English 1110 Primary Source Analysis Proofreading Steps AU19 220 by Matthew Tidwell https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PSA220AU19 Proofreading questions en-us 2019-09-18 16:18:42 UTC 2020-02-06 13:29:56 UTC hello@padlet.com Ethos, pathos, logos: Unpacking the implied meaning tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PSA220AU19/wish/386063926
  • What experience/expertise do you have that would help you connect to other resources?
  • What are the emotional stakes involved in your material?
  • What is the history or verifiable background of your material? Is it different than the story told by your primary source?
  • Would any of the above benefit from further research
    • ]]>     2019-09-18 16:18:42 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PSA220AU19/wish/386063926     Read or point out a sentence that you are proud of in your draft or notes. tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PSA220AU19/wish/386063928 2019-09-18 16:18:42 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PSA220AU19/wish/386063928 Show your partner(s) the specific part of your primary source that you are attempting to analyze for the section of your draft that you are concerned about. tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PSA220AU19/wish/386063933 2019-09-18 16:18:42 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PSA220AU19/wish/386063933 What stands out, what is connected/contrasted tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PSA220AU19/wish/441479587 Point out where you are using Notice and Focus and/or The Method to concentrate and compare/contrast the explicit details that matter most in your primary source.]]> 2020-02-06 12:17:00 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PSA220AU19/wish/441479587 JUUL https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PSA220AU19/wish/441503702 By introducing the company values and what they stand for. They mention “Mission first, think big, deliver quality, debate & commit, GO, own it, and give back.” ]]> 2020-02-06 13:19:16 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PSA220AU19/wish/441503702 JUUL https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PSA220AU19/wish/441504581 Throughout the first paragraph towards the end, I feel as if there was more repetition in terms of my sentences and how I wanted to get the message out.]]> 2020-02-06 13:21:00 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PSA220AU19/wish/441504581 JUUL https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PSA220AU19/wish/441506059 The explicit conveys that “JUUL was developed as a satisfying alternative to cigarettes. Learn about our mission to improve the lives of the world's one billion adult smokers by eliminating cigarettes.”
    Contrasts to the “WARNING: This product contains nicotine. Nicotine is an addictive chemical.”]]>     2020-02-06 13:23:43 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PSA220AU19/wish/441506059