2017 Composition - Introduction(1st Paragraph) by JL https://padlet.com/lohjl/5vr9nm4s1k9l Write your first paragraph. 1. school 2.shopping centre 3.playground en-us 2017-10-08 04:04:38 UTC 2026-03-15 23:12:20 UTC hello@padlet.com (40) Mrs Chan lohjl https://padlet.com/lohjl/5vr9nm4s1k9l/wish/194957091 "Ring... " the school bell rang.

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"Ring..." the school bell shrieked and echoed loudly through the air. Immediately, there was a flurry of activities. As fast as lightning, students burst out of the classroom like a horde of prisoners set free.
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(12) Genieve Tan 
The shopping centre was bustling with activities. Shoppers were milling about, hunting for bargains.The mall was packed like sardines.  Max was shopping for a perfect gift for Mothers' Day with his younger brother, Tam. Max held on tightly to his brother as they weaved through the BOISTEROUS crowd.

bois‧ter‧ous /ˈbɔɪstərəs/ adjective  
someone, especially a child, who is boisterous makes a lot of noise and has a lot of energy 

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