https://padlet.com/melissa_mccarter/5ukbbx9vc98p en-us 2018-01-30 14:46:05 UTC 2025-11-20 05:30:25 UTC hello@padlet.com kaitlynlan1532 https://padlet.com/melissa_mccarter/5ukbbx9vc98p/wish/226211553 This introduction received a 4 because as the grading rubric says "This prose generally conveys the writers ideas but may be inconsistent in controlling the elements of effective writing".]]> 2018-01-30 17:23:50 UTC https://padlet.com/melissa_mccarter/5ukbbx9vc98p/wish/226211553 annakle6954 https://padlet.com/melissa_mccarter/5ukbbx9vc98p/wish/226211846 We believe A received an 7 because of their well developed claim, and wide array of evidence. We originally wanted to give it an 8 however their prose could be more mature.]]> 2018-01-30 17:24:21 UTC https://padlet.com/melissa_mccarter/5ukbbx9vc98p/wish/226211846 https://padlet.com/melissa_mccarter/5ukbbx9vc98p/wish/226211970 This includes a qualified thesis with a little context. However, it includes basic prose and each piece of evidence is only briefly mentioned. Evidence from each source is simply stated and not added upon. Most parts of this essay simply summarize the documents]]> 2018-01-30 17:24:35 UTC https://padlet.com/melissa_mccarter/5ukbbx9vc98p/wish/226211970 aimeelea4933 https://padlet.com/melissa_mccarter/5ukbbx9vc98p/wish/226212399 - Uses almost all the sources and doesn't spend time explaining the sources
- "Source D says... Source C backs this up with..."
- Misleading introduction
- Bounces around numerous ideas, doesn't make what they're trying to say clear enough]]> 2018-01-30 17:25:26 UTC https://padlet.com/melissa_mccarter/5ukbbx9vc98p/wish/226212399 abigailbor0627 https://padlet.com/melissa_mccarter/5ukbbx9vc98p/wish/226212709 -established point of view
-evidence is insufficient

]]> 2018-01-30 17:26:00 UTC https://padlet.com/melissa_mccarter/5ukbbx9vc98p/wish/226212709 shreyabal6787 https://padlet.com/melissa_mccarter/5ukbbx9vc98p/wish/226212955 "Enforcing an honor code to prevent plagiarism in college should be eliminated due to the majority of students that don't follow this code or disagrees with it lands at 52%..."
This direct quote shows that the student is not effective at conveying their ideas. The excerpt contains poor grammar and their word choice is ineffective.]]> 2018-01-30 17:26:25 UTC https://padlet.com/melissa_mccarter/5ukbbx9vc98p/wish/226212955 annekahcon1958 https://padlet.com/melissa_mccarter/5ukbbx9vc98p/wish/226214538 - could elevate language
- should deepen analysis to better explain their ideas 
- proof read to prevent grammatical errors and spelling mistakes

]]> 2018-01-30 17:29:16 UTC https://padlet.com/melissa_mccarter/5ukbbx9vc98p/wish/226214538 alecgae1704 https://padlet.com/melissa_mccarter/5ukbbx9vc98p/wish/226214722 -closed claim
-cites evidence (3 pieces)
-supports argument with reasoning]]> 2018-01-30 17:29:33 UTC https://padlet.com/melissa_mccarter/5ukbbx9vc98p/wish/226214722 aubreecur1714 https://padlet.com/melissa_mccarter/5ukbbx9vc98p/wish/226215363 Good analysis, though sometimes arguments were unclear ("Due to problems with cheating...a general state of mind has been established")

]]> 2018-01-30 17:30:41 UTC https://padlet.com/melissa_mccarter/5ukbbx9vc98p/wish/226215363 aubreecur1714 https://padlet.com/melissa_mccarter/5ukbbx9vc98p/wish/226217075 words repeated a lot, "repurcussions," points are redundant and not well-argued; just stated]]> 2018-01-30 17:33:38 UTC https://padlet.com/melissa_mccarter/5ukbbx9vc98p/wish/226217075