what makes this a good argument by Logan Geeves https://padlet.com/lgeeves1/5x89r9k2ogxh Made with whimsy en-us 2017-11-08 22:57:19 UTC 2026-01-05 18:49:06 UTC hello@padlet.com Mr Geeves lgeeves1 https://padlet.com/lgeeves1/5x89r9k2ogxh/wish/205088315 2017-11-08 22:59:03 UTC https://padlet.com/lgeeves1/5x89r9k2ogxh/wish/205088315 Kiera https://padlet.com/lgeeves1/5x89r9k2ogxh/wish/205088372 There is a lot of things that Goldilocks did wrong 
1. She breaks into someones house/tresspasses
2.She steals breakfast
3. She vandalizes an antique   chair 
4. She swears
5. She messes up the beds with dirt 
Punishment she get eaten]]> 2017-11-08 22:59:28 UTC https://padlet.com/lgeeves1/5x89r9k2ogxh/wish/205088372 April https://padlet.com/lgeeves1/5x89r9k2ogxh/wish/205088391 What makes this a good argument..
1 It has points about the argument.
2 It has lots of small arguments inside the main one.
3 It has a story line.
4 It has decisions that she makes.
5 It repeats the points near the end.
6 It has a clear ending.
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]]> 2017-11-08 22:59:39 UTC https://padlet.com/lgeeves1/5x89r9k2ogxh/wish/205088391 Harry harry3301 https://padlet.com/lgeeves1/5x89r9k2ogxh/wish/205088407 Goldilocks did wrong
1 she is a thieve
2 takes things she likes.
3 she broke a chair
4 she made all of the beds very dirty.
5 she tress passes
6 she swears
7 she gets eaten
8 goes to jail.
9 upsets little bear
10 bears have revenge.]]> 2017-11-08 22:59:45 UTC https://padlet.com/lgeeves1/5x89r9k2ogxh/wish/205088407 Elliot elliot3911 https://padlet.com/lgeeves1/5x89r9k2ogxh/wish/205088424 because she a crook and the bears arnt.
she swears
she steals
it has a story line

]]> 2017-11-08 22:59:50 UTC https://padlet.com/lgeeves1/5x89r9k2ogxh/wish/205088424 Kyle https://padlet.com/lgeeves1/5x89r9k2ogxh/wish/205088430 1 she eat the borer 
2 she drakes into the house
3 she drakes the char
4 she steps on the bed]]> 2017-11-08 22:59:53 UTC https://padlet.com/lgeeves1/5x89r9k2ogxh/wish/205088430 Jayden jaydenm10 https://padlet.com/lgeeves1/5x89r9k2ogxh/wish/205088468  Goldilocks put dirt all over the bed.
she smashed an antique chair that doesn't belong to her
trespassed into a house
crook]]> 2017-11-08 23:00:09 UTC https://padlet.com/lgeeves1/5x89r9k2ogxh/wish/205088468 shay shayheta https://padlet.com/lgeeves1/5x89r9k2ogxh/wish/205088485 1. spoil
2.swears
3.eats someones food
4.she made a mess with her shoes 
5.she brackes in to someones house 
6. and she dies 
7. she knows what she did wrong


]]> 2017-11-08 23:00:16 UTC https://padlet.com/lgeeves1/5x89r9k2ogxh/wish/205088485 Martha https://padlet.com/lgeeves1/5x89r9k2ogxh/wish/205088500 It has a point on the argument 
it has choices 
small arguments  
Goldilocks breaks into some bears house . # trespassing 
breaks a chair 
eats poorage 
gets dirt on all of the beds 


]]> 2017-11-08 23:00:22 UTC https://padlet.com/lgeeves1/5x89r9k2ogxh/wish/205088500 Connor https://padlet.com/lgeeves1/5x89r9k2ogxh/wish/205088522 the things that Goldie locks did wrong eg breaking in stealing breaking chairs ]]> 2017-11-08 23:00:30 UTC https://padlet.com/lgeeves1/5x89r9k2ogxh/wish/205088522 salvado https://padlet.com/lgeeves1/5x89r9k2ogxh/wish/205088523 2017-11-08 23:00:30 UTC https://padlet.com/lgeeves1/5x89r9k2ogxh/wish/205088523 Aimee https://padlet.com/lgeeves1/5x89r9k2ogxh/wish/205088546 goldilocks and the 3 bears
1.she steals breakfast 
2. she breaks a old family chair 
3. she goes up stairs and gets the bed all ]]> 2017-11-08 23:00:43 UTC https://padlet.com/lgeeves1/5x89r9k2ogxh/wish/205088546 DanielC https://padlet.com/lgeeves1/5x89r9k2ogxh/wish/205088576 such a good girl nice and caring on the outside



 but a thief on the inside she broke into a house and stole a bowl of porrige ]]> 2017-11-08 23:00:53 UTC https://padlet.com/lgeeves1/5x89r9k2ogxh/wish/205088576 Bence https://padlet.com/lgeeves1/5x89r9k2ogxh/wish/205088592 Goldilocks didn’t think about what would happen after or about the consequences.`1`]]> 2017-11-08 23:00:59 UTC https://padlet.com/lgeeves1/5x89r9k2ogxh/wish/205088592 Josh https://padlet.com/lgeeves1/5x89r9k2ogxh/wish/205088640 1.it's got good points

]]> 2017-11-08 23:01:18 UTC https://padlet.com/lgeeves1/5x89r9k2ogxh/wish/205088640 Anna anna3573 https://padlet.com/lgeeves1/5x89r9k2ogxh/wish/205088666 1. Goldy locks break and entered into a home.
2. she recked a antek
3. She got brought to court.
4. but with no excuse the young bear  would be  acused with attement for murder.
5. She recked a bed wich is not illegal in anyway but is no good.]]> 2017-11-08 23:01:32 UTC https://padlet.com/lgeeves1/5x89r9k2ogxh/wish/205088666 Ava https://padlet.com/lgeeves1/5x89r9k2ogxh/wish/205088697 Things that Goldilocks did wrong:
1. She's a trespasser 
2. She breaks an antique chair
3. She swears
4. Goldilocks smothers all of the beds with dirt and filth
5. She steals
6. She broke into a house
7. She didn't think about the consequences
Conclusion...  She got eaten. ]]> 2017-11-08 23:01:45 UTC https://padlet.com/lgeeves1/5x89r9k2ogxh/wish/205088697 Milla https://padlet.com/lgeeves1/5x89r9k2ogxh/wish/205088861 1: it has points about the argument 
2 its very clear in understanding what the reader means 
3 it is not just a story it explains stuff like being spoilt doesn't give happiness 
4 it has a story line 
5 tresspasses 
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