https://padlet.com/jspinner/5rq8gr92ryatpj1i Writers & readers give feedback to peers after listening to songs and our Writing About Reading for Songs. en-us 2021-02-24 18:39:45 UTC 2021-03-03 12:48:55 UTC hello@padlet.com dd10667 https://padlet.com/jspinner/5rq8gr92ryatpj1i/wish/1252838683 my partner was jack nettle-ton. when i read is story and listened to his song i thought the song , and the writing was very good.the song he picked was in the end, i really liked his piece because i think he did a good job putting together his thinking and telling me why he picked the song and why is was important to him. some of the only feedback i think i need to give is, i think there was a lot of run on sentences that need to be fixed. but overall i think it was really good.]]> 2021-03-01 13:03:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jspinner/5rq8gr92ryatpj1i/wish/1252838683 https://padlet.com/jspinner/5rq8gr92ryatpj1i/wish/1252840385 He said that just work on some punctuation but other than that it looks good.]]> 2021-03-01 13:03:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jspinner/5rq8gr92ryatpj1i/wish/1252840385 lg11245 https://padlet.com/jspinner/5rq8gr92ryatpj1i/wish/1252840911 For Tess: I really liked how Tess unpacked all of the lines in her song (Tis The 🤬 Season by: Taylor Swift) and I knew the song before, but I never thought of it the way Tess has, and now the song maked a bit more sense.

For Deme: Deme's song was called "Fight Song" by Rachel Platten. I really like how Deme said that she thinks that when she says that it's her fight, she is referring to fight for the equality of women.]]> 2021-03-01 13:03:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jspinner/5rq8gr92ryatpj1i/wish/1252840911 https://padlet.com/jspinner/5rq8gr92ryatpj1i/wish/1252843195 My partner is Ella and her favorite was rember when by the walllows I think that it is a very soft song and it seems like something she would listen to. And I like how she did her story casue she used the story for when she first heard her song.]]> 2021-03-01 13:04:10 UTC https://padlet.com/jspinner/5rq8gr92ryatpj1i/wish/1252843195 el11609 https://padlet.com/jspinner/5rq8gr92ryatpj1i/wish/1252844210 my partner is miss Frankie and her song was Pumped Up Kicks by Foster The People, and she had lots of detail about her song ]]> 2021-03-01 13:04:25 UTC https://padlet.com/jspinner/5rq8gr92ryatpj1i/wish/1252844210 jc13070 https://padlet.com/jspinner/5rq8gr92ryatpj1i/wish/1252846999 told me to work on punctuation and  
to also add in some analysis of the song instead of just talking about my personal connection to the song.]]> 2021-03-01 13:05:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jspinner/5rq8gr92ryatpj1i/wish/1252846999 https://padlet.com/jspinner/5rq8gr92ryatpj1i/wish/1252847333 her writing was good it could of used a few things like some sentences she thought there were word there but there wasn't
By Nasir]]> 2021-03-01 13:05:10 UTC https://padlet.com/jspinner/5rq8gr92ryatpj1i/wish/1252847333 https://padlet.com/jspinner/5rq8gr92ryatpj1i/wish/1252850942 my partner was Deven and his song was the national anthem i really liked his piece because he wrote about the song for our country and it was cool to see what someone thought the deeper meaning was and he really went deep into the lyrics and did a really good job on saying what the deeper meaning is. he also put a good amount of quotes from the song in his piece and did a good job on saying what it meant and did a really good job showing the deeper meaning of those quotes. the only thing that could be fixed was make it a little longer because it ended so quick and i wanted to read more]]> 2021-03-01 13:06:05 UTC https://padlet.com/jspinner/5rq8gr92ryatpj1i/wish/1252850942 https://padlet.com/jspinner/5rq8gr92ryatpj1i/wish/1252854432 was well written and you could tell that he liked it.I also like how he relates it to what he does in his own life.-violet ]]> 2021-03-01 13:06:57 UTC https://padlet.com/jspinner/5rq8gr92ryatpj1i/wish/1252854432 https://padlet.com/jspinner/5rq8gr92ryatpj1i/wish/1252855361 He said my piece was good just need some punctuation or its basicly done]]> 2021-03-01 13:07:11 UTC https://padlet.com/jspinner/5rq8gr92ryatpj1i/wish/1252855361 el10673 https://padlet.com/jspinner/5rq8gr92ryatpj1i/wish/1252875977 My partner was Nic and his song was Chicken Fried. At first my thoughts on the song was that the author is trying to show to just enjoy life. But after reading Nics article it turns out that it actually had a deeper meaning. It turns it that Nic dug deeper and figured out its actually about enjoying the little things in life and not taking them for granted.]]> 2021-03-01 13:12:16 UTC https://padlet.com/jspinner/5rq8gr92ryatpj1i/wish/1252875977 md10848 https://padlet.com/jspinner/5rq8gr92ryatpj1i/wish/1252880178 2021-03-01 13:13:17 UTC https://padlet.com/jspinner/5rq8gr92ryatpj1i/wish/1252880178 ns10678 https://padlet.com/jspinner/5rq8gr92ryatpj1i/wish/1252896733 My partner was Eddie his song was Stressed out by Twenty one pilots.I like in Eddie's first paragraph he talked about the play list I thought that was smart and why they named it.Overall it was good. he did a good job explaining what some of the words meant.He had a great punction and Captials so it was good and had the perfect amount of details.]]> 2021-03-01 13:16:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jspinner/5rq8gr92ryatpj1i/wish/1252896733 https://padlet.com/jspinner/5rq8gr92ryatpj1i/wish/1252939871 For Demi: I liked how she unpacked her evidence and how she explained all the lines of the song.(Fight Song by Rachel Platten)

For Likitha: I liked how she explained the whole song and how she unpacked the lines of the song. (How You Like That by BlackPink)]]> 2021-03-01 13:26:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jspinner/5rq8gr92ryatpj1i/wish/1252939871 https://padlet.com/jspinner/5rq8gr92ryatpj1i/wish/1252943392 i really liked Tess and likitha because they had such great pieces. tesses was so good she had good detail and great story all together. likithas was also really great and i lived how she explained everything really nicely ]]> 2021-03-01 13:27:04 UTC https://padlet.com/jspinner/5rq8gr92ryatpj1i/wish/1252943392 https://padlet.com/jspinner/5rq8gr92ryatpj1i/wish/1263402160 My partner was madi. I loved the piece that she had because it had so much detail and when she said what she thought it was about, she had evidence to back up her claim. Also she added a picture I really liked that as well because it shows me a little of what it was about. Madi writing was written well and it was very organized. ]]> 2021-03-03 12:45:16 UTC https://padlet.com/jspinner/5rq8gr92ryatpj1i/wish/1263402160