Mentor Essay Features (P2) by Julie Moyer https://padlet.com/jmoyer11/5habhh2wst3pf6k Post appropriate pictures that you would like to see as our class mascot on Schoology for ELA! en-us 2021-01-18 19:24:02 UTC 2021-01-27 19:18:53 UTC hello@padlet.com The person who wrote that they uses a lot of quotes. They used short sentences. Conner and Vann https://padlet.com/jmoyer11/5habhh2wst3pf6k/wish/1133381275 2021-01-27 19:11:37 UTC https://padlet.com/jmoyer11/5habhh2wst3pf6k/wish/1133381275 Brooke Heider and Zonia Neumann https://padlet.com/jmoyer11/5habhh2wst3pf6k/wish/1133383186 A craft shown in these paragraphs is description. One example of this is in paragraph 2 when they quote the story. ]]> 2021-01-27 19:11:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jmoyer11/5habhh2wst3pf6k/wish/1133383186 Kylee https://padlet.com/jmoyer11/5habhh2wst3pf6k/wish/1133384691 The author of the essay uses resourceful quotes to inform the reader of morgrot's life before moving to Venus. ]]> 2021-01-27 19:12:17 UTC https://padlet.com/jmoyer11/5habhh2wst3pf6k/wish/1133384691 Paije and Jenna https://padlet.com/jmoyer11/5habhh2wst3pf6k/wish/1133385767 In the next two paragraphs we found that the author of this essay had descriptive craft features. They described the children's jealousy over Margot. Not only that, but the author also used a lot of comparison/reasoning to back up it's thesis. ]]> 2021-01-27 19:12:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jmoyer11/5habhh2wst3pf6k/wish/1133385767 Ari https://padlet.com/jmoyer11/5habhh2wst3pf6k/wish/1133391237 the person who wrote the essay , wrote how what the children did to margrot effected them and her.]]> 2021-01-27 19:13:37 UTC https://padlet.com/jmoyer11/5habhh2wst3pf6k/wish/1133391237 levi tucker https://padlet.com/jmoyer11/5habhh2wst3pf6k/wish/1133391797 the person that wrote the essay shows that they like to use quotes.]]> 2021-01-27 19:13:44 UTC https://padlet.com/jmoyer11/5habhh2wst3pf6k/wish/1133391797 Xavier, Krispy, Skelly https://padlet.com/jmoyer11/5habhh2wst3pf6k/wish/1133394360 It quotes the story to support it's claims about how Margot hurts others and how the other kids are jealous of Margot. ]]> 2021-01-27 19:14:15 UTC https://padlet.com/jmoyer11/5habhh2wst3pf6k/wish/1133394360 John and Chase https://padlet.com/jmoyer11/5habhh2wst3pf6k/wish/1133398303 uses quotes in the essay 

]]> 2021-01-27 19:15:05 UTC https://padlet.com/jmoyer11/5habhh2wst3pf6k/wish/1133398303 Amanda https://padlet.com/jmoyer11/5habhh2wst3pf6k/wish/1133403691 The Author of the essay uses details from the story to show how Margot made the other kids jealous.]]> 2021-01-27 19:16:10 UTC https://padlet.com/jmoyer11/5habhh2wst3pf6k/wish/1133403691