Hedy, Peter, Diego, Cindy by Peter Hennigar https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw Symposium on Chemical Reactions en-us 2019-03-11 00:46:56 UTC 2025-10-30 20:17:03 UTC hello@padlet.com phennigar1 https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/339770311 2019-03-11 00:46:56 UTC https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/339770311 The key note is clear, however I think you guys should read less and look at the audience more. Also the presentation was very long nad it got boring at the end. https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340706877 2019-03-13 03:49:00 UTC https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340706877 vanessapatzner https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340706918 I think you added really good vocabulary in your presentation and I liked how you guys interacted with the audience.]]> 2019-03-13 03:49:19 UTC https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340706918 vanessapatzner https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707211 Make sure you edit your slides, some words were incorrect. But overall I think you had very clear slides, it made the audience follow along easily.]]> 2019-03-13 03:51:16 UTC https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707211 https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707233 I think the presentation is good but maybe change the color of the text ]]> 2019-03-13 03:51:23 UTC https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707233 https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707248 You should have made the font color bright so the audience can see..]]> 2019-03-13 03:51:28 UTC https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707248 The keynote is very clear and the pictures help me understand the ideas better. However I noticed that all the group members were reading from their Ipads. https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707322 2019-03-13 03:51:54 UTC https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707322 23jr01 https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707407 I would suggest that you put less text on the slides so the audience can focus more on what you are saying.]]> 2019-03-13 03:52:40 UTC https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707407 vanessapatzner https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707417 Your data is very easy to read. I liked the way you structured it.]]> 2019-03-13 03:52:47 UTC https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707417 https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707488 I think you switched the formula for rate, since it’s mass divided by time]]> 2019-03-13 03:53:22 UTC https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707488 I think you guys should make the font brighter because it was really hard to see and read. https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707517 2019-03-13 03:53:37 UTC https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707517 https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707532 It is good to ahow the sample calculation, also i like how you linked ur hyphothesis with the data]]> 2019-03-13 03:53:44 UTC https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707532 caperhaven https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707535 I think that if you spread out your data onto more slides, it would be easier to understand, specifically with the change calculations ]]> 2019-03-13 03:53:46 UTC https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707535 caperhaven https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707537 I think that if you spread out your data onto more slides, it would be easier to understand, specifically with the change calculations ]]> 2019-03-13 03:53:46 UTC https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707537 caperhaven https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707539 I think that if you spread out your data onto more slides, it would be easier to understand, specifically with the change calculations ]]> 2019-03-13 03:53:47 UTC https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707539 https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707581 Maybe you should write key words instead of sentences.]]> 2019-03-13 03:54:05 UTC https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707581 https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707606 The math made it hard to follow and not as interesting]]> 2019-03-13 03:54:13 UTC https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707606 vanessapatzner https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707623 I think you guys should make the graph a little bigger, so the audience can see it clearer. But I think you should make more eye contact with the audience.]]> 2019-03-13 03:54:20 UTC https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707623 23jr01 https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707667 I really like that you included 2 graphs to help us understand your data.]]> 2019-03-13 03:54:30 UTC https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707667 The math of the data was really hard to fallow and the color of the graph was really hard to read. https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707760 2019-03-13 03:55:11 UTC https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707760 23yc01 https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707806 Your graphs are clear shown but it’s hard to see the words because of the dark background.]]> 2019-03-13 03:55:25 UTC https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707806 vanessapatzner https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707880 I think you should distribute the keynote more equally, to give other people from your group more of a chance to speak. Rather then one person speaking for a very long time.]]> 2019-03-13 03:55:52 UTC https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707880 I think the graph and the words are pretty clear. But please speak up. I think you guys should have the title clear because it can make people interested in your presentation https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707884 2019-03-13 03:55:53 UTC https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707884 23hc03 https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707944 Eye Contact]]> 2019-03-13 03:56:15 UTC https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707944 I think all of your group members should look at the audience more instead of always reading https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707973 2019-03-13 03:56:26 UTC https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340707973 caperhaven https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340708048 I think that presenters should look up at the audience more often ]]> 2019-03-13 03:56:51 UTC https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340708048 https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340708103 I like the different colors in the graph.]]> 2019-03-13 03:57:12 UTC https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340708103 vanessapatzner https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340708124 Your model was very clear and you guys gave good explanations.]]> 2019-03-13 03:57:20 UTC https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340708124 23hc03 https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340708169 Becareful for what words you use for your reasoning. Might give out the wrong idea]]> 2019-03-13 03:57:46 UTC https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340708169 23zj01 https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340708189 I think it would be better if you change the color of the background or the color of text]]> 2019-03-13 03:57:55 UTC https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340708189 23hc03 https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340708227 Your group gave alot  of statistical data and showed in a very clear way. Good job]]> 2019-03-13 03:58:16 UTC https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340708227 caperhaven https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340708238 I think that the bright colors help the models becuase they stand out]]> 2019-03-13 03:58:23 UTC https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340708238 vanessapatzner https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340708258 I think you should put less text on your slides. So the audience can focus more on what you are saying.]]> 2019-03-13 03:58:37 UTC https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340708258 https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340708285 I think you guys should let your other people spook up not just a single person ]]> 2019-03-13 03:58:48 UTC https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340708285 23iq01 https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340708290 I can’t really see the words because of the background.]]> 2019-03-13 03:58:52 UTC https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340708290 Sofie_Andreasen https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340708296 I think you should change the text color since it’s hard to read on the dark background. I also think you should make more eye contact when you are presenting. ]]> 2019-03-13 03:58:54 UTC https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340708296 23vk01 https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340708437 some models look wrong/weird. be sure to double check ]]> 2019-03-13 04:00:02 UTC https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340708437 https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340708464 The explanation of the process (how it bounded) is clear]]> 2019-03-13 04:00:17 UTC https://padlet.com/phennigar1/5cnsc4dr8zfw/wish/340708464