https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/5wfd50bdas2f7lxy To describe an emotion using figurative language en-us 2020-05-14 05:12:19 UTC 2025-10-02 08:14:51 UTC hello@padlet.com maymishu2008 https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/5wfd50bdas2f7lxy/wish/571746457 Peer assessed by Dhrivika 
WWW : You have include high level emotive words 
WWW : You have presented your work very neatly 
EBI : You could have included emotive phrases . ]]> 2020-05-14 05:46:21 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/5wfd50bdas2f7lxy/wish/571746457 https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/5wfd50bdas2f7lxy/wish/571746606 Task 1 and 2 for english
PA by Michelle 
WWW: Your work is perfect you have included everything in it.
EBI: You had described more about her grandpa.]]> 2020-05-14 05:46:30 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/5wfd50bdas2f7lxy/wish/571746606 ankrithik_gfs https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/5wfd50bdas2f7lxy/wish/571746739 Peer assessed by Naomi
WWW: The emotive words that you have used are high level.
EBI: Try including  more emotive words in your paragraphs ]]> 2020-05-14 05:46:38 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/5wfd50bdas2f7lxy/wish/571746739 https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/5wfd50bdas2f7lxy/wish/571747015 Peer assessed by Ankrithi
WWW:You used great handwriting and metaphors.
EBI: You could have used more high level vocabulary.]]> 2020-05-14 05:46:56 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/5wfd50bdas2f7lxy/wish/571747015 https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/5wfd50bdas2f7lxy/wish/571748121 peer assessed by Rameen
WWW:I like that you used high vocabulary Like the adjectives and how she felt
EBI: maybe try adding a little more Figurative langue ]]> 2020-05-14 05:48:06 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/5wfd50bdas2f7lxy/wish/571748121 https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/5wfd50bdas2f7lxy/wish/571748333 peer assessed by lilian
WWW: You have included high level emotive words.
EBI: Used more figurative lauguage

]]> 2020-05-14 05:48:20 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/5wfd50bdas2f7lxy/wish/571748333 https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/5wfd50bdas2f7lxy/wish/571748340 Assessed by Zayaan
Www:Good description about the storyline
Ebi:to add more effective emotive language]]> 2020-05-14 05:48:20 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/5wfd50bdas2f7lxy/wish/571748340 https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/5wfd50bdas2f7lxy/wish/571748941 Lili

Per assessed by marten

Www:used some emotive words

Ebi,you write more figurative language and emotive word

]]> 2020-05-14 05:48:58 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/5wfd50bdas2f7lxy/wish/571748941 https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/5wfd50bdas2f7lxy/wish/571749885 2020-05-14 05:49:49 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/5wfd50bdas2f7lxy/wish/571749885 https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/5wfd50bdas2f7lxy/wish/571751350 Peer assesed by Ryan
Very nice presentation and good handwriting
Even better if you just included some more figurative language]]> 2020-05-14 05:51:29 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/5wfd50bdas2f7lxy/wish/571751350 https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/5wfd50bdas2f7lxy/wish/571751975 Peer assessed by sid 
WWW- Good use of vocabulary 
EBI- you should have used more emotive words ]]> 2020-05-14 05:52:10 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/5wfd50bdas2f7lxy/wish/571751975 https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/5wfd50bdas2f7lxy/wish/571752504 Peered assessed by Tara 
You have managed to use great structure
You could have used more high level vocabulary 

]]> 2020-05-14 05:52:42 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/5wfd50bdas2f7lxy/wish/571752504 https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/5wfd50bdas2f7lxy/wish/571755758 Peer assessed by farida
WWW: He used a lot of emotive words and sentences
WWW: He wrote a lot of stuff that actually matches what is happening 
EBI: To write more in task 2]]> 2020-05-14 05:55:35 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/5wfd50bdas2f7lxy/wish/571755758 https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/5wfd50bdas2f7lxy/wish/571756958 2020-05-14 05:56:41 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/5wfd50bdas2f7lxy/wish/571756958 https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/5wfd50bdas2f7lxy/wish/571757631 2020-05-14 05:57:17 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/5wfd50bdas2f7lxy/wish/571757631 https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/5wfd50bdas2f7lxy/wish/571760293 Lili is this better
Peer Assessed by Lili 
WWW: Great use of high vocabulary!!!
EBI: You could've use some more personification and relative clause.


]]> 2020-05-14 05:59:40 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/5wfd50bdas2f7lxy/wish/571760293 https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/5wfd50bdas2f7lxy/wish/571763687 Peer assed Aya
Good use of high level vocabulary.
Even better if you made more paragraphs.]]> 2020-05-14 06:03:15 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/5wfd50bdas2f7lxy/wish/571763687 https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/5wfd50bdas2f7lxy/wish/571776714 2020-05-14 06:15:08 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/5wfd50bdas2f7lxy/wish/571776714