You will soon be writing a flash back. Do you want to write your own - totally separate from holes? Do you want to write one based on Holes? Do you want to include speech? Do you want to write it from a different person/object's perspective? What do you want to focus on and improve as you write your flashback? by Year 6 Teacher

Ines and Huma

2015-02-10 03:41:06 UTC

Ines: I would like to write in the perspective of an object, maybe a shoe,separate from Holes.

Huma: in english I would like to write the story from the wardens prespective.

Carlota & Bita

2015-02-10 03:46:35 UTC

Carlota: I would like to write a flashback on a different person's perspective. I also want to include speech. I want to do a flashback not based on Holes. I would like to base my flashback on a story which we totally make up (without writing the whole story so it is a bit more of a challenge) like writing as a jacket re-telling someone's life. I want to focus on using more literature features such as: alliteration, hyperboles, assonance, oxymoron or personification. So through using them I can master them.

Marco

2015-02-10 03:51:09 UTC

Marco: I would like to write a flash back different from Holes maybe about World War or other important historical events. I would like to include speech because it would make it more interesting.

Amal

2015-02-10 03:53:15 UTC

I would love it if we do a different prespective.Also use speeches side it is one of my targets.

Maisie-Ann

year6ris — 2015-02-10 03:53:41 UTC

In English i would like to write a flash back on Tudor times because i want to learn how crime and punishment changed over time.

We could also write a flash back on WWII because you could write as a gun, jacket, helmet etc.

If i do write on on Holes i would like to step into the shoes of a sake, who bit barf bag or even a Yellow Spotted Lizard.

Anyka,Farnia and Amal

2015-02-10 03:54:04 UTC

Anyka: I would like to write a flashback on the WWII because if I was writing from a different person's perspective I could be a jacket,gun,helmet,piece of scrap metal, an old navy ship, a rusting tank... The possibilities are endless! If I made one on Holes, I would try to be an animal, such as the rattlesnake who bit Barf Bag, or a scorpion, maybe even a yellow-spotted lizard who lived in Kate Barlow's and Stanley's Yenats the fourth's time. I could use speech by talking to a young tank or ship or talking to a smaller lizard or rattlesnake. I would like to vary my punctuation and use: colons,semi-colons,elipsis and speech marks (using correct punctuation at the end). I also want to use hyperboles,oxymorons,creative similes, metaphors, personification (I would be doing that anyway)

Bilal

2015-02-10 03:54:25 UTC

I would like to write a flashback about something else not Holes.Such as any other historical events I would also like to write from a perspective of one of the shields in World War

2015-02-10 03:54:42 UTC

Ibrahim

2015-02-10 03:57:15 UTC

I would prefere if we have used another man/womens shoes while we used our flashbacks because we have much more ease if we use another's shoes