Regarding your first recording, I can say that listening to you was very nice. I could notice how prepared you were since the information that you delivered was accurate and straightforward. You also used specific vocabulary, congrats on it; keep it that way.  

When it comes to your speaking skills I recommend you to relisten to yourself and find some instances in which you missed some final sounds and misplaced the stress of few words. Nevertheless, your rendition was, in general terms, of the highest standard. 

Best regards,

Álvaro

You did a great job tailoring this to the specific instructions that I gave you.

You are clear and straightforward when stating your ideas.

What I have listened to is a well-structured rendition, including an introduciton, development of the topic, and a conclusion. Specific vocabulary was used as well, which is a must. Keep it that way 👍.

-Álvaro

What a comprehensive introduction! Thanks for sharing it.

-Álvaro

You turned an unknown topic into something really interesting. Very good display of the research you have carried out. You sound confident and academic enough. You have succeeded in this task!

-Álvaro

-Álvaro