Peer evaluations of presentations by jenny silvester https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi Please add a positive and an Even better if comment....... en-us 2018-01-09 08:56:16 UTC 2018-01-09 12:00:20 UTC hello@padlet.com Clear layour of presentation and good presentation skills. Good understanding of article and reasoning of picking it. https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219652947 2018-01-09 09:54:21 UTC https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219652947 Very concise, it is clear you have a passion for the topic and you can easily reflect it within your setting. Very visually attractive and easy to follow. https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219653268 2018-01-09 09:55:37 UTC https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219653268 It was nice to hear about how you have used some of the findings and applied them to your setting, reflecting on current practice. https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219653382 2018-01-09 09:56:14 UTC https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219653382 https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219654168 Clear powerpoint. Understood all your points as they were explained clearly and concisely.]]> 2018-01-09 09:59:34 UTC https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219654168 Good link to theorists, clear layout and good understanding of the article https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219655288 2018-01-09 10:04:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219655288 Interesting reasons for choosing your chosen research article. It's nice to see that you are thinking about the children present in your setting when considering which research article to unpick. It shows you are linking theory to current practice. https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219655454 2018-01-09 10:05:04 UTC https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219655454 https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219655555 Clear headings and linked to current practice.]]> 2018-01-09 10:05:33 UTC https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219655555 clearly knew what you were talking about and had a clear understanding of your article. https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219655874 2018-01-09 10:07:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219655874 Clear layout, you've chosen an interesting article which you can reflect into your practice. Great links with theory and practice https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219656068 2018-01-09 10:07:53 UTC https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219656068 https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219657158 Clear understanding on the article and had lots of knowledge on the topic. Good link to theorists. ]]> 2018-01-09 10:12:14 UTC https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219657158 https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219658667 Clear layout, using different colours to highlight main points. Good understanding on the article. ]]> 2018-01-09 10:18:25 UTC https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219658667 Clear understanding of the article, very detailed presentation and good presentation skills. Well done https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219658885 2018-01-09 10:19:17 UTC https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219658885 you have strong reasons as to why you have chosen the research article, you also have a clear understanding of the research article and you were able to clearly show this through your powerpoint. https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219659331 2018-01-09 10:21:05 UTC https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219659331 Very detailed. Interesting link to footballers being bad role models as often they are seen as good role models to young boys. Very interesting points that have made me rethink about the use of male role models in settings and thinking about their characterisitics rather than them just being males. Clearly know what your article is about. https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219659543 2018-01-09 10:22:04 UTC https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219659543 Brilliant presentational skills, it is clear that you have carried out lots of research on the article and understand it. You clearly have a passion for the topic and can easily reflect it into your setting. It is a really interesting article and I think you can expand and analyse it a lot. https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219660822 2018-01-09 10:27:19 UTC https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219660822 A good understanding of the research article was demonstrated. Also, you made good comparisons with previous studies which gave more weight to the findings. https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219663012 2018-01-09 10:37:13 UTC https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219663012 Good presentation skills and understanding of the article https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219663412 2018-01-09 10:39:05 UTC https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219663412 clear understanding of your research article, and linking it to your practice https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219663828 2018-01-09 10:40:49 UTC https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219663828 Really interesting topic that you have chosen to talk about. Clear presentation and results given https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219664133 2018-01-09 10:42:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219664133 Interesting topic, clear layout. It is a topic which you can relate to your setting https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219664201 2018-01-09 10:42:19 UTC https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219664201 You have critically evaluated the research article, showing a very good understanding of the importance of critical analysis in your writing. https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219665341 2018-01-09 10:47:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219665341 good link to your practice in the introduction. Clear findings and results. Clear to see that you have spent time researching and finding information https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219665468 2018-01-09 10:48:00 UTC https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219665468 clear reasons as to why you have chosen this research article, you also have a clear understanding of the research article. https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219665519 2018-01-09 10:48:16 UTC https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219665519 Good reasoning to why you have picked the article, a good detailed presentation and good visuals https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219665641 2018-01-09 10:48:42 UTC https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219665641 https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219665984 Lovely layout and clear headings. Good link to practice throughout.]]> 2018-01-09 10:50:15 UTC https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219665984 The methodologies used are clearly presented as are the results and findings. https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219669380 2018-01-09 11:05:27 UTC https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219669380 Interesting topic you have chosen. Interesting findings about boys being favoured over girls when teachers created literacy activities. Clear powerpoint and good points that you have made. https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219669493 2018-01-09 11:05:53 UTC https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219669493 https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219669523 Clear layout of presentation and good presentation skills. Great understanding of article. ]]> 2018-01-09 11:06:00 UTC https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219669523 clear understanding of the research article, and a good understanding of the methods used within the research. https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219669648 2018-01-09 11:06:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219669648 Interesting topic chosen which you can clearly relate to practice. It is clear you understand the topic. https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219669901 2018-01-09 11:07:36 UTC https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219669901 I like the way your points are brief and relevant, not going into too much detail. https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219669985 2018-01-09 11:07:58 UTC https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219669985 Shannon - good , remember to refer to it as Research or research article.You have made some links with the benefits of outdoor play but need to extend this further with links to sources. Compare findings with wider research and discuss the usefulness of the methods chosen. well done - a very good start. Jenny jenny_silvester https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219676722 2018-01-09 11:37:26 UTC https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219676722 Rosa - Well done - a very good startplease remember to add when the research took place. Useful to also mention the gov preoccupation with underachievement as well as the importance of outdoor play in your introduction. Comment on the children who showed no signs of improvement and perhaps the missed opportunities to explore this within the article. Develop your critiquing! jenny_silvester https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219677488 2018-01-09 11:40:21 UTC https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219677488 Well done Eileen, some very good levels of reflection here and use of language to provide an interesting discussion. Wider issues opened up well too. You could also discuss the benefits of a longitudinal study and comment further on how findings are presented. jenny_silvester https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219678628 2018-01-09 11:44:12 UTC https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219678628 Well done Georgia, well presented with good knowledge of your research article. You could make further links with the early learning goals for literacy and the importance of speaking and listening skills within early years in your introduction when you reflect on the relevance of this research article. Also , critique the effectiveness of carrying out an experiment and using controlled measures. jenny_silvester https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219679439 2018-01-09 11:47:39 UTC https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219679439 Well done Jasmine, well presented with already a good amount of analysis. You have added some interesting reflections and links to wider concerns. Explore further why a 2 week time frame may affect validity of findings as you rightly explain that there may be a huge variance. Also explain the rational for testing mothers' BMI . jenny_silvester https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219680427 2018-01-09 11:51:55 UTC https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219680427 Well done Danielle , you have presented you ideas carefully and have chosen a suitable research article. I would make more of the large literature review section - summarising some of the key ideas and why this is useful. toy have presented a good overview of methods but need to critique their valuableness further. t jenny_silvester https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219681977 2018-01-09 11:58:22 UTC https://padlet.com/jenny_silvester/5gfrom4hxlhi/wish/219681977