Altered verses by Dania Saliba Rodriguez https://padlet.com/DaniaSalRod/5mhirow23xh4zqrf write your shorten and extended verses here. Then, as a comment, explain what criteria you have followed to create each version. en-us 2021-03-14 18:22:49 UTC 2025-12-22 02:48:10 UTC hello@padlet.com Example by the teacher: DaniaSalRod https://padlet.com/DaniaSalRod/5mhirow23xh4zqrf/wish/1307809256 Shortened version:

Words
words
cluster
bouquet
love
name
heart
bell
bell
name
action
year
hair
hair
daylight
sun
blot
image.

Extended version:

All ugly words! Whatever terrible words come to me, and even as they come, I'll fling them in a wild disastrous cluster and not wrap them in a careful horrendous bouquet. I love you! I am mad! I am suffocating with love for you! Your scary name rings in my heart like a deafening bell. When I think of you, I tremble, and the thunderous bell shakes and rings out your creepy name! Everything you do I love! I remember every atocious action of yours that I ever witnessed! I know that last year on the twelfth of May, you changed the way you wore your lousy hair. I am so used to taking your gross hair for blinding daylight itself that, just as one stares at the dazzling sun and sees a red bulrring blot on all things, when I turn away after looking at you, I see a radiant ghastly image imprinted on everything!]]> 2021-03-14 18:23:48 UTC https://padlet.com/DaniaSalRod/5mhirow23xh4zqrf/wish/1307809256 Student's answer DaniaSalRod https://padlet.com/DaniaSalRod/5mhirow23xh4zqrf/wish/1327138518 Shortened version.
Whatever words come
I’ll fling them in a cluster
because I love you.

Expanded version.
Wit, panache, charisma.
All words! 
Courage, gallantry, valor.
Whatever words come to me, and even as they come…
Beauty, grace, intelligence.
... I'll fling them in a wild cluster and not wrap them in a careful bouquet.
 I love you! I am mad! I am suffocating with love for you! Your name rings in my heart like a bell. When I think of you, I tremble, and the bell shakes and rings out your name! 
Roxane, Roxane, Roxane.
Everything you do I love! I remember every action of yours that I ever witnessed! 
Roxane, Roxane, Roxane.
I know that last year on the twelfth of May, you changed the way you wore your hair. I am so used to taking your hair for daylight itself that, just as one stares at the sun and sees a red blot on all things, when I turn away after looking at you, I see a radiant image imprinted on everything!
Roxane, Roxane, Roxane.
The only word I need engraved is your name.
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