P5 CW1 - An Encounter with a bully Story planning - Group 1 & 2 by Kristine Loh

Ms Loh

kristine_loh — 2024-01-14 13:11:00 UTC

1. Setting - who, where, when

2. Problem - what is the problem

3. Goal - what is the outcome you want

4. Attempts - at least 2

5. Consequence - were the attempts successful in achieving your goal

6. What happens after that - what happened after it was successful or unsuccessful

7. Conclusion - summary of the story, end with dialogue or reflective questions

Ms Loh

kristine_loh — 2024-01-26 04:05:33 UTC

Koh Shuo Zhe

2024-01-26 04:12:50 UTC

1.James was a big bully.Roy was the one who stopped James from bullying others.
2

Aufa

2024-01-26 04:13:21 UTC

1.adam-bully-ali-victim- jace-hero- mr John-disipline master-
2.Adam bullied Adi
3.Jace wants to stop the bullying
4.ali ran to find the discipline master. The discipline master punished Adam
5.the bully continued to hit Jace. Jace got punched in the face.
6.Adam got the punishment he deserved
7.end with a dialogue. Adam turned over a new leaf

Razin

2024-01-26 04:14:19 UTC

1.jakie chan,lily,class,break time
2.stealer-Jackie tried to steal lily money as the principle saw
3.sneak behind the chair
4.keep silent and be sneaky
5.while he was stealing the money
6.teacher caught him
7.karma is real

Zixian

2024-01-26 04:14:32 UTC

1.Timmy,Johnny and Jack
school and canteen
Monday,recess
2.Timmy getting bully by Jack
3.Timmy Tried to stop Jack bully him and tried to get a teacher
4.Jack wanted to take Timmy wallet
5.Johnny wanted to help him and he got the teacher to scold him
6.title:An encounter with a bully
7.after the lesson Jack finally stop bullying peoples and become friend with timmy and johnny

jia ying

2024-01-26 04:14:41 UTC

1.who:Tim,lily,I where:school when:during recess.
2.lily was bullied by tim
3.I wanted Tim to stop bullying people.
4.a) I have tried to talk to Tim about bullying people but he just rolled his eyes and walked away.b)i had already told the teacher about tim’s behaviour.
5.the discipline master had called tim’s parents to his office .
6.Tim punishment will be washing every single toilets in the school.
7.Tim had learnt his lesson and stop bullying people.

Hayder Adam

2024-01-26 04:15:28 UTC

1.Class Coridoor, John,Tom and Jane.
2.John threatening Jane to give her belongings to him.
3.Tom sees what is happening and tells John To Stop
4.Tom attempts to stop him but fails. Instead he alerts a nearby teacher on duty.
5.The teacher brought John to a corner and explains to him that bullying is wrong.
6.John realises that bullying is wrong.
7.John apologises to Jane and he regretted what he has done.

Qalesya

2024-01-26 04:15:43 UTC

1. Mr Raju, Tim , Alvis and tom at school during recess timing
2.Alvis did not have enough money to buy food so, he wanted Tom’s lunch money
3.Tim wanted Alvis to stop bullying Tom
4. Tim told Alvis to stop, Tim told the disiplin master Mr Raju
5.Alvis wanted to steal Tim’s lunch money instead(he did not stop bullying)
6. Mr Raju found out that Alvis was stealling and bullying Tom and Tim and decided to teach Alvis a lesson
7. Alvis learnt his lesson and gave the money that he stoke from Tim.

Jack

2024-01-26 04:15:59 UTC

1.Bob,Phis,Billy
School playground
2.Phis took Bob’s money
3.billy wants to stop phis from bullying anybody
4.Billy tried to talk to phis to stop bullying anybody
Beat phis up to put him in the bullyed people’s shoes
5.Billy got suspended from school for two weeks
6.Phis and Billy made a anti bullying team

Kayes ng

2024-01-26 04:15:59 UTC

1.characters : john , jim and josh
Where:classroom
When: during lunchtime
2.what is the problem:bully Jim kept Bullying josh and threatened him to give his lunch money.
3. (Goal) what does the main character want to achieve? :John wants to stop jim from bullying others.
4.attempts
a)john standing up for himself.
b)Josh going to the principals office to tell about the situation.
5.consequences: bully jim has to pick up trash on the floor for a week.
6.what happens after that?
: jim and john became very good friends and jim never bullied anyone ever again.

MARSYA

2024-01-26 04:15:59 UTC

1.bullychan tim and Eva
2.bullychan bully tim
3.Eva ask them to stop
4.Eva said what happened to Tim
5.bully chan stoped
6.Eva tells the teacher that Tim said the bully bullied him

Ulysses

2024-01-26 04:16:01 UTC

1.bob the bully,Jim,jimmy
2.bob bully Jim
3.jimmy wants to get bob to stop bullying people
4.jimmy stood up for Jim
Jimmy told a teacher
5.the teacher punished bob by making him pick up trash in the school
6.bob stop bullying people and is kind
7.Bob learned his lessons to not bully people

Yan Xin

2024-01-26 04:16:12 UTC

1. Bully Chong,Robbie,me.
2.Bully Chong keeps bullying Robbie.
3.Get the payment.
4.A)Robbie shared the problem with me.
B)Robbie and I told the discipline master.
5.Stayback after school for reflection for a week.
6.He learent from his mistakes and was best friends with Robbie.
7. He realised bullying was no fun and was no good.

Caslyn

2024-01-26 04:16:53 UTC

1.Me,Mary, Jane , teacher
2.Jane and Mary bullies me during recess And sTeal My money 💴
3.i want them to stop bullying🤕 me
4. I asked them to stop ✋ but they didn't,she shoved me to the wall so i fought👊🏻💫 back .

1.mike,jack and bob

2024-01-26 04:16:59 UTC

At school during recess time
2.mike is getting bullied by jack and there is no teacher around
3.Bob wants to stand up for Mike and tell on jack
4.Bob entered and shouted at jack.Jack
grumbled at bob and pushed him to the ground .
Bob saw a teacher walking by and pulled jack to the ground Bob asked Mike to call the teacher he ran there and went to tell everything that happened
5.Jack got canned for his actions he had to restart primary six again .
6. Jack betrayed Mike and he saw the opportunity to try and take his money again but there was a camera and he was called to the principles office during class . He got suspend for 3 weeks.

Sheng yang

2024-01-26 04:17:07 UTC

1.katakuri,Gojo,Geno,zoro(principal)
Canteen
Recess time
2.katakuri bullying Gojo
3.Geno wants katakuri to stop bullying Gojo
4.Geno protect Gojo from being bullied by katakuri
.He bring Geno hide from katakuri and they when to tell the principal zoro
5.katakuri have to help to clean the toilet and Geno manage to help Gojo to not get bullied by katakuri
6.katakuri Geno and Gojo became best friend
7.Geno learnt that if we see someone getting bullied we must stand up for them and katakuri learnt that he shouldn’t bully people “I can’t believe that we became friends ”

Farisyah

2024-01-26 04:17:12 UTC

1) In school,Bully Zack,Myself,David,Monday,Morning,During recess.

2) David got bullied by Bully Zack during recess , for the pass

few days.

3) David wanted to tell the teacher about him getting bullied , but he had the confidence to tell teacher . So i help him to get some confidence.

4) -Telling teacher or a trusted adult.

-Getting more fitter during the holidays.

5) Getting scolded by a teacher because of his actions towards David.

6) They became close friends but few months later Jack backstabbed David.

7) Bully Zack learn To not bully other people that are smaller then us.And to always be kind and respectful towards others.

Firzana

2024-01-26 04:17:24 UTC

1. Who:Amy,Tom and his gang,Tim and me(Ana)
Where:at the school canteen
When: Monday morning at 10.39 a.m.

2. Tom bullied Tim

3. Tim became a coolie boy and became stronger than the bully

4.(a) stand up for him self
(b)tell the parents and the principal

5.Toms punishment is become a slave for Tim because Tom was treating Tim like a slave

6.the bully was embarrassed and felt guilty so it learn the lesson

7.the bully learn his lesson I never bully anyone again and he became a good person!🧍‍♂️

Kayyisah

2024-01-26 04:17:49 UTC

Characters:Timmy, I, Kenji
2.I bullied Timmy in the field.
3.Timmy managed to run to the teacher in charge
3. Suddenly Kenji-a P6 student- looked at me with his bulging eyes. He walked towards me before little Timmy could reach the scene with the teacher.
5. the teacher arrived and timmy told the teacher that I was the one who had bullied him.
6. The teacher looked at me only to see me getting bullied by kenji.
7.the teacher called the discipline master and he scolded us for bullying.

KAVI

2024-01-26 04:17:52 UTC

1.setting-who,peter,ben,mark and kyle.when after school.where in school .2.problem

Aniqi

2024-01-26 04:17:57 UTC

1)me,razin victim,ronaldo the bully in school Monday during lunch

2)I saw Razin getting bullied at lunch the bully was ronaldo he was my brother

3)I come and kick him and he said how dare you as his face turned as red as a tomato

4)I and razin ran as fast as a cheetah we go the teacher what happen

5)The teacher shout aa loud as a lion at ronaldo and the consequences was more worse

Kevnise

2024-01-26 04:17:59 UTC

1.
who:jim and tim
where:in school
When:during recess
2.
Jim kept on stealing tim’s money and if tim did not give jim the money he would hit him
3.
Become a coolie boy and be stronger than jim.
4.
(A):stand for himself
(B):tell his grandpa
5.
Jim would not listen to tim

Varun

2024-01-26 04:17:59 UTC

1. Mike,Tyson,Ali and Jake place is at the school

2. Ali and Tyson were bulling Mike and they stole Mike’s wallet.They laso beat Mike up.

3. Mike wanted Ali and Tyson to stop bulling him.

4. (1) Mike tried to run away frontier the bullies but he was to slow. (2) Mike tried to stop the bullies from taking his wallet

5. The bullies still continued

6.Ali brother Jake came to the scene with the discipline master Mr Chaw.

7. The bullies learnt their lesson

Keisha

2024-01-26 04:18:00 UTC

1. John, Bully-Chan, Principal, Grandfather. School. Recesse.

2.Bully-Chan trying to bully John. And the principal saw and did the necessary needs.

3. John trying to get out of the bullying case.

4. 1. John went to his grandfather and complained about what has been going on. 2. His grandfather to the principle has this has been going on for a long period of time.

5. The principal called Bully-Chan parents and his parents came down to the school and punished him.

6. Bully Chan and John became very good friends.

7. John’s grandfather and the principal were happy as the bullying case is over. Bully-Chan gave the money back to John.

Prithika

2024-01-26 04:18:05 UTC

1. Who:Chloe,Jane,Sam
Where:School void deck
When:Lunch
2.Sam was getting bullied at lunch because she does not want to give her lunch money to the bully Jane
3.She wanted to achieve to stop people from bullying and not give their lunch money
4.a)she will say stop bullying me to Jane
B) Shout for help
5.Janne will be participating on school events for 10 months
6.Chole will try to protect the victim from Jane
7.Sam said "Don’t you feel good that you’re not bullied anyone anymore?” "Hmm it does I’m not going to bully anyone anymore “ said jane

Koh Shuo Zhe

2024-01-26 04:18:27 UTC

2.James kept bullying others that is younger than him.He did not even listen to a single word that Roy had told.
3.Roy told the big bully if he kept continuing bullying others,He will be in a big trouble.
4. James was so angry that his face was red.
5.Roy quickly ran into athe general office.
6.

Nevethan

2024-01-26 04:18:48 UTC

Jhon is getting bullied by jack 1.jhon doesn’t know why he’s getting bullied 2.jack used to be his best friend 3.ever since he started talking to bully’s he became one

AFREENAH

2024-01-26 04:19:00 UTC

1.Tom(bully) I (hero) Sam(victim)
School
Recess time
2.Sam was eating when Tom asked for Sam’s money but to his surprised Sam refused.
3.After school, Sam was walking home when Tom pull

Sherene

2024-01-26 04:19:20 UTC

1.) who : Mary, ryan, principal, form teacher
2.)ryan primary 5 student bully cindy .the problem is cindy was scared to go and tell her form teacher
3.) be brave and tell teacher
4.) tell the teacher and tell him to stop

Tiffany

2024-01-26 04:19:22 UTC

1.who?where whenMr Tan,Tom,Adam at school at nine morning recess
2.Tom is bored
3.Tim wanted Tom to stop teasing him
4.tell dad to help him and tell the the form teacher Mr Tan
5.Tom stopped teasing Tim
6.Tom got detention to learn his lesson
7.Tom learned his lesson

Tehzeem

2024-01-26 04:19:39 UTC

Who:bully chan,tim ,grandfather,principal
Where:canteen.
When:during recess
2)Everyday bully chan always ask tim to buy him

Emelda

2024-01-26 04:24:20 UTC

1. Who:Jack,Emily and me. Where: reccess, class and shelter basketball court. When: yesterday and tomorrow.
2. Jack wanted lunch money
3. Want to fight with jack
4. a) Emily told me to stop when I almost want to punch Jack
b) Emily told me to tell the discipline master and she also shout at jack to stop bullying me.
5. The discipline master called Jack parents and also told Jack to pick up all the litter at our school.
6. Jack became nice to everyone and became friends with Emily and me.

Kayes ng

2024-01-26 04:25:41 UTC

7.conclusion
Bully Jim and John became friends and Jim never bullied anyone else ever again.