https://padlet.com/23mmcardle/5klxpgy36san Welcome to my padlet! Please leave good feedback en-us 2018-03-01 13:29:12 UTC 2018-03-28 13:31:11 UTC hello@padlet.com 23inunziata https://padlet.com/23mmcardle/5klxpgy36san/wish/236895121 I thought that you did really good writing your essay. I really liked how you took evidence and referred to the article. Secondly, I thought your warrants were strong and they gave a lot of evidence. (Which is a good skill to have when writing). I enjoyed reading your writing piece. For my one wish, next time, try not to say "the speaker said", because the reader might be wondering who is speaking so instead you could say the last name of whoever the speaker is. Overall, I really liked your writing piece! ]]> 2018-03-01 13:53:35 UTC https://padlet.com/23mmcardle/5klxpgy36san/wish/236895121 23elin https://padlet.com/23mmcardle/5klxpgy36san/wish/237520894 STAR: I thought your screenplay was really good since you've added so much detail that many people would understand what the deleted scene was about.
STAR: Your persuasive editorial was really good because you described how making a clothing drive can help a lot of people since they would help make more jobs for other people to work.
WISH: In the future, I suggest that maybe you can add more good word choice. But your writing piece was good.]]> 2018-03-02 17:46:05 UTC https://padlet.com/23mmcardle/5klxpgy36san/wish/237520894 23sberkman https://padlet.com/23mmcardle/5klxpgy36san/wish/246858841 Hey Morgan. Your magazine article is really good and exaggerated. One tar is the witnesses. I really liked how you Incorporated the witnesses because it really adds something. Another thing I liked is the story line. It was a very interesting topic that a teen our age could probably relate to. One wish for next time is to make sure you go back and check the spelling and grammar. Otherwise great job!!
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