https://padlet.com/24hhausle/5psqhls1rrhe Thank you for leaving me feedback! Make sure you are constructive! en-us 2018-12-05 15:52:42 UTC 2018-12-07 16:08:35 UTC hello@padlet.com 24shagopian https://padlet.com/24hhausle/5psqhls1rrhe/wish/312280798 OMG SHOOK! That was really really good. The whole time I was being lead on one way and it completely switched in the end. The suspense and lure of confusion is really amazing! I loved the storyline and you saw me, I was like gasping and looking crazy in my seat. I also thought that the paper basketball part(s) were funny. The story was amazing, but one thing that could have made it even better was to make the character development more clear. I couldn't really tell how the character had changed. Other than that, I really enjoyed your story]]> 2018-12-07 15:51:26 UTC https://padlet.com/24hhausle/5psqhls1rrhe/wish/312280798 24ogomez https://padlet.com/24hhausle/5psqhls1rrhe/wish/312287113 OMG! That ending had me SHOOK! You did the suspense part so well! I was constantly on the edge of my seat. I wish that there was more character development. But besides that, it was amazing!]]> 2018-12-07 16:04:39 UTC https://padlet.com/24hhausle/5psqhls1rrhe/wish/312287113 24mpaik https://padlet.com/24hhausle/5psqhls1rrhe/wish/312287270 OMG what the actual heck? Hope....... I'm SHOOK!!!!! That was AWESOME! I was on the edge of my seat, like the whole time, waiting for Michael to show up and for Monica to admit that she's cheating on Ty, but NO. WOW. The suspense was phenomenal! The detail... PERFECT! As said by Olivia, I do think that Ty's personality could have changed a bit more, but overall, great job!]]> 2018-12-07 16:04:59 UTC https://padlet.com/24hhausle/5psqhls1rrhe/wish/312287270