https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw 皮卡皮卡 en-us 2022-05-19 14:15:39 UTC 2023-03-03 07:56:05 UTC hello@padlet.com Ivan_CYF https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214191546 2022-06-07 23:55:00 UTC https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214191546 Ivan_CYF https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214191627 2022-06-07 23:55:06 UTC https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214191627 Ivan_CYF https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214191716 2022-06-07 23:55:13 UTC https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214191716 Ivan_CYF https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214191799 2022-06-07 23:55:22 UTC https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214191799 Ivan_CYF https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214191903 2022-06-07 23:55:29 UTC https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214191903 Ivan_CYF https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214192067 2022-06-07 23:55:43 UTC https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214192067 Ivan_CYF https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214192704 2022-06-07 23:56:38 UTC https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214192704 Ivan_CYF https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214192812 2022-06-07 23:56:47 UTC https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214192812 Ivan_CYF https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214192895 2022-06-07 23:56:54 UTC https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214192895 Ivan_CYF https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214193173 2022-06-07 23:57:18 UTC https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214193173 Ivan_CYF https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214193264 2022-06-07 23:57:27 UTC https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214193264 Ivan_CYF https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214193363 2022-06-07 23:57:37 UTC https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214193363 Ivan_CYF https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214193636 2022-06-07 23:58:01 UTC https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214193636 Ivan_CYF https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214194003 Anna]]> 2022-06-07 23:58:34 UTC https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214194003 Ivan_CYF https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214194071 Zoey]]> 2022-06-07 23:58:40 UTC https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214194071 Ivan_CYF https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214229281 2022-06-08 00:37:38 UTC https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214229281 https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214638501 好的地方：总体写的还不错，语言通顺，运用了举例子的方法，事实生活写的不错。
缺点：这个题目是漫画的启示，建议多写点启示，加点其他的修辞手法！！！]]> 2022-06-08 07:25:50 UTC https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214638501 https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214648298 好的地方：语言搞笑，有趣，语言生动形象，结合生活实际写的特别好，运用了语言描写，对比，写的不错，继续加油！！！

缺点：把启示再多些点]]> 2022-06-08 07:34:41 UTC https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214648298 https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214654363 优点：故事很有意思，语言通顺，联系了生活中的场景
缺点：请注意断句！！读起来有一点点累]]> 2022-06-08 07:40:45 UTC https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214654363 https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214662945 优点：生动的写出了故事的内容，告诉了我们这个漫画讽刺的人，又结合生活实际告诉我们了它的道理

需改进的地方：忘记分自然段了！！！]]> 2022-06-08 07:48:35 UTC https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214662945 https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214976891 全文结构清晰，详略得当，生动描绘了种树场景和乘凉人的投机心态；又能联系实际，向我们剖析了漫画背后蕴含的哲理。]]> 2022-06-08 13:15:31 UTC https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214976891 https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214985237 本文选取的漫画很别致，寓意深刻，是一颇有潜力的题材。]]> 2022-06-08 13:21:49 UTC https://padlet.com/Ivan_CYF/5d1vaumgnx2wnltw/wish/2214985237