https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6 On slides 10 and 11 'Example of inappropriate email', there are a number of mistakes made. Spot the errors and suggest what should have been written. Write your comments, read other peoples' ideas and give each other constructive feedback. en-us 2022-02-01 03:56:12 UTC 2025-12-16 18:24:18 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f633.png rithikmoncy https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036970359 2022-02-09 03:05:24 UTC https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036970359 https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036971278 2022-02-09 03:05:58 UTC https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036971278 https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036971424 2022-02-09 03:06:04 UTC https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036971424 https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036971640 2022-02-09 03:06:14 UTC https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036971640 clarastone https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036971948 2022-02-09 03:06:28 UTC https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036971948 taliabejtic https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036972175 Capital I, is not in this sentence ("i hope that it is okay that I give it to you tomorrow in class instead.")]]> 2022-02-09 03:06:38 UTC https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036972175 https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036972195 2022-02-09 03:06:39 UTC https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036972195 clarastone https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036972368 2022-02-09 03:06:47 UTC https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036972368 https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036972408 2022-02-09 03:06:48 UTC https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036972408 clarastone https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036972482 2022-02-09 03:06:52 UTC https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036972482 https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036972815 2022-02-09 03:07:05 UTC https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036972815 https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036972999 2022-02-09 03:07:13 UTC https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036972999 https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036973110 2022-02-09 03:07:18 UTC https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036973110 https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036973630 2022-02-09 03:07:37 UTC https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036973630 https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036973762 2022-02-09 03:07:44 UTC https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036973762 https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036973764 2022-02-09 03:07:44 UTC https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036973764 adithmailvaganam https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036973839 We don't know who it was from, they did not end the email with there name.]]> 2022-02-09 03:07:46 UTC https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036973839 https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036974371 2022-02-09 03:08:13 UTC https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036974371 https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036975330 2022-02-09 03:08:47 UTC https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036975330 mileyvuong https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036975492 No proper introduction to the person they are informing it to, as in, 'Hello Ms./Mr. whoever']]> 2022-02-09 03:08:54 UTC https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036975492 https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036976273 No capital I
Spelt only wrong
Too many exclamation marks
No goodbye]]> 2022-02-09 03:09:28 UTC https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036976273 harrybedford https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036976786 2022-02-09 03:09:52 UTC https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036976786 taliabejtic https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036977155 not talking to the teacher in a respectful manner. ]]> 2022-02-09 03:10:09 UTC https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036977155 clarastone https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036977455 2022-02-09 03:10:24 UTC https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036977455 https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036978488 2022-02-09 03:11:12 UTC https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036978488 https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036978653 No Hello
Not formal
Harsh
No Goodbyes
No name]]> 2022-02-09 03:11:19 UTC https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036978653 https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036979334 Inappropriate use of capital letters and it doesn't have a proper ending. And the tone is not respectful]]> 2022-02-09 03:11:50 UTC https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036979334 adithmailvaganam https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036979373 Didn't have a capital letter at the end of a sentence and also had missing a punctuation mark .]]> 2022-02-09 03:11:52 UTC https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036979373 mileyvuong https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036982156 No appropriate structure: The email is structured as just one big paragraph, and no spaces between different topics,]]> 2022-02-09 03:13:52 UTC https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036982156 https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036983120 Informal tone
there are grammatical errors]]> 2022-02-09 03:14:38 UTC https://padlet.com/ebonydohnal/5e51h83zwmspjrt6/wish/2036983120