https://padlet.com/sturner41/60cq92shf5nz Complete the task in each box to continue the process of revising and editing your draft. Work your way from left to right. en-us 2017-01-11 06:36:29 UTC 2023-02-25 00:21:28 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Lightdecrease.png sturner41 https://padlet.com/sturner41/60cq92shf5nz/wish/146436433 Go to the link below to get some extra practice identifying comma splices, run-ons (this practice calls run-ons fused sentences), and fragments:
http://www.chompchomp.com/exercises.htm

Once you go to the page, complete at least three of the interactive exercises. ]]> 2017-01-11 07:28:01 UTC https://padlet.com/sturner41/60cq92shf5nz/wish/146436433 sturner41 https://padlet.com/sturner41/60cq92shf5nz/wish/146438205 Re-read your draft, looking for any comma splices, run-ons, or fragments you might have used. Make any corrections needed. Once you think you have corrected any errors with your sentences, make sure that you have at least 2 sentence openers (check your notes for help with this) and at least 2 compound sentences. Highlight and label each. ]]> 2017-01-11 07:41:59 UTC https://padlet.com/sturner41/60cq92shf5nz/wish/146438205 sturner41 https://padlet.com/sturner41/60cq92shf5nz/wish/146516813 Look at the feedback from Mrs. Turner on your draft and the sticky note with things to review. Add, delete, rearrange, or change parts of your draft to improve your draft based on the feedback. ]]> 2017-01-11 14:34:58 UTC https://padlet.com/sturner41/60cq92shf5nz/wish/146516813 sturner41 https://padlet.com/sturner41/60cq92shf5nz/wish/146518346 Trade your draft with someone near you. Answer the questions about their draft on the attached form. Type your answers in and email it to your partner and CC Mrs. Turner. ]]> 2017-01-11 14:38:30 UTC https://padlet.com/sturner41/60cq92shf5nz/wish/146518346 sturner41 https://padlet.com/sturner41/60cq92shf5nz/wish/146966829 Look at the sentences that Mrs. Turner highlighted in yellow on your draft. Each of these sentences has a grammatical mistake. Your task is to read each sentence and determine what the error is. Then you will fill out the editing demons form attached here, explaining what the error was and how you corrected it. If you cannot figure out what the mistake was, have a partner read the sentence to see if you can figure it out together. If neither one of you know what the mistake was, try checking the following website to see if you can find a rule that you might have broken. Once you have corrected each sentence, email the Editing Demons form to Mrs. Turner.
http://www.chompchomp.com/handouts.htm]]> 2017-01-13 06:09:19 UTC https://padlet.com/sturner41/60cq92shf5nz/wish/146966829 sturner41 https://padlet.com/sturner41/60cq92shf5nz/wish/146967022 Once you have made all changes to your draft, you are ready to type your final draft! As you type your article, remember:
-Your article should be easy to read (fonts should be clear and easy to ready)
-You need to include an engaging title for your article
-You may include a picture to make it more interesting 
-You need to include by and your name at the top 
*If you want some tips on how to make your article look better and more like a magazine article, you can watch the video bel]]> 2017-01-13 06:14:36 UTC https://padlet.com/sturner41/60cq92shf5nz/wish/146967022 sturner41 https://padlet.com/sturner41/60cq92shf5nz/wish/147276699 Once you have made all changes to your draft, you are ready to type your final draft! As you type your speech, remember:
-Your speech should be engaging
-You need to be thinking about what visuals you could use when you give the speech 
-You need to include by and your name at the top
*If you want some tips on how to make your speech better, go to the following website:
http://www.forbes.com/sites/jeffschmitt/2013/07/16/10-keys-to-writing-a-speech/#66bc0cc169ca]]> 2017-01-16 02:13:03 UTC https://padlet.com/sturner41/60cq92shf5nz/wish/147276699