https://padlet.com/chris173/5dm6bby3e20z Please post your thoughts and suggestions below: https://tinyurl.com/SMHAC en-us 2019-04-08 20:02:03 UTC 2019-04-11 18:22:57 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/chris173/5dm6bby3e20z/wish/350900978 Section 1 is good. Parties often overlook the term. This is important.]]> 2019-04-11 17:54:12 UTC https://padlet.com/chris173/5dm6bby3e20z/wish/350900978 https://padlet.com/chris173/5dm6bby3e20z/wish/350901361 A bit of surprise that the "guiding questions" was a statement for all sections. If parties don't have access to a template, they may not know things to think through when drafting these sections.]]> 2019-04-11 17:54:57 UTC https://padlet.com/chris173/5dm6bby3e20z/wish/350901361 https://padlet.com/chris173/5dm6bby3e20z/wish/350902232 Should be spelled out the first time it is used in the document.]]> 2019-04-11 17:56:25 UTC https://padlet.com/chris173/5dm6bby3e20z/wish/350902232 https://padlet.com/chris173/5dm6bby3e20z/wish/350905507 We spent a lot of time figuring out the purpose of this section. We framed it for ourselves as this: establishing that the CMHC is an independent contractor outlines expectations, responsibilities, and (arguably, most importantly) liability.]]> 2019-04-11 18:02:12 UTC https://padlet.com/chris173/5dm6bby3e20z/wish/350905507 https://padlet.com/chris173/5dm6bby3e20z/wish/350906311 It's a little difficult to distinguish between these three sections. Sometimes we felt like information was being restated across these sections. Could some of the information contained in the preamble go into Sections 2 or 4 or vice versa? If information from the preamble went into the sections, it would also help the aesthetics of page one. The preamble is super long and overwhelming. Clearly defining the intent of each section, and then ensuring the language sticks to the intent of the section would be helpful. Lawyers are the worst!]]> 2019-04-11 18:03:39 UTC https://padlet.com/chris173/5dm6bby3e20z/wish/350906311 https://padlet.com/chris173/5dm6bby3e20z/wish/350907472 It seems like it would be helpful to lay out some of the data that brought these parties together (e.g., students with significant needs that is beyond the district's capacity to meet, discipline referrals, etc.). This would also allow the parties to track progress across time.]]> 2019-04-11 18:05:52 UTC https://padlet.com/chris173/5dm6bby3e20z/wish/350907472 https://padlet.com/chris173/5dm6bby3e20z/wish/350909643 Consider coming up with a reference to each party at the beginning of the document (e.g., Community Mental Health Center CMHC [_____] will hereinafter be referred to as Partner and Unified School District (USD) [_____] will hereinafter be referred to as District). ]]> 2019-04-11 18:09:25 UTC https://padlet.com/chris173/5dm6bby3e20z/wish/350909643 https://padlet.com/chris173/5dm6bby3e20z/wish/350912856 Providing definitions and guiding questions that lead parties to consider their particular employment arrangement would be helpful here.]]> 2019-04-11 18:15:16 UTC https://padlet.com/chris173/5dm6bby3e20z/wish/350912856 https://padlet.com/chris173/5dm6bby3e20z/wish/350913629 Why is this repeated across multiple section headings? On Section 5 it seems like rather than Purpose and Scope it seems like these requirements refer to Process.]]> 2019-04-11 18:16:41 UTC https://padlet.com/chris173/5dm6bby3e20z/wish/350913629 https://padlet.com/chris173/5dm6bby3e20z/wish/350914624 Having this in Section 5 so far removed from Sections 10 and 11 seems interesting.]]> 2019-04-11 18:18:25 UTC https://padlet.com/chris173/5dm6bby3e20z/wish/350914624 https://padlet.com/chris173/5dm6bby3e20z/wish/350915146 It seems like these requirements could be integrated into Sections 6 and 7. Unless there is a particular reason to separate them out here.]]> 2019-04-11 18:19:32 UTC https://padlet.com/chris173/5dm6bby3e20z/wish/350915146 https://padlet.com/chris173/5dm6bby3e20z/wish/350916179 This surprised us. We would think that the CMHC would need some data to carry out its responsibilities under the agreement. So this global statement that the CMHC will not download or save any of the data doesn't seem to fit. It also seems like Sections 10 and 11 would cover the concerns around data.]]> 2019-04-11 18:21:21 UTC https://padlet.com/chris173/5dm6bby3e20z/wish/350916179