that class should be changed and divided students in to the groups. ]]> 2021-03-05 10:44:57 UTC https://padlet.com/mocolisan/646bogak7hvhrxlz/wish/1273095512 https://padlet.com/mocolisan/646bogak7hvhrxlz/wish/1295537218
Teaching: I think the teaching is at an acceptable standard.
Course materials: 
Course information: I think I get  lots new information in this course. 
Facilities: the place too small and the area is very noisy.]]> 2021-03-10 23:21:07 UTC https://padlet.com/mocolisan/646bogak7hvhrxlz/wish/1295537218