Writing Task 1 by Linh Chi Trần https://padlet.com/tlinhchi10/5v9sdus5vszhedjg en-us 2023-10-01 07:11:11 UTC 2023-10-29 15:09:33 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/tlinhchi10/5v9sdus5vszhedjg/wish/2727294348 - Introduction: xem lại chia thì và chia động từ, ở đây có 1 cái bar chart thui nhé
- Overview: không nói cụ thể số liệu (9%) ra, chỉ cần nói là có dramatic rise thôi là được
- Body 1: tránh lặp cụm accounted for, có thể thay bằng made up ở cụm 2. Câu 3 nói về rise thì nên chỉ rise bao nhiêu chứ không phải số liệu sau khi tăng trưởng nhé]]> 2023-10-01 07:45:59 UTC https://padlet.com/tlinhchi10/5v9sdus5vszhedjg/wish/2727294348 https://padlet.com/tlinhchi10/5v9sdus5vszhedjg/wish/2727294466 - Body 2: từ percentage ở about 15% of the percentage nên đổi thành workforce]]> 2023-10-01 07:46:28 UTC https://padlet.com/tlinhchi10/5v9sdus5vszhedjg/wish/2727294466 Bài viết task 1-Khánh Ly https://padlet.com/tlinhchi10/5v9sdus5vszhedjg/wish/2727294651 - Overview: leaded xem lại cách chia động từ, nên đổi thành remained the highest, Scotland không cần nói tăng giảm cụ thể là bao nhiêu nên bỏ over a half đi nha
- Body 1: câu đầu thiếu chủ ngữ, bỏ từ who đi là được nhé. Câu 2 thêm s vào sau worker, câu 3 đổi rose to over thành 1 từ đồng nghĩa khác như increased to 
- Body 2: câu đầu thay with thành of. Câu 2 sửa has doubled thành doubled thôi, nếu dùng HTHT thì ý chỉ nó vẫn tiếp tục tăng ở hiện tại chứ không phải vào năm 2010 nữa nhé. Câu 3 percentage of part-time workers bỏ đi luôn, resident thêm s vào cuối ]]> 2023-10-01 07:46:58 UTC https://padlet.com/tlinhchi10/5v9sdus5vszhedjg/wish/2727294651 Sample Essay - Graph tlinhchi10 https://padlet.com/tlinhchi10/5v9sdus5vszhedjg/wish/2727295505 The given graph provides details on how many part-time employees there were in 4 nations of the United Kingdom at two timestamps: 1980 and 2010.

Overall, most countries experienced an upward trend in their numbers, with the exception of Northern Ireland. Additionally, Scotland had the greatest growth out of the four countries.

Regarding Wales, it remained the country with the highest number of part-time workers at both time frames considered. In 1980, more than 30% of the Welsh workforce were part-timers, and in the next 30 years, the figure increased slightly by about 3%. Similarly, England also witnessed a rise in their number of part-time staff, rising from 25% to 30% in 2010.

Scotland, on the other hand, experienced the most dramatic growth in its figures. In 1980, the percentage of part-time workers in Scotland was the lowest out of all countries, at over 10%. However, by 2010, this number almost doubled and ranked third out of four nations in the UK. The only exception to the upward trends was Northern Ireland, falling from 15% in 1980 to roughly 13% in the next 30 years. (185 words)

]]> 2023-10-01 07:48:49 UTC https://padlet.com/tlinhchi10/5v9sdus5vszhedjg/wish/2727295505 Map tlinhchi10 https://padlet.com/tlinhchi10/5v9sdus5vszhedjg/wish/2727295560 2023-10-01 07:48:58 UTC https://padlet.com/tlinhchi10/5v9sdus5vszhedjg/wish/2727295560 MinhMinhMinh https://padlet.com/tlinhchi10/5v9sdus5vszhedjg/wish/2727296117 - Overview: staff số ít hay nhiều đều giữ nguyên nhé, không có staffs. Câu 2 xem lại thì dùng đã đúng chưa nhé ]]> 2023-10-01 07:50:46 UTC https://padlet.com/tlinhchi10/5v9sdus5vszhedjg/wish/2727296117 MinhMinhMinh https://padlet.com/tlinhchi10/5v9sdus5vszhedjg/wish/2727296222 - Body 1: staff không thêm s
- Body 2: bỏ đoạn which is a very large increase đi nhé, nếu nhận xét thì nên nhận xét là "which was the biggest growth out of all countries in the UK". Câu tiếp theo vế "which decreased the figures" phải viết là "whose figures decreased", này là số liệu của cái gì giảm chứ không phải số liệu giảm cái gì nhé]]> 2023-10-01 07:51:07 UTC https://padlet.com/tlinhchi10/5v9sdus5vszhedjg/wish/2727296222 Lâm 1 https://padlet.com/tlinhchi10/5v9sdus5vszhedjg/wish/2727298247 - Introduction: phải nói là the graph illustrates/provides details on the number of part-time employees nhé, hiện tại câu này thiếu luôn chủ ngữ lẫn động từ nên sẽ gây khó hiểu
- Overview: xem lại sample để viết lại nhé, câu thiếu hết động từ chính rùi]]> 2023-10-01 07:57:14 UTC https://padlet.com/tlinhchi10/5v9sdus5vszhedjg/wish/2727298247 Thộn Nhôm 1 https://padlet.com/tlinhchi10/5v9sdus5vszhedjg/wish/2727298263 2023-10-01 07:57:18 UTC https://padlet.com/tlinhchi10/5v9sdus5vszhedjg/wish/2727298263 https://padlet.com/tlinhchi10/5v9sdus5vszhedjg/wish/2727298396 2023-10-01 07:57:43 UTC https://padlet.com/tlinhchi10/5v9sdus5vszhedjg/wish/2727298396 Nhân 2 https://padlet.com/tlinhchi10/5v9sdus5vszhedjg/wish/2727298630 2023-10-01 07:58:27 UTC https://padlet.com/tlinhchi10/5v9sdus5vszhedjg/wish/2727298630 Map - HW tlinhchi10 https://padlet.com/tlinhchi10/5v9sdus5vszhedjg/wish/2727327689 The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.

DEADLINE: 22h Saturday 7/10/2023

Sample:
The given map illustrates the changes of Grange Park since its opening in 1920 to today. 
 
Overall, the park has undergone various alterations, evidenced by the replacement of most old facilities.
 
The most notable change is in the center of the park, where the old rose gardens and seats were relocated. Only the garden in the upper left corner remains untouched, while others have been reinstated to the center in place of the water fountain. To the left of the newly located garden, the stage for musicians has been turned into an amphitheatre to hold concerts. This redevelopment is accompanied by the removal of the two seating areas on both sides of the park as well as the one on the bottom left. 
 
On the top right of the park, a new cafe has replaced the rose garden, while the adjacent pond is now a children’s play area. A water feature was installed in the bottom right corner, substituting the old pond. Finally, an entrance to the underground car park has been installed to the right of the park. (180 words)


]]> 2023-10-01 09:19:01 UTC https://padlet.com/tlinhchi10/5v9sdus5vszhedjg/wish/2727327689 Ngọc Anh (plan) https://padlet.com/tlinhchi10/5v9sdus5vszhedjg/wish/2736540393 2023-10-07 15:21:03 UTC https://padlet.com/tlinhchi10/5v9sdus5vszhedjg/wish/2736540393 Map tlinhchi10 https://padlet.com/tlinhchi10/5v9sdus5vszhedjg/wish/2757538772 The plans show the change of a small theater in 2010 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.

]]> 2023-10-22 07:47:33 UTC https://padlet.com/tlinhchi10/5v9sdus5vszhedjg/wish/2757538772 Map - HW (22/10) tlinhchi10 https://padlet.com/tlinhchi10/5v9sdus5vszhedjg/wish/2757587532 The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.

DEADLINE: 22h Saturday 29/10/2023

]]> 2023-10-22 09:35:00 UTC https://padlet.com/tlinhchi10/5v9sdus5vszhedjg/wish/2757587532 Ngọc Anh( map) https://padlet.com/tlinhchi10/5v9sdus5vszhedjg/wish/2767653943 2023-10-29 15:09:33 UTC https://padlet.com/tlinhchi10/5v9sdus5vszhedjg/wish/2767653943