https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a Create a paragraph to describe the scene or event using sensory details. en-us 2022-09-22 21:15:04 UTC 2022-09-23 02:01:03 UTC hello@padlet.com maria_rovena_raymund https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/1894474417 1. Choose ONE picture that you would like to describe. 
2. Click on the '+' at the bottom of the column for your chosen picture to add your description. 
3. Write your first name before writing your description.
4. Write ONE paragraph (3-5 sentences) to describe the picture using the sensory details.

]]> 2021-11-16 15:34:22 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/1894474417 maria_rovena_raymund https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309500633 - Snapshots are sentences that show, not tell.
- They create a frozen picture in the reader's mind.
- They help the reader to imagine the scene or character.
- To create a snapshot, describe a scene or character with details of what you can see, hear, feel, smell and taste.]]> 2022-09-22 21:24:03 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309500633 maria_rovena_raymund https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309506392 1. Choose TWO descriptions to comment on.
2. Write your first name before writing your comments.
3. In your comments, explain why you chose that description:
(e.g. 1) This uses show not tell sentences like "________________________________________" which help me imagine what happened in the story.
(e.g. 2) This uses sensory details to describe what the reader can see / hear / touch / tast / feel.
(e.g. 3) This can be improved by _____________________. (give examples of sentences that can be used)
4. When you have commented on TWO descriptions, read other descriptions.
5. Click the 'heart' icon for those you like.

]]> 2022-09-22 21:31:39 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309506392 maria_rovena_raymund https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309562642 2022-09-22 22:55:23 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309562642 maria_rovena_raymund https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309564254 2022-09-22 22:58:00 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309564254 maria_rovena_raymund https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309583366 Shannon was in her late teens. She was tall and had an athletic build. On the day of the race, she wore a pair of black shorts and her red house t-shirt. Her hair was pulled back into a neat ponytail so that it would not obstruct her view as she flew across the track.

The started gun sounded with a loud sharp crack.  Shannon sprinted along the running track, as fast as a gazelle. She could hear her heart thumping along to the pounding of her feet on the rubber.

Around her the crowd of spectators were cheering her on. She could pick out her classmates yelling out her name but she tuned all that out to focus on the finishing line before her. Victory would be hers.

]]> 2022-09-22 23:29:17 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309583366 maria_rovena_raymund https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309587015 2022-09-22 23:34:57 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309587015 maria_rovena_raymund https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309593282 2022-09-22 23:43:25 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309593282 maria_rovena_raymund https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309597156 2022-09-22 23:48:23 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309597156 https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309734205 Chysty (your mom) was in her university. She was participating in a race and she was tall, asian and fast. she was so fast she ran faster than the usain bolt. she wore a sweat shirt on sports day and her friends were at the spectator box, cheering for her with a loud amplifier.

                        Chysty(Your mom) was running faster than the speed of light when she heard the gun sound go off. she was outrunning everyone one the race track, going close to the finish line. She dashed towards the line and fell into a deep hole. then suddenly, you wake up and realise its all a dream.]]> 2022-09-23 01:45:51 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309734205 https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309735399 sallly was on her way home when she heard whispering about her behind Sally.Sally pretended that all she heard was just nothing and continued waliking home,but she knew that this was real and started to cry in despair and hopeless.


[bedwars]]]> 2022-09-23 01:46:56 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309735399 https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309735885 A skinny girl wearing a bright blue t-shirt was on the verge of tears as she heared laughter and whispering everwhere she go.Many bystanders witnessed it ,but they did not stand up for the girl and become upstanders ,instead they join the bully clan.Even the girl's best friends abandoned her.She smelled the smell of lunch as people throw them at her.]]> 2022-09-23 01:47:20 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309735885 https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309736975 All the students from p6 are taking there PSLE in the school hall, even crowded with p6s there was a pin drop silance ,every one taking their exam carefully]]> 2022-09-23 01:48:09 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309736975 https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309739432 I could hear my heart banging against my chest. Beads of perspiration trickled down my cheeks. Looking at the challenging math question, I felt like I could not hear anything except the question being read out loud. I rub my sweaty palm together and despite being in and air-conditioned room, I felt like I as being baked in a oven.]]> 2022-09-23 01:50:12 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309739432 https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309739886 A girl wearing a red sports t-shirt with short black pants and white shoes has her hair tied up in a ponytail,was running at a speed of lightning on the red and white running track. Sweat was trickling down er cheeks as she sprinted forward, aiming for the finishing line that was a distance from where she was.]]> 2022-09-23 01:50:33 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309739886 https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309740086 Carlyne was running at an extremely fast speed. She felt the rough track on her smooth sport shoes as she was running on the track. She heard the thunderous cheers of her closest friends as she was looking directly in the finishing line like she was in a competition trying to win the race even though it was just a practice. ]]> 2022-09-23 01:50:44 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309740086 https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309740311 As I picked up my pen in horror, I could sense the feeling of pure regret I had as I recalled the days before my examination. Tears of regret and guilt trickled down my cheeks as I swiftly brushed them away with the back of my sleeve.]]> 2022-09-23 01:50:55 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309740311 https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309741982 "make me proud ,noriana,make me proud." Those were her father's last words as he took his last breath."BANG!!!" noriana was sended back to reality as she heard the ear piercing shot of a blank gun.Feeling the hard concrete come and go, she did not realise she was running.running for her father.as she saw everything around her come to a blur,and smelled the leafy morning air,she cried.But it was a happy tear that rolled down and couldn't even reach her cheeks before it flew away behind her.her saliva was going up and down her mouth but it tasted familiar. It tasted of victory.]]> 2022-09-23 01:52:07 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309741982 https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309742740 The playground had thousands and thousands of happy and playful children playing with thier parents. As I heard the loud screams and shouting, the sound of nature caught my attention as I sat down on a brown bench and relaxed. Meanwhile, I smelled the smell of freshly-cut leaves and the scent of the pretty flowers. As I got up from the bench, I continued to walk uphill and touch the smooth petals of a red rose. I felt that the weight that was put on my shoulders was lightened. ]]> 2022-09-23 01:52:44 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309742740 https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309743178 everyone was sweating due to the difficulty of the psle.i took the test as if it was a lifeand death matter,a while ago my friend joe had fainted and is now in the hospitl i really hop i do well...]]> 2022-09-23 01:53:07 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309743178 https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309743369 The sound of thousands of singaporeans clapping and cheering for performers dancing to the music. The sight and sound of fireworks popping in the sky , looking like colourful fireflies that had eaten a rainbow. The smell of buttery popcorn given out to almost all of the viewers sitting in the colour coordinated sits.  ]]> 2022-09-23 01:53:15 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309743369 https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309743455 AT the playground,tim and his friends were playing happily. One was climbing one was running at the speed of sonic.After then,they were covered in pesperation and and was told to go home.The had such a good time but it was time to go home.They bade one another and told one anpther to come to this playground tomorrow at 5.00 pm. The people lef at the playground only left was Tim and his two friend Joey and Tommy. They decided that it was time to go home for them as it was already 7.30 pm.Tim thinked and reflected about that day.He wished time could go slower so he could play longer.]]> 2022-09-23 01:53:19 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309743455 https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309743545 As soon as I heard the instructor blow his whistle, I felt my heart racing when I leapt and ran as fast as my legs could carry me around the track. My hair was tied up in a ponytail, my shoe laces were tied properly and I was sure I could reach the finish line first as the other contestants were a few meters behind me but the more I ran, the more my knees lowered with each step. It felt like my lungs were about to burst.]]> 2022-09-23 01:53:24 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309743545 https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309744134 "BOOM!". A burst of lights made the clear black space bright with tiny light dots in a curved shape.The marina bay Float was 
flooded with audience singing the most favourite NDP song "home".Talents from all over singapore were performing for the NE show 2022 . This year , the p5's were able to attend the NE show.]]> 2022-09-23 01:53:52 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309744134 https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309744708 One hot summer morning, sally and her friends were at the playground where they all meet after school. there were cheers of Sally and her 5 other friends laughing in fun at the playground. she was having such a good time that she forgot that her house was burning on fire. sally was sliding down the slide when her other 2 friends, bendover and mike oxlong were playing in the soft sandpit making a small sandcastle. when sally returned home, se found out that her favurite hello kitty bag was burned into ashes. furious, she tok that big rough hammer and smashed the house to pieces.]]> 2022-09-23 01:54:21 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309744708 https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309744768 My best friend,kai chen,and I were partners for the NE show for the learning journey.We took the NE bags as the teacher instructed us to.After taking the NE bag,we went onto the bus and begin our journey to the national parade.When our class reached,we sat down quickly as we were tired of all the walking.We then started to eat the food inside the NE bag given to us.We watched the show together blissfully.We all went home with a big smile on our face.


YAY YAY YAY]]> 2022-09-23 01:54:25 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309744768 https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309746346 All the students were clueless.Struggling on different questions.They felt like being crushed by a rock with the words"stress" on it.They could hear the teachers shouting,"five minutes left people!"And they furiously typed in their equations in their calculator. When the time was up some students were sneakily looking out for the teachers so they could finish their few equations ]]> 2022-09-23 01:55:51 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309746346 https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309747111 A woman wearing a red t shirt and black pants was on the running track, running like lighting. She was training for the country wide competition.]]> 2022-09-23 01:56:28 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309747111 https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309747136 The burst of flowers lit up the velvety sky,sending the crowd to pull out their smart phones from their pockets to snap photos of it. My friends and I stood up from our seats and waved the Singapore flag excitedly.Sonia Chew encouraged everyone to get on to their feet and cheer as loud as they can! The sound wave cheers of the crowd seeped to the performers on stage.The boys behind me screamed and whistled at the top of their lungs and my ears were gonna burst from the sound coming from them.After the show,my class walked with Jell-O legs to the bus because of seating down on the hard chair for quite awhile.In the bus,we still had fun,throwing snacks at each other and chatting with hard felt joy .]]> 2022-09-23 01:56:29 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309747136 https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309747215 The clouds turned dark as Nancy heard the laughter of the bullies, the thirst for revenge gathered in my mind. Nancy felt the tear dropped onto her cheek as she cried for help. Many thoughts of how to get the bullies back for revenge gathered mischieviously in her mind...]]> 2022-09-23 01:56:33 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309747215 https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309747670 Sally was a primary school student. She was being bullied by an older boy who was in Primary Six named Yu Sheng. Aching with sadness, she tried to stand up for herself but no one was on her side. She decided to go home with her paint-stained school bag]]> 2022-09-23 01:56:54 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309747670 https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309747707 "You may begin now!," said the examiner. My heart skipped a beat.I began to scribble all my answers on the exam sheet until,I did not know the answer to a question. The pin-drop silence in the exam room was giving me creeps as I am used to loud places. My heart was pounding in fear.

]]> 2022-09-23 01:56:55 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309747707 https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309747757 The girl's heart was pounding at a amazing speed as she ran on the running track. Spectators roared loudly as they cheered her on. Like a bolt out of the blue, the girl heard a loud "bang!" she ran as fast as her legs could carry her to the finishing line. ]]> 2022-09-23 01:56:58 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309747757 https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309747802 Ron's face went pale and his mind drew a blank as he did not remember anything he learnt for his  math exam.His mouth went dry even though he kept drinking the  freshly cold water he refilled before the toughest exam in Hogwarts ever.Ron started making eye contact with his frind Harry Potter and Hermoine Granger.He was just hoping to make it to his parents and ensure that the reputation of him and his family stays the same.However he knew that cheating would make regret and guilty for him one day]]> 2022-09-23 01:57:00 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309747802 https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309747836 "let go!"Joey shouted.Before that happened]]> 2022-09-23 01:57:01 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309747836 https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309748028 A woman near her twenties wearing a red PE t-shirt running on the field as she is finishing her goal ofrunning around the field ten times in ten minutes. She ran as she smell the smell of sweat on her t-shirt.Suddenly,someone puched her from the back and she fell onto the ground with a loud thud.But she got up and continue running,after she had reached her goal she sat down on a bench and gulped down mouthfuls of water.]]> 2022-09-23 01:57:11 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309748028 https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309748040 While hearing the sounds of gossipping, the dam of tears exploded and watered down, trickling my cheek. My popular classmates who were twins, Sherry and Terry, took out their soggy, cold sandwiches and threw them to me. My hair became oily from the sandwiches. The strong stench made me wanted to vomit.]]> 2022-09-23 01:57:12 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309748040 https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309748042 I went into the terrifying big hall where seats were arrranged evenly spaced.Candidates were seated silently that even when someone drops a feather,the sound could be heard.I broke out in a cold sweat.Soon the papers were distrubuted to every one. I heard the sound of papers being place on each of the candidate's table. I was a bundle of nerves before the teacher blew the wistle that could be heard from thousand miles away. ]]> 2022-09-23 01:57:12 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309748042 https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309748838 At the quiet and silence place , nobody dare to say a word. As silent as a tiny mouse , which even a pin droped could be heard. Suprisingly , the disipline mistress was not there . At the hall , pen could not be heard clicking . Out of the blue , Dave accidentally dropped his pen .In slow motion , a flood of thought came over Dave. Intrusive thoughts attacked his mind. Is everyone going to look at me?Fortunately, no one saw him. As he was still building the sandcastle, the teacher boomed as loud as a fired pistol , " One minute left please check your work! "Dave immediately got out of his dream. He was still at booklet A!]]> 2022-09-23 01:57:54 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309748838 https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309749153 Perspiration dripped down my back and forehead, I was standing in a position of running on the track. I heard a thunderous sound of cheering for me and other runners. The smell of popcorns and KFC came around me. I saw my form teacher staring at me and i know that he wanted me to win. Stress started to gather in my mind, i started to get nervous,heart pumping faster. 
     '' Beep! '' the whistle was blown, the sound pierced through me, i was stunned and forgot to run. '' Run! Mia! '' I heard my form teacher shouted. I came out from my stunning and realised that it was late. I sprinted running as fast as my legs could carry me.
      I heard the cheering of my friends and my teachers, so i made the decision on winning the game. As i ran to the finishing line, i felt comfortable and exhilarated as i thought i going to win.
'' Now! let us see our results! '' the mc said. '' Mia! The second place! you can do it next time try harder!'' as the mc said the words, my heart dropped I was sad.]]> 2022-09-23 01:58:11 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309749153 https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309749476 2022-09-23 01:58:29 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309749476 https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309749501
I heard an uproar coming from my left. Dozens of people were screaming, cheering and yelling. The people waving their flags looked like tiny red ants waving their tiny scarlet legs. "Let the show begin!" the emcee blared through is megaphone. Bright spotlights shone, cutting through the pitch-black sky. Stars twinkled in the horizon, and I joined the cheering. ]]> 2022-09-23 01:58:31 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309749501 https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309749593 As soon as the girl heard the loud "bang!" from the gun, the girl swung her hands back and fourth, legs stepping on the running track, pushing herself foward to beat the other competitors in this race. The girl felt the wind blowing onto her face, the sun blared at her back, her back felt hot. The girl could feel her own sweat dripping from her face, her hair swinging left and right, hitting her shoulders. The girl's heavy breath was loud, she heard the chants of the spectators.]]> 2022-09-23 01:58:33 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309749593 https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309752838 There were glistening tears flowing down from Callys cheeks until there was a big puddle right in front of her. There were a hundred and one thoughts milling around her head causing it to explode. There was a loud roar of laughter behind her. She was emotionally depressed when everyone called her black and a bully. She was turning red as a ripe tomato. She wanted to slap each and everyone's faces but when the roar got louder She felt as if she was in a bully-environment. Looking up in the velvety sky, She felt that she could be in the skies without a chanter of laughter. Caly felt emotionally damaged and had a mental breakdown and decided to flash back home. She ran as fast as lightning and felt a sigh of relief.]]> 2022-09-23 02:01:03 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_rovena_raymund/5zyllfdcihdvj14a/wish/2309752838