Lucas Google Sites Peer Feedback 2019 - 2020 by Lucas Durante https://padlet.com/26ldurante/5wtyyiszv0ue Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2019-12-05 19:28:48 UTC 2019-12-09 16:42:53 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f60e.png Story Feedback 26bmitchell https://padlet.com/26ldurante/5wtyyiszv0ue/wish/420962314 A good part of your narrative is how you made the title. “The Battlefield” really tells me that this story will be intense, which it is! Well of course, the TITLE said that. In addition to the good parts of your story is how interesting it is. The story being about a war really put me in the question: Did the main character(s) survive? But even though the story is good with how intense it is, and the good picture you put into people’s mind, it still needs fixing. Maybe a little fix on the dialogue, and try to make the story a bit longer. It will make me and others more excited for what will happen next, just because we know more about what is going on.]]> 2019-12-06 19:30:09 UTC https://padlet.com/26ldurante/5wtyyiszv0ue/wish/420962314 peer feedback- Ryan C. Hey Lucas, one thing I think you did well is that you maid me feel that I was in the war and I think your gramerly and your spelling was really good.One thing you could work on is that I think that there are a lot of " we" so go back and I thin you should change it to something else 26rcatallo https://padlet.com/26ldurante/5wtyyiszv0ue/wish/421694826 2019-12-09 16:32:35 UTC https://padlet.com/26ldurante/5wtyyiszv0ue/wish/421694826