TOPIC 2: Many people put their personal information online (address, telephone number,…) for everyday activities such as socializing on social networks or banking purposes. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? by Nguyễn Thị Bích Phương https://padlet.com/bichphuong160193/5fjb1w1mclehn0j3 en-us 2024-02-06 07:23:40 UTC 2024-08-24 10:45:10 UTC hello@padlet.com BAO KHANG (INTRODUCTION + BODY PARAGRAPH 1 - POSITIVE) bichphuong160193 https://padlet.com/bichphuong160193/5fjb1w1mclehn0j3/wish/2874667703 SINC SINCE the inception of THE internet in the contemporary society, it has undergone a significant transformation, becoming an integral part of our LIFE QUALITY daily lives. It is undeniable that the internet has brought about a better quality of life, fostering meaningful relationships and facilitating daily activities. This essay will discuss both perspectives before reaching the final conclusion.

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The internet has undeniably played a pivotal role in fostering meaningful relationships and enhancing our social experiences. Various platforms, such as Facebook or Zalo, allow individuals/ INTERNET USERS to connect with others who share common interests, enriching their social experiences. Furthermore, the internet has streamlined many aspects of our daily lives. For instance, online banking transactions help users avoid long queues and process transactions swiftly and confidentially/ SAFELY. This convenience has not only saved time but also made financial management more efficient. Therefore, it is clear that the internet has significantly improved the quality of life for many individuals.

]]> 2024-02-06 07:24:04 UTC https://padlet.com/bichphuong160193/5fjb1w1mclehn0j3/wish/2874667703 DIEP ANH (BODY PARAGRAPH 2 - NEGATIVE + CONCLUSION) bichphuong160193 https://padlet.com/bichphuong160193/5fjb1w1mclehn0j3/wish/2874667960 Nevertheless, I am of the opinion that the drawbacks it entails should not be underestimated. The first consequence is the infringement of users' privacy. The exposure OF to others' confidential information TO OTHERS can LEAD led stalkers to easily garner PRIVATE data of internet users, INCLUDING gathering images and videos, which can be modified and turned into deepfakes. In this digital realm, making personal information readily accessible online can easily be exploited for nefarious purposes. Another more dire consequence of the development OF PERSONAL INFORMATION SHARING ONLINE is high risks of cybercrimes. Cybercriminals and malicious individuals TEND TO lurk IN ALL CORNERS OF THE CYBERSPACE, finding/ SPOTTING vulnerable targets/ PREYS to breach off of and lure them into these suspicious activities. With the aim of stealing others' identity and valuable information, they can set up untrustworthy websites for POTENTIAL VICTIMS others to visit, unwittingLY exposing themselves to these ONLINE TRAPS OF online predators. Such fraudulent BANKING transactions conducted by cybercriminals are also, unfortunately, increasingly common, especially in third-world countries where cybersecurity is not fully developed.


In conclusion, the choice of putting confidential information out in the virtual world, while having its benefits, ultimately has a detrimental impact on Internet users. Thus, it is essential/ IMPERATIVE that the authorities implement measures to advance the field of cybersecurity, as well as TO RAISE raising awareness for users to enhance their digital literacy.

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  • P: a better quality of life with more meaningful relationships formed + facilitation of daily activities (e.g. online banking transactions help eschew long queues waiting for their turns)

  • N: infringement of privacy (stalkers garner data of internet users) + high risks of cybercrimes (process illegitimate transactions, malevolent intentions of committing other more serious crimes, such as robbery, kidnapping, and murder)



    • since its inception

    a significant transformation

    It is undeniable that

    confidential

    platforms

    poses substantial risks to internet users.

    undeniably

    fostering meaningful relationships

    share common interests, enriching their social experiences

    avoid long queues

    process transactions 

    I am inclined to believe that making personal information readily accessible online

    privacy breaches

    cybercrimes

    Stalkers and malicious individuals

    lurk

    digital realm

    gathering data

    that can be exploited for nefarious purposes

    Identity theft

    data breaches

    cybercriminals

    conduct fraudulent transactions

    suspicious links

    visiting untrustworthy websites, 

    unwittingly expose themselves to various online predators

    harmful intentions

    in the virtual world 

    is a matter of individual choice

    have a detrimental impact on

    implement measures

    awareness campaigns

    enhance digital literacy



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