https://padlet.com/afelipevelasco/61xup4zxlckz Andrés V. en-us 2016-07-19 23:30:05 UTC 2024-07-16 02:02:45 UTC hello@padlet.com afelipevelasco https://padlet.com/afelipevelasco/61xup4zxlckz/wish/116872259 2016-07-24 17:05:30 UTC https://padlet.com/afelipevelasco/61xup4zxlckz/wish/116872259 afelipevelasco https://padlet.com/afelipevelasco/61xup4zxlckz/wish/116872283 2016-07-24 17:06:29 UTC https://padlet.com/afelipevelasco/61xup4zxlckz/wish/116872283 alwaysfr3sh https://padlet.com/afelipevelasco/61xup4zxlckz/wish/117036187 seriously
Jhonatthan and Alejandra ]]> 2016-07-27 00:49:55 UTC https://padlet.com/afelipevelasco/61xup4zxlckz/wish/117036187 alwaysfr3sh https://padlet.com/afelipevelasco/61xup4zxlckz/wish/117094528 2016-07-27 22:00:51 UTC https://padlet.com/afelipevelasco/61xup4zxlckz/wish/117094528 https://padlet.com/afelipevelasco/61xup4zxlckz/wish/117315603 Hi Andres, you profile sounds very interesting and you managed to find information to include so that it's not a very limited CV. Nevertheless, you should omit the sections in which you don't have anything to include (achievements and work experience). You can still try to find activities in which you were involved that helped you developed different skills. In regard to the format, it's more common to include the studies in chronological order from the present to the past. ;-)]]> 2016-08-01 19:43:24 UTC https://padlet.com/afelipevelasco/61xup4zxlckz/wish/117315603 https://padlet.com/afelipevelasco/61xup4zxlckz/wish/117315742 Hi Andres. I think it's a very good cover letter that supports the CV. You're highlighting your interests and the company's prestige. You could mention how your experiences have contributed to making you a good candidate despite the lack of working experience, though. Also, make some corrections to polish the language used: "I have an advanced course" ("I have a certificate in an advanced course"); "development" ("developing"); "apply" ("apply for"); "have prepared for me be" ("have prepared me to be"). Please, feel free to ask me any questions you may have. ;-) Keep up the hard work.]]> 2016-08-01 19:46:50 UTC https://padlet.com/afelipevelasco/61xup4zxlckz/wish/117315742 afelipevelasco https://padlet.com/afelipevelasco/61xup4zxlckz/wish/117569301 Job tips]]> 2016-08-04 23:08:57 UTC https://padlet.com/afelipevelasco/61xup4zxlckz/wish/117569301 https://padlet.com/afelipevelasco/61xup4zxlckz/wish/117799209 Hi Andres and Carlos. In general this is a good decalogue. You included an introduction and a conclusion and the tips are complete and useful. However, I found that a big part of your content copied ideas from other sources and you know this is something you should never do. Even if you take separate sentences from another text, this will be considered plagiarism. You have to be careful with that. In the part that is original, I recommend that you be more careful with the use of punctuation and word choice, eg. work vs job. You can also review the use of paired conjunctions so that you can use "neither" more effectively. Please let me know if you have any questions. Keep up the hard work. ;-)]]> 2016-08-09 14:46:01 UTC https://padlet.com/afelipevelasco/61xup4zxlckz/wish/117799209