https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm Share your ideas! en-us 2022-01-18 13:20:52 UTC 2022-01-30 03:30:49 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f331.png kevinyang5 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999205584 The purpose of the essay is to highlight aspects of your character either through key personality traits, actions which can't be mentioned within the application's extacurricular section, and other pieces of information which can't be touched upon with raw statistics or achievements.]]> 2022-01-19 00:14:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999205584 dojukwu https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999205709 To showcase your personality and story that cannot be seen through your transcript!]]> 2022-01-19 00:14:38 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999205709 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999205758 2022-01-19 00:14:41 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999205758 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999205781 to communicate your true self to the admissions officer]]> 2022-01-19 00:14:42 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999205781 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999205785 For the admission committee to have a general idea of the person]]> 2022-01-19 00:14:42 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999205785 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999205818 2022-01-19 00:14:44 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999205818 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999205919 The purpose is to get a greater sense of the applicants passions, interested, and person]]> 2022-01-19 00:14:49 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999205919 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999205995 So that the admission can see what kind of person you are and if you are a right fit for the program.]]> 2022-01-19 00:14:53 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999205995 turrotopsis https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206030 To give admission officers a more personal idea of your character and how you would contribute to the program community. ]]> 2022-01-19 00:14:55 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206030 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206074 To give the admissions team a better idea of who you are and what you are passionate about]]> 2022-01-19 00:14:58 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206074 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206099 2022-01-19 00:15:00 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206099 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206117 Demonstrate the authenticity of the individual ]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206117 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206118 2022-01-19 00:15:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206118 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206127 to let the application reviewers know who you are as a person (to see if you would be a good fit for the program) separate from just your grades and test scores]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206127 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206191 I would think the main purpose is to show who you are and what drives you. ]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206191 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206206 to get to know applicants personality, passions, etc beyond more 2 dimensional statements]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:07 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206206 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206226 to get to know you better and distinguish you from other similar students in ways other than your transcript]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:08 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206226 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206244 The purpose is to give people information that allows them to know you without meeting you in person. ]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:09 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206244 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206259 The purpose of an essay/ personal statement is to make the reader understand why you’re special; mostly why you stand out!]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:10 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206259 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206300 2022-01-19 00:15:13 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206300 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206318 The purpose is to provide admissions officers a window into your life and character.]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:14 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206318 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206340 The purpose is to get a different perspective on the applicant.]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:15 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206340 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206350 To show who you are]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:16 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206350 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206359 The purpose is to give admissions officers an insight into a student that test scores and grades can’t reflect to give them a more holistic view of the student. ]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:16 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206359 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206363 2022-01-19 00:15:16 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206363 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206369 To distinguish between applicants, to get to know the applicant on a more personal level.]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:17 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206369 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206375 To share how I stand out from the rest of my peers and that I have a passion for STEM

]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:17 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206375 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206425 To provide admissions officers with information about who you are as a person]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:18 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206425 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206434 Introduce yourself to the school and share traits that aren't visible through the rest of the application.]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:19 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206434 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206440 To tell more about yourself and your passions and why you want to apply to the program.

]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206440 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206452 2022-01-19 00:15:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206452 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206453 Personal statements allow programs to better attempt to understand the personalities of the applicants, because it's not like they can personally get to know everyone who applies.]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206453 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206475 The purpose of our essays and personal application is to help those reading our submissions get a sense of who we are as an individual and see what sets us apart from the others]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:21 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206475 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206478 It allows people to share their reasons for why they are applying so the most passionate people are selected.]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:22 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206478 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206486 See more to the student aside from grades and test scores. Hear from them.]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:22 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206486 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206499 2022-01-19 00:15:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206499 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206504 2022-01-19 00:15:24 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206504 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206507 To allow the admissions officers to understand you as a person and see if you’re the right fit.]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:24 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206507 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206511 To let the admissions officers know more about you as a person; what you like to do outside of school and in your life. (not just the facts and statistics)]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:25 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206511 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206515 2022-01-19 00:15:25 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206515 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206521 Personal statements and essays give admissions officers a chance to learn more about you and your interests beyond what you do in the classroom.]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:26 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206521 10148931 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206532 The purpose of a personal statement is almost to serve as an introduction to yourself. Certain things can't be showcased through pure numbers alone and so its a great opportunity to go more in depth about your character!]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:26 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206532 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206533 To get an idea of who you are ]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:26 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206533 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206547 The purpose is to show your personality and character so that the admissions officer gets to know you!]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:27 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206547 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206550 2022-01-19 00:15:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206550 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206551 2022-01-19 00:15:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206551 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206554 To show more of your identity than what is filled out on an application]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206554 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206563 2022-01-19 00:15:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206563 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206567 The purpose of an essay is to give information that relates to you and answers the prompt.]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206567 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206575 To show personal background, writing level, and relevance

]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:29 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206575 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206625 2022-01-19 00:15:32 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206625 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206627 Allow readers to know more about your personality rather than just numbers.]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:32 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206627 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206696 Give the admissions office get to know you personally ]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:37 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206696 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206700 To reveal more about a person besides grades.]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:37 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206700 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206705 An essay or personal statement showcases a person's story and personality that can not be seen through stats]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:37 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206705 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206715 To give the person reading your essay a jist of who you are ]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:38 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206715 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206773 The purpose of an essay or personal statement is to portray information about yourself while showcasing your writing skills and style.]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:39 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206773 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206807 I feel like many request personal statements or essays to determine whether or not one is a good "fit" for the position. It's far more personal than a resume or list of achievements. ]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:39 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206807 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206853 The essay/personal statement is to highlight any unique characteristics about you which institutions can notice, and give them a view of us beyond the statistics.]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206853 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206886 2022-01-19 00:15:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206886 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206890 It lets the admission officers understand you and your situations, while detailing your personality. After your grades/achievements are reviewed, the essays are used to gauge how suitable for a university you are.]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:41 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206890 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206986 2022-01-19 00:15:46 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206986 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206997 It allows you to clearly and creatively portray aspects about yourself that you wouldn't necessarily otherwise be able to in other sections of the application.]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:47 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999206997 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207004 To display aspects of a person that would not be able to be seen by grades.]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:47 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207004 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207020 It is so the admission officer can understand you as a person and not a list of words]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:48 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207020 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207044 The purpose is to let the people know you on a personal level through a larger scope.]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:49 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207044 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207051 to add a little more of your personality to your application :)]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:49 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207051 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207075 2022-01-19 00:15:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207075 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207083 To get to know your personality and what makes you different ]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:52 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207083 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207090 Sell yourself. Say things about yourself not easily discernable from your grades and ecs.]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:52 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207090 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207103 Allows readers to get to know about you on a more personal level.]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:53 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207103 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207121 For a person to be able to share something they feel is important about themselves and be able to tell it from their own perspective]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:54 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207121 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207132 To offer a fuller perspective into you, your narrative, and your life: to give you an opportunity to describe yourself and tell your story so that admissions officers can determine how well you fit into their program.]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:55 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207132 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207150 The purpose of an essay or personal statement is to summarize your life through stories beyond grades.  ]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:56 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207150 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207156 The purpose of an essay is to help programs or universities get to know you. Apart from your application, it is the only thing they have to judge your character and if you'd be a fit for the program.]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:56 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207156 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207169 2022-01-19 00:15:57 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207169 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207193 The purpose of an essay or a personal statement is to offer some insight into your character that isn't already apparent in other information that a reader has access to.]]> 2022-01-19 00:15:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207193 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207223 In order to display the applicants interests, hobbies, and overall personality.]]> 2022-01-19 00:16:01 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207223 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207226 2022-01-19 00:16:01 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207226 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207243 2022-01-19 00:16:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207243 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207293 as I understand it, is to express a quality or aspect of ourselves that cannot be understood from any other part of the application or to emphasize this aspect.]]> 2022-01-19 00:16:05 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207293 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207301 to know more in depth about the person and what can't be said through grades and transcripts]]> 2022-01-19 00:16:05 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207301 showlader https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207325 To let others know who you are at a further depth. It can showcase your strengths, goals, achievements, and weaknesses. ]]> 2022-01-19 00:16:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207325 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207329 The purpose of a personal statement is to show why you would be a good fit for a certain organization from a personality standpoint rather than a statistical one.]]> 2022-01-19 00:16:07 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207329 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207332 The purpose of the personal essay is for the college to get to know the participant and what they are interested in and why they chose to participate in this program. In addition to give an insight of who you are and what is your passion.]]> 2022-01-19 00:16:07 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207332 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207335 The purpose of a personal statement is to enlighten an idea/story retaining to a person ]]> 2022-01-19 00:16:07 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207335 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207347 2022-01-19 00:16:08 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207347 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207416 The purpose of a personal statement is to get insight into the life of the applicant, and what makes them stand out besides their statistics on paper. The personal statement also allows applicants to explore their passions and ideas, giving a more intimate look into their story to the interviewer. ]]> 2022-01-19 00:16:12 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207416 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207428 The purpose of a personal statement is to introduce yourself to the school/admissions officers. They should detail the personal aspects of the applicant.]]> 2022-01-19 00:16:13 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207428 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207433 A personal statement allows admissions officers to see a side of you that cannot necessarily be extrapolated from your transcript, standardized test scores, extracurriculars, etc.]]> 2022-01-19 00:16:13 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207433 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207447 It is ment to best reflect the true essence of a person through literary means that demonstrates what made the person who they are today. It allows themselves to show their lives in their own perspective that aren't shown through ordinary means.]]> 2022-01-19 00:16:14 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207447 meerasridhar23 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207460 To show the multiple facets of who you are that cant be found in a transcript, you could be much more amazing than your transcript displays!]]> 2022-01-19 00:16:16 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207460 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207465 The purpose of an essay is to display who you truly are and where you come from.]]> 2022-01-19 00:16:16 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207465 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207472 To showcase who you are before people meet you]]> 2022-01-19 00:16:17 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207472 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207484 I think that the purpose if the essay/personality traits is to show admission officer that you are a good fit for the program]]> 2022-01-19 00:16:17 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207484 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207503 2022-01-19 00:16:18 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207503 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207517 A personal essay/statement allows the person reading the essay to look into who you are as a person and get a greater understanding of who you are and what your passions are.

]]> 2022-01-19 00:16:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207517 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207526 The purpose of an essay or personal statement is to reflect your personality and show personal characteristics.]]> 2022-01-19 00:16:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207526 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207534 To learn more about the person than what test scores or statistics tell you. 

]]> 2022-01-19 00:16:21 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207534 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207535 It lets the admission officer get to know you, something that stats can't show.]]> 2022-01-19 00:16:21 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207535 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207552 Not only does it provide insight into one’s personality and mindset, the personal statement also allows for someone to express events that had large effects on their character. ]]> 2022-01-19 00:16:22 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207552 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207609 The purpose of an essay is to understand why the student answering would want to join the school.]]> 2022-01-19 00:16:24 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207609 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207635 A personal statement builds a connection between the applicant and the admissions official. This essay allows you to showcase your personality and what your passions are. ]]> 2022-01-19 00:16:26 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207635 paulafregene https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207659 The purpose is to showcase your personality, live events, and characteristics so the people can get a deeper glance of who you are as a whole]]> 2022-01-19 00:16:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207659 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207712 To give additional information about yourself that other components of the application cannot show.]]> 2022-01-19 00:16:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207712 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207725 The purpose of the essay/ personal statement is so others have an idea of who you truly are.]]> 2022-01-19 00:16:31 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999207725 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999208043 The purpose of the personal statements is to get a general idea of who the applicant is as a person, to see if they are a good fit.]]> 2022-01-19 00:16:47 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999208043 elvinlo922 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999208464 To demonstrate the kind of person you are so that readers can try to understand how you would fit into the program or institution that you are applying to.]]> 2022-01-19 00:17:15 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999208464 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999211180 Personal essays and statements give readers an opportunity to understand your reasoning. Meaningful memories inform people of valuable information towards one's mindset. Readers better understand writers as a human being instead of a plain student through these stories.]]> 2022-01-19 00:19:39 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999211180 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999212563 2022-01-19 00:21:00 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999212563 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999212832 The essay questions make me reflect on my identity, how it has developed, and how it will help me with the program/how I will use the program to my benefit/the benefit of others. PS - It can lead to existential crises, so beware sometimes.]]> 2022-01-19 00:21:14 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999212832 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999213012 The essay questions force me to reflect on my past experiences and how they have affected my worldview. The essays make me feel more invested in the application process as a result.]]> 2022-01-19 00:21:21 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999213012 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999213096 The essay questions forces me to look back on who I am as a person, and it's difficult because I'm not entirely sure of who I am myself. ]]> 2022-01-19 00:21:27 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999213096 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999213186 I feel enlightened by the essay questions, particularly by the ones asking about my passion and what I might invent one day. I believe these questions would allow me to showcase my developing skills and progress I've learned inside and outside the classroom.]]> 2022-01-19 00:21:33 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999213186 isabellavschell https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999214018 They essay prompts have helped me to reflect on my true passions and have also helped inspire me to think further about what my future goals are!]]> 2022-01-19 00:22:21 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999214018 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999217258 The essay prompts made me think more about how my passion for STEM got started, especially in relation to my own identity and struggles. They also make me think about where I want to be and what I want to do in the future.]]> 2022-01-19 00:25:29 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999217258 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999217410 The essay questions allow me to express my background and inspire feelings of self-reflection and passion in my future career and hobbies. They also inspire me to think about what I want to gain from this program, and how the answers to these questions will apply to what we learn through this experience. ]]> 2022-01-19 00:25:39 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999217410 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999217618 2022-01-19 00:25:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999217618 pabonalberto23 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999218992 The essays prompts made me think about how my past experiences have shaped into the person I am today. This has motivated me to write a good essay for each of the questions.]]> 2022-01-19 00:27:09 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999218992 dojukwu https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999219411 I enjoy writing so writing personal essays is really fun to me because it gives me the opportunity to really think about my life and put some of my unique experiences into written words. I thought these prompts were especially interesting because they inspire me to reflect on my childhood and introspect within myself to see what kind of individual I am and who I want to be. I think about what events have affected my personality and my goals.]]> 2022-01-19 00:27:34 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999219411 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999219608 These questions invoke feelings of ambition and determination within me, as all of the questions force me to unearth what drives me. A great deal of confusion also came with these questions as I don't exactly what drives me.]]> 2022-01-19 00:27:44 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999219608 showlader https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999219966 They make me feel heard because the questions involve me talking about my identity and passions. They also inspire me to reflect on my beliefs and how I want to make an impact in the future in the world of STEM, based on my beliefs. ]]> 2022-01-19 00:28:04 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999219966 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220121 2022-01-19 00:28:12 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220121 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220167 The essays allow me to critically think of real-world problem and putting my thoughts on paper.]]> 2022-01-19 00:28:15 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220167 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220275 happiness
remorse
acceptance]]> 2022-01-19 00:28:19 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220275 aditya1rawat https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220286 2022-01-19 00:28:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220286 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220298 They invoke more of a self reflection within me. I have so many experiences and values but may not notice it as much as when I write short answers about me.]]> 2022-01-19 00:28:21 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220298 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220320 The essay prompts make me think about and reflect on the formative experiences of my life and how they have made me who I am today]]> 2022-01-19 00:28:22 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220320 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220421 Appreciation, passion, creativity ]]> 2022-01-19 00:28:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220421 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220428 Very thought provoking - where do I want to go and do based on what I've done in the past in STEM?

]]> 2022-01-19 00:28:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220428 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220454 The essay questions made me think deeply about why I truly wanted to participate in MITES/MOSTEC. I really had to pinpoint where my love for STEM stems from.]]> 2022-01-19 00:28:29 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220454 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220474 The essay questions inspire me to feel a sense of nostalgia and a different perspective on different events throughout my life that I have experienced and observed through other people.

]]> 2022-01-19 00:28:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220474 meerasridhar23 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220494 They've allowed me to further introspect into the motivations and common trends behind my choices, they've been surprisingly eye-opening!]]> 2022-01-19 00:28:32 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220494 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220514 2022-01-19 00:28:33 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220514 zpnewman10 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220544 These types of essays help me look inward and more critically and objectively review my life]]> 2022-01-19 00:28:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220544 kelseywoods04 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220554 The essay questions inspire me to think critically about the world around me and take a closer look at places where people are negatively affected by a specific system or practice.]]> 2022-01-19 00:28:36 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220554 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220573 These essay questions inspire me to think deeply about the experiences I've had up until this point and realize how they've affected my current actions and mindset. ]]> 2022-01-19 00:28:37 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220573 kevinyang5 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220592 2022-01-19 00:28:38 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220592 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220609 2022-01-19 00:28:39 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220609 cadencechoo22 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220612 The essay questions have made me realize the values of my life. ]]> 2022-01-19 00:28:39 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220612 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220657 they inspire me to reflect on the events that impacted my identity and passions]]> 2022-01-19 00:28:42 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220657 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220665 These essay questions cause me to reflect on the major parts of my life and how they have led me to where I am today. ]]> 2022-01-19 00:28:42 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220665 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220674 2022-01-19 00:28:43 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220674 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220683 They make me learn more about myself, and why I do what I do]]> 2022-01-19 00:28:43 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220683 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220688 I feel excited about answering the essays because all the parts of my identity are so important to me and impact my passions in STEM :)]]> 2022-01-19 00:28:43 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220688 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220705 I feel that these questions help me reflect the person that I used to be, currently am, and will be in the future. ]]> 2022-01-19 00:28:44 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220705 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220726 2022-01-19 00:28:45 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220726 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220771 Vulnerability]]> 2022-01-19 00:28:47 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220771 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220779 The essay questions prompt me to reflect on experiences I've had and help me realize how many lessons I've learned throughout high school.]]> 2022-01-19 00:28:47 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220779 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220859 It makes me reflect on my specific feelings for why I love stem and why I want to pursue it.]]> 2022-01-19 00:28:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220859 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220860 2022-01-19 00:28:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220860 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220924 It inspires a reflection of how far I’ve come from bad experiences in my life and how that has helped shape me into who I am and where my passions and hopes lie]]> 2022-01-19 00:28:55 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220924 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220926 The essay questions allow me to really think back and sort out which events and passions have shaped who I am]]> 2022-01-19 00:28:55 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220926 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220933 2022-01-19 00:28:55 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220933 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220945 2022-01-19 00:28:56 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220945 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220955 The essay questions inspire me to delve deeper into self-contemplation and reflection of my professional and mental habits. What do I do for mental health, and how do I maintain and improve my work ethic?]]> 2022-01-19 00:28:56 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999220955 lopatojustin https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999221017 The questions make me think a lot about how my identity and my upbringing have affected my STEM related goals]]> 2022-01-19 00:29:00 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999221017 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999221081 The essay questions inspire a new thought process for me. They force me to self-reflect and better understand myself and my choices. ]]> 2022-01-19 00:29:04 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999221081 100054655 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999221136 2022-01-19 00:29:07 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999221136 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999221202 The essay prompts kinda made me look back at all I've been through and reminded me of how far I have come. I've used that to fuel the content of my essays. It has forced me to think about my future in STEM and how much I can contribute to it.]]> 2022-01-19 00:29:11 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999221202 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999221238 The essay questions inspire a feeling of nostalgia and also the feeling to develop myself in the right direction more and more. ]]> 2022-01-19 00:29:13 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999221238 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999221298 They inspire me to think about many inventions i thought about and many coding i had dreams about which will make a website which will help people to edits their video faster]]> 2022-01-19 00:29:16 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999221298 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999221309 Express an idea,feeling or experience through language

]]> 2022-01-19 00:29:17 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999221309 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999221348 2022-01-19 00:29:19 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999221348 paulafregene https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999221358 The essay inspires me to reflect on myself on a deeper level than I usually do and acknowledge every event in my life, whether be or smaller, as meaningful.]]> 2022-01-19 00:29:19 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999221358 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999221378 The questions encourage me to reflect on the broader aspects of my life.]]> 2022-01-19 00:29:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999221378 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999221413 The essay questions prompt me to rethink my experiences and how I can develop an essay from them. This essay will allow me to reflect on my experiences and learn from them.]]> 2022-01-19 00:29:22 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999221413 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999221436 They inspire me to investigate experiences and values that have changed me as a person. They also inspire me to discuss my passion for climate change solutions :)]]> 2022-01-19 00:29:24 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999221436 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999221589 Some of the feelings that I get from writing the essays and looking back on my experiences are those of nostalgia. Another is the realization that I have changed a lot since those experiences]]> 2022-01-19 00:29:33 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999221589 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999221681 The essay questions inspire a lot of self reflection. I feel some uncertainty, if this major is right for me, my curiosity extends beyond the major I chose. I also feel some certainty, that STEM is right for me, and it answers the questions in my head.]]> 2022-01-19 00:29:37 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999221681 jalindsay258_2 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999222242 The questions inspire and help me to reflect on how I could make the world a better place through STEM.]]> 2022-01-19 00:30:01 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999222242 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999222255 reflective on my past and what the future entails and how i got where i am now and how all thing (teachers, shows, ect) shaped who i am now]]> 2022-01-19 00:30:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999222255 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999222357 The essay questions inspire me to express my true self.]]> 2022-01-19 00:30:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999222357 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999222390 The essay questions really made me think about why I fell in love with science. I started to think about what led me to where I am today, and what I want to do in the future.]]> 2022-01-19 00:30:08 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999222390 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999222513 The essay questions inspire me to reflect on my life and my experiences. They make me reflect on my accomplishments, times when I have been challenged, and how I have solved problems that I have faced in my life.]]> 2022-01-19 00:30:15 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999222513 ilooby17 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999222558 The feelings the essay questions inspire in me are of wonder and amazement. It allows for me to reflect and really think on things that have affected the myself as well as many people in my community. Along with this it has allowed for me to brainstorm ideas on how to help with these issues.]]> 2022-01-19 00:30:18 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999222558 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999222656 The essay questions make me feel reflective on my past experiences and my whole life until this point. It also gave me a sense of realization because I've never taken much time to reflect on such things.]]> 2022-01-19 00:30:22 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999222656 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999222816 2022-01-19 00:30:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999222816 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999224536 The Essay questions inspire me to question what aspects of my life are important to me. It also helped me understand why I want to apply to this program, what will it offer to me and what can I offer back. It also lets me share what I'm passionate about and what I like to do on my free time]]> 2022-01-19 00:32:03 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999224536 sonalisharma1 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999226127 The essay questions inspire me to share my story. The essay allows for the admissions to see how I think and what I would bring to MITES/MOSTEC. Overall it allows a chance for me as an applicant to express myself. ]]> 2022-01-19 00:32:56 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999226127 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999226391 For me, the questions inspired reflection and pride. It gave me an opportunity to look back on my accomplishments and truly elaborate on my passions.]]> 2022-01-19 00:33:12 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999226391 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999226621 The questions made me think more about my life, why I’m interested in STEM, and what my goals are in pursuing a career in STEM and a spot in this program. It also makes me think about the way I’ve lived my life up to this point.]]> 2022-01-19 00:33:25 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999226621 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999226651 The essay questions inspire numerous emotions that are stemming from various areas of my life. They all connect to one focus when they are all combined, determination. Determination to help the world, determination to show all the skills and effort that I have work hard to build from the ground up, determination to push for new experinces that will be available in the future. Determiantion also branches towards Creativity and a hunger to learn as they are some of the most coresponsding emotions involved as they show a complete reflection towards myself.]]> 2022-01-19 00:33:27 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999226651 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999226743 These questions provoke a sense of contemplation upon my life choices. I feel as though they help put into perspective what I want to do in the future and how I am working towards those goals.]]> 2022-01-19 00:33:32 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999226743 sonalisharma1 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999228161 A personal statement allows for the applicant to express themselves either through a narrative or a unique experience. This allows for a deeper connection with the applicant and helps with deciding whether they would be a good fit. ]]> 2022-01-19 00:34:48 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999228161 cadencechoo22 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999228520 When looking at the applications, it made me realized how I have certain things that I value and prioritize. I was placed in a position where I had to walk through memory lane and seeing what was important in my lifetime. To elaborate, I did get kind of emotion because it made me reflect on my accomplishments and even failures. ]]> 2022-01-19 00:35:08 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999228520 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999231061 The essays questions make me reflect how have my past experiences have helped me to become the person that I am right now.]]> 2022-01-19 00:37:25 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999231061 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999232863 It does, pretty well actually]]> 2022-01-19 00:39:05 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999232863 Rachel_Geo https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999233044 This response gave a lot of backstory to how this person wants female representation in stem.]]> 2022-01-19 00:39:14 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999233044 kevinyang5 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999233170 2022-01-19 00:39:24 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999233170 meerasridhar23 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999233456 It effectively responds to the prompt as it effectively integrates her race, gender, first generation college student status, all of it in a n inspirational story.]]> 2022-01-19 00:39:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999233456 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999233680 Yes, it heavily ties her backstory to her future aspirations.]]> 2022-01-19 00:39:53 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999233680 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999233824 It encapsulates it very well!]]> 2022-01-19 00:40:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999233824 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999234104 Essay addressed the prompt well by giving reason to overcome to a challenge.]]> 2022-01-19 00:40:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999234104 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999234287 its beautifully written, but I don't think it says enough about her identity ]]> 2022-01-19 00:40:31 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999234287 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999234591 The essay responded effectively to the prompt with not only the aspects of her identity that shaped her aspirations, but responded with a detailed personal story of a loved one who saw a brighter future.]]> 2022-01-19 00:40:48 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999234591 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999234603 that was really well written wow - it answered the prompt and the fact that it was written like a story made it super interesting to read]]> 2022-01-19 00:40:49 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999234603 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999234703 2022-01-19 00:40:55 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999234703 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999234737 I think the essay could have focused more on her story rather than her mother's, though important in cultural aspects when explaining ]]> 2022-01-19 00:40:57 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999234737 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999234790 2022-01-19 00:41:01 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999234790 100054655 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999234867 2022-01-19 00:41:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999234867 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999235036 The essay writer managed to use an extensive backstory to her advantage, using her mom's character and contrasting it against her own, showing us her passions, goals and what she wants to do in order to achieve them. ]]> 2022-01-19 00:41:12 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999235036 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999235248 I think it focused a little bit too much on the mom?]]> 2022-01-19 00:41:25 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999235248 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999235329 2022-01-19 00:41:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999235329 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999235466 It was able to answer the question through anecdotes, drawing in the reader to her world and emotions.]]> 2022-01-19 00:41:39 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999235466 paulafregene https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999235535 The essay does a wondrous job in effectively narrative her life through her background, gender, life goal. While reading the essay, it touched my heart in every aspect as the write about how the past of her mother also impacted her present.]]> 2022-01-19 00:41:43 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999235535 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999235543 This essay does a great job at expressing the author's identity and how she views herself]]> 2022-01-19 00:41:44 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999235543 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999235574 The essay responds to the prompt very effectively. Not only does she reflect on her heritage, but she reflects on the challenges she faces on a day to day basis.]]> 2022-01-19 00:41:45 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999235574 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999235603 2022-01-19 00:41:47 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999235603 zpnewman10 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999235660 A narrative story focused on specific details related to her life and culture]]> 2022-01-19 00:41:52 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999235660 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999235789 2022-01-19 00:41:58 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999235789 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999236127 The essay definitely responded effectively to the prompt. The writer did so while also using storytelling to keep the reader invested. It's very well written.]]> 2022-01-19 00:42:13 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999236127 sonalisharma1 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999236155 I believe the essay did a good job of sharing aspects of the author's life and how they have shaped her aspirations to increase the equality for females in STEM. ]]> 2022-01-19 00:42:15 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999236155 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999236451 Imagery and descriptive words. It’s like a story of the past and the present ]]> 2022-01-19 00:42:22 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999236451 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999236954 I think the writer did a good job at describing their identity; however, they lacked detail in describing their aspirations.]]> 2022-01-19 00:42:48 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999236954 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999237112 She presented the hardships she faced and how she overcame them in a creative way, using several techniques.]]> 2022-01-19 00:42:57 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999237112 Rachel_Geo https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999237463 Perhaps the author should focus on herself more. Although I do think this person wrote this essay beautifly about her mother and what she aspires, she could add more details on how she wants to accomplish these goals. ]]> 2022-01-19 00:43:16 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999237463 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999237610 The essay has very strong diction and also provides a holistic description of why she wants to pursue a STEM program. It paints a moving message and speaks to the adversity that she has to overcome.]]> 2022-01-19 00:43:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999237610 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999237659 She heavily demonstrated her determination to do what her mother could not, and it showed her background with gender inequality and how it motivates her to defy that.]]> 2022-01-19 00:43:25 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999237659 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999237913 Through writing techniques she was able to convey the messed beyond the literal words and allow readers to gain an understanding of her ideas by looking between the lines]]> 2022-01-19 00:43:38 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999237913 jalindsay258_2 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999238008 Yes, the essay helps the reader to gain a glimpse into the life of the writer and her family. It also shows her motivation for more female representation.]]> 2022-01-19 00:43:43 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999238008 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999238141 The author should focus on herself a bit more, and be a bit more specific on how she wants to transcends the boundaries she talks about in order to meet her goals.]]> 2022-01-19 00:43:48 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999238141 cadencechoo22 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999238338 Yes, I think this essay responds effectively to the prompt because there was a story that connected to her aspirations. I feel like there was a lot of descriptive language which keeps the reader compelled. ]]> 2022-01-19 00:43:58 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999238338 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999239047 This essay uses lots of personal narration to express her identity and backstory]]> 2022-01-19 00:44:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999239047 showlader https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999239098 I really enjoyed the story telling features of this writing. Really had my attention through out and I can tell how strong the writer is. ]]> 2022-01-19 00:44:32 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999239098 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999239137 Tell a story that gets the reader to sympathize with the author and understand her motive for pursuing STEM

]]> 2022-01-19 00:44:34 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999239137 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999239180 2022-01-19 00:44:37 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999239180 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999239186 2022-01-19 00:44:37 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999239186 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999239197 The author perfectly answers the prompt, using a strong story and amazing use of figurative language to describe her struggles, expressing the significance of her aspirations.]]> 2022-01-19 00:44:38 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999239197 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999239371 2022-01-19 00:44:44 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999239371 kevinyang5 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999239511 2022-01-19 00:44:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999239511 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999239939 It definitely did. It was written really well because she used an anecdote rather than just a plain old essay. It was interesting to read and very clear. It did detail a little bit about her aspirations, but perhaps she could have added a bit more.]]> 2022-01-19 00:45:15 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999239939 lopatojustin https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999240411 The essay is very specific to the writer's culture and history, presents a problem to be solved]]> 2022-01-19 00:45:39 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999240411 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999241013 The essay actually does a pretty job in writing because she links how her gender, race, and culture filters into inspiring her aspirations.]]> 2022-01-19 00:46:09 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999241013 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999241056 The essay was really well written and answered the prompt with really descriptive detail while she should include more of her life.]]> 2022-01-19 00:46:11 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999241056 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999241414 I feel that she could have elaborated more on how her hardships specifically impacted her own career, but I believe that it was very well written overall.]]> 2022-01-19 00:46:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999241414 100054655 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999241719 2022-01-19 00:46:43 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999241719 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999242001 The author provided vivid details of her past that demonstrates critial elements of not only her past, but her mother's past that formed the foundation of her aspiration and mentality as she grew. It used the detail to provide the audience with a perspective on her stuggle that any person from any background my sympatize or even empathize with. This story like structure that will entrap the attention an bring the focus to further understand the her background overall. ]]> 2022-01-19 00:46:57 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999242001 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999242571 Used anecdotes rather than a normal essay. Makes it more interesting to read while also detailing her backstory for aspiring for women empowerment.]]> 2022-01-19 00:47:26 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999242571 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999242939 a bit too flowery]]> 2022-01-19 00:47:48 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999242939 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999243230 It can be improved by adding more to her story and how did it affect her life ]]> 2022-01-19 00:48:05 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999243230 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999244171 The author responded incredibly to the prompt. Her response was able to clearly describe her experience in the STEM field. Her essay was able to explain discrimination based on gender or race - well enough so someone who had never experienced it understands.]]> 2022-01-19 00:48:48 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999244171 dojukwu https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999244211 She could focus on herself a little more. As a Mexican woman, she likely faced various -isms as a woman in STEM, and her story is important too! However, this is a beautiful essay and really allows the reader to understand her experience.]]> 2022-01-19 00:48:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999244211 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999245156 2022-01-19 00:49:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999245156 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999245530 The story is very vague on how her mother's experiences inspire her. Prioritizing the mother's life, the writer does not have a direct response to the prompt. ]]> 2022-01-19 00:49:46 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999245530 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999246385 Maybe a bit too descriptive (I feel it might've been a waste of words). Instead, she could have added a lot more about her background and how it affected her aspirations rather than how her mother's experiences affected her. In fact, she could have had shorter stories for different aspirations. ]]> 2022-01-19 00:50:31 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999246385 100054655 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999246701 2022-01-19 00:50:47 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999246701 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999247552 2022-01-19 00:51:29 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999247552 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999253794 I feel like the essay is really good, though the essay seemed repetitive and it seemed as though the writer kept repeating their main point with only different wording.]]> 2022-01-19 00:56:25 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999253794 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999254693 The essay responded very effectively to the prompt, portraying her passions in both music and STEM.]]> 2022-01-19 00:57:13 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999254693 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999255982 I think the essay could be improved by mentioning more about the STEM field. Even though the music was a good segway, they should have stopped talking about music halfway through and shifted to STEM for the rest of the essay.]]> 2022-01-19 00:58:24 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999255982 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999256266 It used a great deal of figurative language, allowing the writer to express her love for her music more clearly, in conjunction with STEM.]]> 2022-01-19 00:58:39 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999256266 sonalisharma1 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999256505 I have to respectfully disagree with what most people have said so far. I believe that the writer did a good job talking about her passion for music which answers the prompt. However, the writer brought up computer science with no previous mention which felt a little abrupt as a reader. ]]> 2022-01-19 00:58:53 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999256505 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999258780 I think the writer could have explained how music relates to computer science/STEM and how it could applied within those respective fields. I feel that this would have allowed for more of a linear flow within the essay overall. However, all in all, it was a very well written essay.]]> 2022-01-19 01:01:00 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999258780 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999274320 While I do feel like they answer the question. I feel like it's way to vague and while they do talk about their passion for computer science , what they talk about could be applied to any computer science student.]]> 2022-01-19 01:13:19 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999274320 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999283658 2022-01-19 01:20:48 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999283658 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999286566 Making sure the response fully encapsulates the given prompt]]> 2022-01-19 01:22:34 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999286566 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999290149 2022-01-19 01:25:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999290149 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999291294 2022-01-19 01:26:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999291294 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999301245 2022-01-19 01:34:54 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999301245 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999333833 Thank you!!!!]]> 2022-01-19 02:00:31 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999333833 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999471711 Her technique in writing needs to be very specific in order to allow her to focus on herself, remain within the word count, and express herself more deeply]]> 2022-01-19 03:52:31 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999471711 https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999616003 THANKS!!!!]]> 2022-01-19 05:50:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jnnkuebe/5e3hl5vn4oqxvqrm/wish/1999616003