Sensory Details and Figurative Language by Teresa Larios https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl Rewrite your sentence into one or several sentences that recreates the scene more vividly. Think of word choice and use senses (e.g., smell, touch, sight, taste, sound) to show the scene—feel free to invent details within your revised sentences. Add a simile or metaphor or hyperbole, too! en-us 2017-01-04 21:16:49 UTC 2023-05-10 14:09:44 UTC hello@padlet.com Example: teresa_larios https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/145388054 Ex: The old man stood in the grass and relaxed as the sun went down.]]> 2017-01-04 21:19:45 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/145388054 Example with sensory details: teresa_larios https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/145388123 As the elderly gentleman stood, the grass caressed his feet and a smile softened his eyes. A hot puff of air brushed against his wrinkled cheek as the sky paled yellow, then crimson, and within a breath, electric indigo.
He felt his tense muscles unwind like silken folds as the sun dropped beneath the technicolor horizon.

]]> 2017-01-04 21:20:18 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/145388123 1. The woman had a terrible headache as she walked down the road. teresa_larios https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/145388429 2017-01-04 21:23:16 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/145388429 teresa_larios https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/145388467 The young women had a painful migraine that made her  head feel like it was ripping apart. She rubbed her head in pain as she walked down the cracked road to the doctor.

]]> 2017-01-04 21:23:36 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/145388467 2. The boy pulled a large fish out of the river. teresa_larios https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/145388510 2017-01-04 21:23:58 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/145388510 2. teresa_larios https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/145388562 The boy was relaxing by the lake so he was fishing suddenly he caught a fish and tried to grab it but the fish kept moving. The fish was cold and slimy. It was like touching a slimy piece of ice that is how cold it was. So as soon as he got it the boys hands felt numb


]]> 2017-01-04 21:24:20 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/145388562 3. The girl stood on the corner of the busy intersection and witnessed the accident as it happened. teresa_larios https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/145388640 2017-01-04 21:25:07 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/145388640 3.The young girl stood on the burning sidewalk near the ear piercing intersection and watched teresa_larios https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/145388661 garrett blake and james peterson]]> 2017-01-04 21:25:15 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/145388661 4. The meadow slowly came to life as the sun came up. teresa_larios https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/145388743 the old meadow slowly came to life with blazing hot heat the animals came out and saw the sun ]]> 2017-01-04 21:26:13 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/145388743 4. teresa_larios https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/145388760 the meadow came to life with blazing hot heat and all the animals  strongly sensed hunters #devon,caleb,dylan]]> 2017-01-04 21:26:24 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/145388760 5. 5. The hunted creature ran through the forest and screamed as the thorns cut into his skin. teresa_larios https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/145388807 2017-01-04 21:26:43 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/145388807 1. teresa_larios https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/145391290 The middle aged lady briskly walked down the old road while encountering a searingly painful headache. Colin, Luc, and Jacob

]]> 2017-01-04 21:50:52 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/145391290 2. teresa_larios https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/145391330 The teenage boy with a hat, shorts and, a t-shirt that was to small for him , pulled a large fish out of the cold and refreshing water the fish that had one eye it felt like sand paper 
owen,hunter, William]]> 2017-01-04 21:51:14 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/145391330 5. https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/145391770 Jaxon B. and Isaac G. The hunted creature ran rapidly as his footsteps echoed through the forest on this cold scarred night. It then was running looked behind, and then glanced forward to only trip and fall on a log and saw those fateful roses which he then remembered as it's last thought to forever drift away while screaming then going silent. The hunter then came over and took over it's prey.]]> 2017-01-04 21:55:20 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/145391770 1.Hunter Singh by cole williams https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/145392639 The young lady who was 200 years old had a very bad headache while she walked down the road.




]]> 2017-01-04 22:03:51 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/145392639 https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/187804200 2017-09-15 02:42:08 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/187804200 The boy pulled a large fish out the river https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/193691820 2017-10-04 02:29:15 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/193691820 HI https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/200628462 2017-10-25 21:45:47 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/200628462 Fhe https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/201069892 2017-10-27 02:01:55 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/201069892 https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/213489581 2017-12-05 20:04:57 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/213489581 9 https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/220435648 2018-01-11 01:55:48 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/220435648 https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/231047946 2018-02-13 14:34:52 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/231047946 Creative wri https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/270697430 2018-07-20 09:49:15 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/270697430 ------- https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/290836147 2018-10-09 16:01:55 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/290836147 3 https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/295986371

]]> 2018-10-23 14:48:27 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/295986371 https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/350432127 The boy pulled a large fish out of the river]]> 2019-04-10 16:16:19 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/350432127 https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/532296283 2020-04-27 04:05:23 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/532296283 https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/739422034 The woman had a terrible headache]]> 2020-09-11 16:29:17 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/739422034 https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/801491068 The boy pulled a large  fish out of the river]]> 2020-10-05 00:55:14 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/801491068 2. efrancois2 https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/802869110 The boy was relaxing by the lake so he was fishing suddenly he caught a fish and tried to grab it but the fish kept moving. The fish was cold and slimy. It was like touching a slimy piece of ice that is how cold it was. So as soon as he got it the boys hands felt numb


]]> 2020-10-05 13:11:03 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/802869110 5. simran8130 https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/827805059 Jaxon B. and Isaac G. The hunted creature ran rapidly as his footsteps echoed through the forest on this cold scarred night. It then was running looked behind, and then glanced forward to only trip and fall on a log and saw those fateful roses which he then remembered as it's last thought to forever drift away while screaming then going silent. The hunter then came over and took over it's prey.]]> 2020-10-14 07:30:23 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/827805059 the boy look like a https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/842258061 2020-10-19 18:09:05 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/842258061 Example with sensory details: s977929 https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/852387264 As the elderly gentleman stood, the grass caressed his feet and a smile softened his eyes. A hot puff of air brushed against his wrinkled cheek as the sky paled yellow, then crimson, and within a breath, electric indigo.
He felt his tense muscles unwind like silken folds as the sun dropped beneath the technicolor horizon.

]]> 2020-10-22 13:36:40 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/852387264 https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/869495205 The girl stood on the corner of the busy intersection and witnessed the accident as it happened ]]> 2020-10-28 13:24:30 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/869495205 THE Fish Figth https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/917976290 the boy stood in was it high water waiting for the fish then he see one and grabs it but the fish is not giving up that easy so the fish started to moved and the trying to keep an good grip on the all all u see and heard is the rustling and rumbling so the boy grabs an stone and whacks the the very very large fish .....THE END 

BY JEOVANNI SYLVESTER]]> 2020-11-12 18:57:03 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/917976290 4. The meadow slowly came to life as the sun came up. deniloza3307 https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/945978410 the old meadow slowly came to life with blazing hot heat the animals came out and saw the sun ]]> 2020-11-20 16:33:13 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/945978410 https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/963360980 2020-11-26 12:35:54 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/963360980 ethanl85411 https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/983784337 The young women had a painful migraine that made her  head feel like it was ripping apart. She rubbed her head in pain as she walked down the cracked road to the doctor.

]]> 2020-12-03 14:20:31 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/983784337 ethanl85411 https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/983784362 The young women had a painful migraine that made her  head feel like it was ripping apart. She rubbed her head in pain as she walked down the cracked road to the doctor.

]]> 2020-12-03 14:20:31 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/983784362 ethanl85411 https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/983784386 The young women had a painful migraine that made her  head feel like it was ripping apart. She rubbed her head in pain as she walked down the cracked road to the doctor.

]]> 2020-12-03 14:20:31 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/983784386 5. gperaltayt https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/1052455410 Jaxon B. and Isaac G. The hunted creature ran rapidly as his footsteps echoed through the forest on this cold scarred night. It then was running looked behind, and then glanced forward to only trip and fall on a log and saw those fateful roses which he then remembered as it's last thought to forever drift away while screaming then going silent. The hunter then came over and took over it's prey.]]> 2021-01-04 16:07:46 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/1052455410 https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/1061611559 The young women had a painful migraine that made her  head feel like it was ripping apart. She rubbed her head in pain as she walked down the cracked road to the doctor.

]]> 2021-01-07 01:30:30 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/1061611559 hi https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/1232777060 2021-02-23 17:47:40 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/1232777060 https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/1279598848 2021-03-07 23:28:20 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/1279598848 https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/1313849810 2021-03-16 04:30:29 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/1313849810 https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/1313850559 2021-03-16 04:30:51 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/1313850559 https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/1313850621 2021-03-16 04:30:53 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/1313850621 https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/1313851046 2021-03-16 04:31:06 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/1313851046 https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/1313851098 2021-03-16 04:31:07 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/1313851098 https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/1313851135 2021-03-16 04:31:08 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/1313851135 https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/1313854254 2021-03-16 04:32:35 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/1313854254 The girl stood on the corner of the busy intersection and witnessed the accident as it happened. https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/1326425135 2021-03-18 16:29:19 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/1326425135 WOWOWOWOOWOWOWOW is this lexie's school padlet? I would love to mess it up :> Cheesy_Asses https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/1485950628 2021-05-03 16:04:42 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/1485950628 yyoyoyooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooi hope this is anonymous aqsa9725 https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/1839345762 2021-10-24 14:30:45 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/1839345762 i oo9ve kiann https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/2017274794 2022-01-28 04:40:51 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/2017274794 https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/2050977542 the woman had a terrible headache]]> 2022-02-16 14:30:42 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_larios/61m8m938oaxl/wish/2050977542