Padlet Peer Critiques by Shiman Wang https://padlet.com/shiman_wang/5do0vl11iejx Glow and Grow en-us 2019-04-29 02:33:01 UTC 2019-05-06 02:14:38 UTC hello@padlet.com https://imgglb.padletcdn.com/v13/image?t=g_auto&url=https%3A%2F%2Fpadlet.net%2Ficons%2Fpng%2F1f430.png Glow: What has the individual done well? Explain the specifics. shiman_wang https://padlet.com/shiman_wang/5do0vl11iejx/wish/354865460 2019-04-29 02:36:30 UTC https://padlet.com/shiman_wang/5do0vl11iejx/wish/354865460 Grow: What does the individual need to work on in the future? shiman_wang https://padlet.com/shiman_wang/5do0vl11iejx/wish/354865511 2019-04-29 02:36:46 UTC https://padlet.com/shiman_wang/5do0vl11iejx/wish/354865511 Glow: I enjoy your presentation because you provide a lot of information about your topic and great pictures. well done! https://padlet.com/shiman_wang/5do0vl11iejx/wish/356034063 Grow:  I think is a great presentation, maybe just try to fluctuate your voice and your tone when speaking. Its will be better.
-YING GAO]]> 2019-05-02 01:55:37 UTC https://padlet.com/shiman_wang/5do0vl11iejx/wish/356034063 Xiaoxie Zheng xiaoxie_zheng https://padlet.com/shiman_wang/5do0vl11iejx/wish/356884531 Glow: I like you put the history background in your presentation. Your presentation is information and you provide the clear statement. Great job! 
Grow: The only drawback is maybe you can make your present more smooth. ]]> 2019-05-05 02:38:06 UTC https://padlet.com/shiman_wang/5do0vl11iejx/wish/356884531 Lauren Dao shiman_wang https://padlet.com/shiman_wang/5do0vl11iejx/wish/357022984 Glow: You include your experience and the negative impact of technology in your presentation. That's good, because you're not focused on one thing. Also, the speed and tone are very good, so that I can hear very clearly. 

Grow: You need to add some video or graphics to enrich your presentation. It's just that the writing is too boring.

]]> 2019-05-06 02:08:00 UTC https://padlet.com/shiman_wang/5do0vl11iejx/wish/357022984 Christopher Barone shiman_wang https://padlet.com/shiman_wang/5do0vl11iejx/wish/357023205 Glow: I liked your speech. It was very interesting. It's very simple and easy to read. In addition, you have many examples and images to prove your point. You've also shown your creativity in connecting your ideas, and I like that.

Grow: It would be nice if you could change the background of your presentation.
]]> 2019-05-06 02:09:08 UTC https://padlet.com/shiman_wang/5do0vl11iejx/wish/357023205 Matthew Smolen shiman_wang https://padlet.com/shiman_wang/5do0vl11iejx/wish/357023274 Glow: It's great that you're thinking about both the positive and negative aspects of social media in your speech, rather than focusing on one. And you mentioned some of your experiences to prove your point, which was very interesting.

Grow: It will make your presentation better if you can add visual effects such as pictures rather than large blocks of text.
]]> 2019-05-06 02:09:28 UTC https://padlet.com/shiman_wang/5do0vl11iejx/wish/357023274 Xiaoxie Zheng shiman_wang https://padlet.com/shiman_wang/5do0vl11iejx/wish/357023332 Glow: I really enjoyed your speech. You gave a lot of examples of how technology has affected us and changed society. Also, it's great that you relate your experience to your topic.

Grow: If only you could use more bullets to keep your presentation clear.
]]> 2019-05-06 02:09:43 UTC https://padlet.com/shiman_wang/5do0vl11iejx/wish/357023332 Joseph Papandrea shiman_wang https://padlet.com/shiman_wang/5do0vl11iejx/wish/357023388 Glow: In your speech, you stated how technology has influenced your life and education. That's very good. I agree with you. Because GroupMe and Google Docs also had an impact on me, making collaboration and communication easier.
 
Grow: I find that most people make a mistake. Your presentation has too much text on it and you should make a few bullet points. Too much text will distract the audience.
]]> 2019-05-06 02:10:03 UTC https://padlet.com/shiman_wang/5do0vl11iejx/wish/357023388 Alexandria Paladino shiman_wang https://padlet.com/shiman_wang/5do0vl11iejx/wish/357023601 Glow: I love your presentation. You use a lot of elements that make your presentation look great. And you show the audience a lot of content, very rules. In addition, you have given many examples and had good survey results to support your point of view, which makes me understand your topic very well. 
 
Grow: This is the best presentation and presentation I've seen so far. I don't think there's anything bad about you. I hope you can do better and better.
]]> 2019-05-06 02:11:09 UTC https://padlet.com/shiman_wang/5do0vl11iejx/wish/357023601 Nicolette Curran shiman_wang https://padlet.com/shiman_wang/5do0vl11iejx/wish/357023652 Glow: Your speech is very attractive to me. I didn't get bored listening to your speech. You share a lot of your own examples in college with me, and you link them to creativity, which is really great. 
 
Grow: If only you could change the background of your presentation. Or change the color of the text. This affects the visual effect when the black font is placed next to the background image.
 
]]> 2019-05-06 02:11:24 UTC https://padlet.com/shiman_wang/5do0vl11iejx/wish/357023652 Kasey Mitchell shiman_wang https://padlet.com/shiman_wang/5do0vl11iejx/wish/357023708 Glow: I enjoyed watching your presentation, where you showed how technology affects your daily life and some of the stories about your family members. It's very interesting. And you also talked about the good and bad aspects of technology, and you had a very good opinion.
 
Grow: Your presentation is difficult to read, too much text, and the visual effect is not very good. This needs to be improved.
]]> 2019-05-06 02:11:43 UTC https://padlet.com/shiman_wang/5do0vl11iejx/wish/357023708 Jenna Bellucci shiman_wang https://padlet.com/shiman_wang/5do0vl11iejx/wish/357023753 Glow: Your speech is very good, you let me better to follow and focus on what you said. Let me feel you have a clear organization. 

Grow: Since your slides don't have too many words, I think you can add some visual effects. Let the audience participate more.
]]> 2019-05-06 02:11:59 UTC https://padlet.com/shiman_wang/5do0vl11iejx/wish/357023753 Edina Raisin shiman_wang https://padlet.com/shiman_wang/5do0vl11iejx/wish/357023855 Glow: The pronunciation is clear and fluent, the mood is full of enthusiasm, the language speed is very fast. In addition, you listed how much time you spend on social media and a survey to illustrate your topic. This is great.
 
Grow: I hope you can explain further why you didn't take the risk, and I hope to hear more about that.
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